JULY UPDATE
🕑 Added 2024-07-29 16:41:07 +0000 UTCHere's this month's update of my comic, 12 new pages! I left a note at the end as well, please give it a read if you can ^^'
Comments
Patrick Maloney
This is some of the best paneling and pacing I've ever seen! These pages could be of great instruction to other artists!
pupperoni_pup
Honestly, I appreciate it more when there's a deep story! I think that's just a me thing though.
Arklos
Tatiana is so gorgeous~! Absolutely loving this comic so far!
Queertzalcoatl
Oh and if you don't mind wording nitpicks: it should be "broader and more diverse" instead of "more broader and diverse"
Queertzalcoatl
I think either subtle/subdued colors or a little face/expression would work well
Bayle Destroyer
Personally I like the one that has a pupil/reflection. I know it's technically more work but it helps him feel more alive.
SpiralVortex
Ahh I need more comics RAHHH
ah_hw
No worries dude I truly understand and hope you don't overdo yourself.
Heath Grace
As always, thank you for the kind words and support dude! :)
Heath Grace
Oh cool, that's a relief, no pun intended XD Thank you so much! I'll do my best with the next one! :)
Heath Grace
Happy to know I made your morning, lol. And thank you! The work continues~ :)
Heath Grace
They're the window into the characters soul, lol. Thank you ^^
Heath Grace
Thank you! Happy to hear it! ^^
Heath Grace
Thanks! The setup is always the tricky part for me... but I'm glad people are enjoying it. Thank you! :)
Heath Grace
Wow, thank you so much! ^^
Heath Grace
Thank you for the kind words. And thank you for the feedback! I do agree that the dialogues get confusing sometimes. I'll try to make it clearer in future updates... maybe different colors for the bubbles depending on who is speaking.
Heath Grace
Awesome! Thank you! ^^
Heath Grace
Thanks man! Happy to hear it! Honestly can't wait to show you guys more! :)
Heath Grace
Thank you very much! ^^
Heath Grace
Thanks dude! And no prob! Always a pleasure doing this XD
Heath Grace
Wow, thank you so much! :')
Heath Grace
Thanks dude! And same ^^
Heath Grace
Thank you so much for the kind words and the support, I'll do my best! :')
Heath Grace
Thank you very much :D
Heath Grace
Thank you very much! I definitely have a few ideas that I'd like to turn into full comics, some will be centered on new characters... maybe even in a different setting. I'd like to go nuts and play around... Of course I have to get this one done first ^^
Heath Grace
Thanks! Just as eager to see it myself honestly :)
Heath Grace
Thank you :D
Heath Grace
Thank you :) Ah yeah, I'm kinda torn between two different pupil types for Max so I'm leaving that as is for now until I make a decision ^^'. Will prob make up my mind by the next update.
Heath Grace
Thanks dude ^^ Yeah, definitely had fun drawing her. Hope to apply that more for her body language next :)
Heath Grace
Thank you! :D
Julian Fratzscher
And so it begins. Love it.
Marwin
Amazing beautiful stuff!! 🤩🤩 I love the fun expressions Tatiana made in a few of the pages, fun meme faces xD It’s so good to see your new style this time around, especially as a comic! 😄 can’t wait to see what else you come up with for these two
Bayle Destroyer
Nice. Max's eyes don't have much detail in some of the pages (like 12-15). Is that intentional?
Violet Rose in The Dark
Looks good so far.
Alex Stephens
I look forward to the next set of comic pages you make.
Emilio
Looking great so far! Obviously this is quite early on, and the focus is on these two subjects, but if you continue making comics like this I’d like to see more characters? Obviously that’s a good bit from now, but I think it’d be interesting to see multiple dynamics beyond just Max and Tatiana
YamiZero
Ahhh yeah! The dialogue flow is great and impressive visuals too!
Alphazan
This is amazing work! I love how the comic is coming along and I'm eager to see what happens next! And no worries about being slow to update. It definitely shows that you take your time and make amazing works such as this
Kodiak
Worth the weight, I look forward to these two's future
SumGhoul
Fantastic job and no worries about any delays or waits. I think your art style is very good and satisfying, and some lore always makes the smut hit harder so this set of pages being introductory intro type thing is all good! Always a treat when you post!
HydraXs
BRO IS COOKING. Nah just chill out and take your time, thanks for the amazing update
TacoCaps
This is beyond fantastic, Mojo. I can't wait to see where this leads!
rescopan
fucking amazing dude, just in these pages alone i see how much your style and facial expressions shine through, cant wait for the rest of this and the "fun stuff" ahead >:)
Yangboi
Overall good pacing and you can feel the awkward vibe from it. Which is want you want from a situation like this.
Queertzalcoatl
The setup is very good, take as long as you need with the exposition I think it just makes the lewd all the better The dialogue and narration all reads really well! The only thing I can think of is that I sometimes got confused who was saying what - I can tell that the speech bubbles don't have tails when it's someone not in-panel but it still took me a bit
Vulcan 653
I can say that I LOVE it, the style, the coloring and the story with the teacher that had me intrigued
MozaTheLoza
A good build up to lewd is always enjoyed and its nice seeing how it all got started
Olarson Domingo
Awesome! Thanks for the update and huge upload of this comic’s many pages. You got the right mindset where you don’t want to rush it or make it a slow burn. As always the colors and your character designs are pleasing to look at.
Manuel Gallegos
I love your art, but I also love the concept and work on this comic just as much. I got excited when you finally updated. I already relieved myself before getting this, so I'm glad it's not that heavy on NSFW. I hope you make your next comic strip your best and horniest work yet 👍
ah_hw
The comic is amazing and it went on with a amazing start and backstory of the main character and I love the idea of showing how everything started and I hope whatever personal things your dealing with I hope it goes down and hope your doing well.
Runus Brewblade
Now this was a great treat to wake up to today. The comic looks amazing and the pacing is perfect. Can't wait to read more!!!
Mofu
awesome! specifically love the way you draw eyes