Heath Grace
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🕑 Added 2024-06-29 17:25:04 +0000 UTCAlright here it is... so far.
Sorry if you guys were expecting more on the first month. Honestly I got stuck for quite a bit because I was too indecisive about what coloring style I wanted. I'm also trying to avoid rushing this so I'm taking my time with each pages and try to have as much fun as I can in the process. I feel this just leads to a much better result in the end.
That said, with the groundwork set, I'm expecting a much smoother progress going forward. Gonna have more pages done in the next one, working on the 4th page right away.
So going into this, I wanted to avoid exposition dumping and try to get a bit of the "action" on display. A little tease of the main course I guess to get the reader's attention. And yeah, as you may have noticed, I changed a bit of Max's character. Also, Tatiana is the one narrating the story. Let me know what you guys think so far.
Comments
Heath Grace
Hey it's cool :) I appreciate you leaving your thoughts so thank you very much!
andy mandy
I think this is a great start, I'm not great at making comments but I just like seeing the next development for those two
YamiZero
You really delivered a nice hook with the story. A great way to make the audience guess how Max and Tatiana even got together in the first place if they are going to do it in an empty classroom. Btw nice choice too. It makes it very risky of them to do it ^^
Heath Grace
I can't tell you what Max's voice sounds like at the moment. As for Tatiana, I imagine it to sound like Laura Bailey's
Jacob
What would Tatiana and Max voices sound like? I would like to know how there voices would sound so I could feel like they are telling me there story.
Heath Grace
Thank you ^^
Ivan Doe
Glorious work, Tatiana looks gorgeous as usual
Daemon Dilan
You're welcome!! I will continue subscribed to wait for more pages. Good luck!! :)
Heath Grace
I'm very much the same. Thank you ^^
Heath Grace
Thank you very much! Def a rollercoaster ahead, I hope you all enjoy it ^^
Heath Grace
Yeah 100 percent my fault. I'm sorry again for making you guys wait for so long. I'll do my best with the rest of the pages. Thank you for the patience and support this whole time, I really appreciate it :')
Heath Grace
Awesome! :D
Heath Grace
Sweet! Thank you very much! ^^
Heath Grace
Aw thanks man ^^
Heath Grace
Thanks dude!
Heath Grace
XD
Heath Grace
Just some tiny details like shorter bangs and sharper irises. And of course as Violet says. It's also possible that I may change a certain aspect of his character that may be substantial. I'm not 100% committed to the idea yet so I'm not ready to tell... maybe in the next few pages...
ah_hw
Wow dude this is amazing
Fiqures
Canβt wait to see those tits on full display
rescopan
i have yet to see this man miss, everything he posts is supreme π©
e2m8
classic max having to make up for missing penis inspection day
Violet Rose in The Dark
Good start to the story. No exposition.
Violet Rose in The Dark
No arm sleeves.
Seth Blackburn
What did you change about Max? I canβt seem to figure it out.
HydraXs
Bro cocked
Alex Stephens
This is really good.
Xander Deebee
nah sis a freak
Kodiak
SLOPPY THROAT GOAT YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Promethia
amazing!!
Queertzalcoatl
Oh good good, I love the opening but what I'm REALLY looking forward to is seeing them establish this relationship and how they start!
Daemon Dilan
Finally!!! After several months of waiting, it was worth it!! It's so good!! ππ
Sadchild
a very good start :^
Runus Brewblade
Now this is a great way to start a comic. Looking forward to more
FURIOUS
This is a perfect start to the story. And yeah, you def caught my attention XD
