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BoundByDuty Page 03 - Stages 4/4
🕑 Added 2023-01-23 03:24:19 +0000 UTCUpdate 2:
Shading added! Working on the finishing touches!
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Update 1:
Finished the base coloring and background design! Had some stuff to do with family during the weekend, but I hope to finish the page soon!
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Page 03 woohoo! As promised I decided to do a little change.
The original exposition story was told in 2 pages backflash scene, but I thought its better to keep it short. Maybe Chuckle's devious personality doesn't come through well without his dialogue but I think we all want to get to the "important" part of the story, right?
See you all soon!
Comments
RobCivecat
Heya Knight! Yeah, with this page being improvised the dialogue got a bit messy :D Thanks for the headsup! I think I only don't agree with the second one, as I feel like it fits better along the lines that "he plans something" is more of statement about him in general than a retelling of him actually planning something, but I go with your version just in case
JKnight97
Loving how the comic is progressing. A few typos/grammatical errors: "Whimpy" is spelt wimpy (panel 1); "...that he plans to do something... should be "...that he would have plans... OR ...that he planned... (panel 2); "...and all that got him a few extra..." should be "and all that got him was a few extra..." (panel 3)
RobCivecat
Thanks, I'm glad you like it! And yeah I noticed that mistake too after I made this post, thanks for letting me know :)
RobCivecat
Thank you! I'm happy how it turned out as well!
InTheLionsDen
Great expressions and action posing all around. I can almost imagine Judy in the second panel thinking "Really? When we're just snuggling Nick is more aggressive and threatening then this." Nick just isn't used to seeing it from a non-participating viewpoint. Also, third panel, a possible typo. IF => IS I believe "...SO ALL IF GOOD AT THE END." should be "...SO ALL IS GOOD AT THE END."
Mj111994
He face in panel 2 is absolutely adorable, loving this so far.
