Thoughts?
🕑 Added 2017-08-14 19:51:23 +0000 UTCNever put a lot of effort into the title page but I think I am going to start, open for feedback. This should get the point across of who and what this set is about without loads of text or cluttered images all over
Full image here:
http://erotic3dx.com/dc/TitleJPG.jpg
Comments
Didi & Nok' Tus
Looks pretty good. An old design strategy is to try and make all of the important type readable from a distance. That idea does, sometimes, conflict with style, though. I'd probably go for bigger type, perhaps placed differently to show the figures, and fewer bullets. And, of course, I'm not crazy about futa, though I love your work. ;-)
3Dzen
Thanks, yea that one was a good one
Calista
We've got high expectations. Your Home Invasion set was literally one of the hottest things I've ever seen.
SexBook _____ ADULT PHOTO AND VIDEO SIGNATURES
Brilliant work! I love it! (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ
fanof3dartoftheworld
i guess you will fix that when you finish the rest of the images
fanof3dartoftheworld
looks good. don't forget that image 44-45 are the same and image 52-53 are the same
Bob Fink
I like it a lot and think this will work perfectly!
Nebula77
Looks very good and professional. The short tags will help customers to get a grip what the set is about. Potentially you could add Futa on Girl and Deepthroat,
Magnus Carolinus
The Meow cap is great and really makes her look, but Teacher is the one that looks like she got the cream, (even if she didn't get the cream pie...)
3Dzen
thanks man, yea the Meow cap will stay even in future sets with her, its her signature :)
Jack Pinder
Like the title and followup. The meow cap is such a killer, love her questioning hurting facial.
Yay! :D oh yeah gotta have text
3Dzen
End of week not done yet
looks great. does this mean youv finished making the set?