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Faelwen and the Beast

🕑 Added 2016-11-06 20:58:35 +0000 UTC

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3Dzen

im on 65 now :) more to do ill sne dan updae out Friday

Pistons

Just 20-30 images left? Felt like it had just started... hmm... more sex, less teasing next time? otherwise great

3Dzen

thanks, yes the story is and has been done for some time so only some minor changes may be additional sex stuff bu tit won't get too dark to be honest. Yes, the dick props need more defined stuff in Vray - using displacement is not as easy/good as Octane a disp map covers the entire body Vs a selection tag (body part) so i need to look into that more.

Nebula77

Feedback: I like the set very much. The elf girl has a nice body and i specially like that you gave her breasts that suit her small frame (they are well sized but not huge unrealistic F melons). The combination of full text pages and the art/illustrations is a very nice concept and the writer is talented. Adds definitely spice to the set. For sure the following is up to the person who pays the commission so purely my opinion: I would have shortened the teasing by 1-3 pics to have a little more of the following action. In pic 39 the beast upper torso looks great with buklging muscles and veins. That I miss on his huge cock - a little more veiny would be nice. It is part of 3DX that girls get penetrated by unrealisticly large cocks without suffering horrible inner injuries (fine thats part of the fantasy) but the cock vs. girl size should not get more diverging before it gets comical. So cock size here is fine but should not get bigger;-) Ballsack is enormous - nice! Her facial expression in33b and 36 b isin my opinion too positive . she imprisoned and tortured that beast for weeks. When it broke free it was clear what it would do to her so normally there should be shock, fear for things to come and agony. You did a great job with these expressions in 28, 39, 41. More of these facial expression like the ones from you shades od darkness sets should follow for the rape because even if she wont be deadly injured it will be pain as hell. But again - this is up to the commissioning person to decide how hard/dark he wants this to become.

3Dzen

thanks man, 60% done

Jessica Charteris

Faelwen is a scrumptious little thing. Thank you kindly sir for a beautiful set.

Nebula77

His ballsack is amazing. I hope he cums first time when he forces her to deepthroat and drink that cum... Btw Tori, Mrs Nathalie or Maves balls could use an upgrade😈