Feedback please

3Dzen

Thanks man

3Dzen

Pull out couch and a King sized bed in the street ? ;) We will figure it out

Didi & Nok' Tus

technically: put some point lights in the jack o lanterns with no shaddow casting same for the lanterns... also some spot lights pointing out from inside the apartments (w/shadows) might be a nice touch might wanna take the main light down a bit cos it lights up the sidewalk too much top of fire hydrant suposed to be white? other then that, looks like a nice scene :]

Nebula77

I like the scenery but if all the action will happen there question is where. On the street, peasants walk illumination is good. If it will be in the Dark corners close to the stairs it will be too Dark to see something. Some fog as already proposed will add to the mood of the scene. I like the pumpkins🙂

3Dzen

:-)

Gyank1999

looks good cant wait for carina :)

Bob Fink

I like this scene very much, the detail is so awesome, I look forward to seeing you place a girl or two in there.

Jack Pinder

Looks like your getting some good professional feedback. All sounds good. Maybe some graffiti on the concrete wall behind the garbage. So far a pretty nice looking neighborhood. Need some true grim or you can save that for the people who will be there.

3Dzen

Think Silent Hill

Vernacular

Technically, the scene is just fine. But I question the practicality. A LOT of windows here. Lot's of residences to report to the cops of a sexual assault in full view. I dunno :\ Are there "trick-or-treaters" closing up for the night?

3Dzen

yep! Ill add HDRI in for that

3Dzen

thanks MAX i can do that an dye ano HDRI in yet.

egomaniacXFR

I would add a bit blue to the lightning because of the moon light you know. Like here I mean: <a href="https://imgjam1.jamendo.com/albums/s90/90653/covers/1.600.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://imgjam1.jamendo.com/albums/s90/90653/covers/1.600.jpg</a>

Max Smeagol

Good stuff! If I may, outside lamps usually tend to be brighter on this kind of setup. And oh, the dim blue from the moon. All in all, can't wait!

3Dzen

i may need a bit more light was my thinking the stairs are a bit dark, from this angle

Akagi

Looks good to me

Jake theberge

I'd need to know what the plot is and who will appear to give a 100% answer. On its own it looks good. It may need to be a little bit brighter depending on the characters appearance, like a darker skinned character may be harder to see.

The setting is perfect, just the right atmosphere has been created here, change nothing, bring the girl in and let the story begin....winks

I like it!