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Khemia Build 2 - Trust

🕑 Added 2025-01-04 10:18:17 +0000 UTC

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Hesrah

Not too sure if this has been asked, but is there a way to skip straight to the new sections? This last one made me play through the first episode all over again.

dipstik subaru

Has anyone found a work around for the android for Echo 65 yet? I really want to read it.

Wyatt Fons

okay, ive played the itchio release so im assuming its builds 1 and 2 put together? ive just subscribed again so hopefully this is on track and i didnt do it too hastily again

fengke

ohhhhhhh

Alexander Iversen

Question here who liked the old design of the character’s from Adastra

Perry the Political Platypus

Also I forget to mention this but after all this time I can safely say that the ost is still a 10

Perry the Political Platypus

Phenomenal work Echo Team! The reflection illustration is gorgeous, huge improvement from the original build. Also I noticed you guys made some adjustments to Scip's terror illustration, definitely the right move. His illustration from the previous build looked like something out of Looney Tunes imo. Can't tell you how hyped I am to see this VN finally progress!

Jalfred

The more this goes on the more I kinda hate the wolves... (MASSIVE SPOILERS BTW!!!) The wolves don't properly educate their children (Not the biological children but the ones they get from other planets) then they let the race that openly hates them(Omorfans) get EXTREMELY close to them to the point where one lives in the palace and dates one of the emperor candidates. THEN they do what Omorfa did to them to Khemia through Scipio. Their planet is also massively misogynistic and homophobic (they might be less homophobic now that Amicus is emperor but idk). They are extremely reliant on the parents and haven't really made any technological advances unlike the likes of Khemia. This isn't a critique of the writing by any means but I hate the Adastrans and the wolves in general Virginia is the only normal one (and Amicus to a lesser degree) I lowkey don't blame Alexios for trying to tear them down... anyway I loved the new build (I HATE SCIPIO THOUGH) I'm exited to see where it goes! ALSO GIVE MY GIRL MEERA MORE SPRITES SHE DESERVES IT!!! (FINAL THING where did you put Amicus' waist his body is so tea all of a sudden)

JohnWolfen

Thank you for reviving one of my favorite fvns! ❤️❤️❤️

OnyxMonolyth

I did not expect another update so soon!!!! I enjoyed it a lot, though I am sad at the loss of the weed panic attack.

Jojo6716

Yes just like build 1 but I assume APK's (the "exe's" for android in a way) are a pain to squeeze updates on, porting from a PC. So, can take a bit of fiddling.

Jojo6716

Lets Go!! This world has become such a special thing for me... I get so excited to see an update so I can jump back in~

IggyBear

Thank you so much for continuing Adastra universe, this is by far my favorite. :)

Xavier Redstag

Im so happy! I could sing and dance!

Lazurite

Excellent build! I didn’t notice any technical or writing errors, very polished! As before, I’ll start with the negative, and end with the positive. There’s not much to gripe about, so I’ll be a bit more petty. Spoilers below. Meera’s dialogue is surprisingly blunt and forward. Maybe that’s what you’re going for, but it does feel jarring, and dampens some of the intrigue. Maybe you could keep the content of what she says, but phrase it more mysteriously. Furthermore, I feel that Skip, Neferu, and Brunis are behaving too responsibly on the ship after Skip wakes up. Things resolve quickly, and it’s in-line with how three diplomatic adults would behave. However, like Meera’s dialogue before, more suspense could be built by being just a tad more ‘cagey’. I find saying “Astral Project” to be a bit forward for describing Aya’s supposed interaction. Maybe the phrasing could be a bit more coy and vague: “It’s possible she has these abilities, but I’m curious as to why she has never contacted me.” I still don’t enjoy Amicus’ new sprites, but I respect the creative decision and Haps' hard work. I’ll get used to it, and won’t mention it again. Overall, the writing is top-notch, indicative of a final product! For some extra garnish, more ‘Adastran’ terms could be used (I personally find ‘sounds like a plan’ very jarring, found near the end of the new content). Still I really appreciate the polish and changes around Amicus’ cursing, it’s so much more immersive! The new illustrations are gorgeous! 10/10, no other notes, amazing work Haps! Like I said before, the writing is a treat by itself. The pacing is perfect! It doesn’t dawdle or linger, and still allows you to savor every moment. In closing, this build is the best yet! It has far surpassed the historic build of Khemia, and I’m excited to see where it goes next! If ‘yall appreciate my feedback, I’d be happy to help the Echo Project with proofreading or writing. DM me if you are interested, and I can show you some of my previous work.

ABC

This was so good. I´m loving every single aspect of this new version. The scenes changed for this second update make sense and are super well written, and i cannot wait to meet ***!!! Scipio is deliciously twistedly written, and i cannot wait to see how he evolves.