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Dani's Daring Date pt.4-7
🕑 Added 2022-02-19 03:26:34 +0000 UTCThe bridge page is probably a little too wordy, it was worse before I edited it down to this. Hopefully the next pages will be more concise.
Edit: Had to fix some typos
Comments
Too wordy? Oh no, the dialogue lets the imagination run amok; the expectation as John heats Dani up...
GuardianLorian
So... John watched the video π Maybe it gave him some ideas π
RckyPtrn
I dunno, I'm a fan of the dialogue, but I'm a fan of your story blurbs and writing. I think it works well...shit's hot, yo...
