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When it Rains, It Pours

🕑 Added 2023-08-09 13:59:59 +0000 UTC

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Rachael Spencer

I started reading it on RR, and I was intrigued enough by his progress that I made a Patreon account specifically to read ahead. For me, I like the character development that you see in Simon, and the intrigue of what he'll find in the next level. I know he's stagnated in that regard, but it actually makes it more interesting watching him stay in lives for years, with different focuses each time. Your writing is also of excellent quality, so it's a pleasure to read.

Cruz115

Well, I'll be waiting to see what happens next, the only thing that I know is the fact that it will be great.

D. Winchester

And I get that too. I need a story to have real stakes, and that means some bad things have to happen (or credibly threaten to happen). You'll see in my next one. I haven't given up on my cyberpunk story, or any of the other ones I've mentioned, but I'm currently working on "Broken System" for Patrons to give me some feedback. I expect chapters 2 and 3 to be pretty dark... just not as drawn out as Death After Death. I'm going to try to alternate the good and bad a bit. We will see how it goes.

Cruz115

I'm a grimdark fan so i'm ok whit depresing things, but i guess that the casual Reader isnt really into it.


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