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Hard Enough - Chapter 360 - Intermission IV - Awakening from the dream

🕑 Added 2025-09-09 19:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Daniel Zellmer

TYPO “You run off and have a show young miss!” he ordered. Show ≠ Shower 🚿

angie bell

Lola's baby steps are coming along nicely, I hope she doesn't backslide!

conkerer

Love the depiction of NPD and how Lola is actively struggling with it but at the same time it's the thing that lets her cope with all the hurt inside her that she lies to herself to pretend it doesn't exist. Also the extra rendering of exactly why Lola and Flint fell in love is outstanding and extremely anime, of a chance meeting on the battlefield between the abused maniac pixie special forces human weapon and the young cadet putting on a brave face and finding out how much his principles really mean to him when all the cards are down and it's hell on earth. It gets the impression you've already outlined an entire prequel of Flint's backstory where he was the hero of that story. But unlike in the animes, it seems like even after the MC gets the girl, life goes on and they handled their respective traumas along with parenthood horrendously and messily.

Matt H

Speaking as someone who dislikes Lola on her best days and despises her on the rest: there's a difference between Lola being unpleasant as a character and her lowering the overall quality of the story. I can't say I'm looking forward to a grand redemption arc for Lola at this point, but I am willing to let her serve as something of a foil and/or whetstone for Brock and his family.

Robert Lemanski

Ugh, as usual Lola continues to actively lower this fic's quality every time she is on the screen.

Ixta

I'm so glad we got that mention of her going to therapy. It was badly needed.

Jericho Rising

I still dislike her, and flint for leaving brock out to dry for years with 8 children.

Tim

I have some theories about that... for one, I don't think Ash will be the one in the time loop. That said I do hope Ash is and does go to Johto.

Chris

I can't imagine that professor Oak will let Ash go to Orre, knowing that he needs to be in Johto to complete the stable Celebi time loop. That and Delia would raise hell. Seeing Jessie and Forrest in action was great, team rocket truly has hit the glow up

Thomas Keller

In a previous update it was revealed that Yuji is working with Team Rocket's new Corporate alias and they've provided him with some additional pokemon

HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan

Tediursa hasn't been visibly getting much training in the story so I kinda doubt it 😔

HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan

Ash: I want to go to Orre! Mom: You are, like, 12. No war zones for you. Ash: But I'm strong! I can beat a champion! Mom: Hmm... how about this? If you can beat Professor Oak's Dragonite you can go. Ash: That old pokemon? We got this in the bag Pikachu! *1v6 battle latter* Ash: O.O Ash's Pokemon: *swirly eyed* Dragonite: *not a scratch* Professor Oak: *not giving a fuck when losing this battle meant sending a child into a war zone* Mom: So! Next region is Jhoto then?

Simca

I’m…actually surprised Lola is getting character development! And very happy of it! I didn’t think I’d care much for her but she’s growing on me

Homeless One

Very slow steps from Lola, but the fact that she's taking them at all is a major win.

Boobby hill

Hmmmm I.wonder if blocks going to able keep his non interference as with a protagonist in the midst the war is very much lining up to be something pretty big The countdown is getting closer and it looks like Yuji is doing something curious Is he also a collaborator for shadow pokemon? Or perhaps helping purify them and thats where that walrein came from? Thanks for the chapter

Qweku_v

Thanks

Petrox

Yep. Ash can't be stopped like that. You have to get his mother. If he truly insist then what better than Oak to teach him what war truly is.

TexanWarrior

Holy s*** she's actually going to therapy? I honestly didn't expect her to. Lord knows she needs it. I honestly have no idea what a emotionally well adjusted Lola would be like.

ShinLupin

Forrest raises high! Hope he doesn't stumble into a personal crisis... Lola shows signs of change, small ones but they are there. Lets see how that develops. Ash goes to Orre, unless his Mom can outstuborn him. Maybe Prof Oak can say something or Gary. That said if Viva already has a plan for that then there is nothing that can stop that from happening.

Big ToFu

Well Ash is gonna Ash, mullish want to help or ego driven, who knows.

Alexander Gofric

Whoa what ash might be going to Orre? What about Johto!! I hope with his age they refuse his application. Also though given his aura abilities and likelihood of being able to connect with multiple types he would be amazing and purifying any remaining shadow pokemon in the region, of which there must be a large amount of given the leaders of cipher are still around in orre. Also with the orange islands winding down I really hope there is an opportunity for Brock to take advantage of the blood red moon to get a blood moon ursaluna!!

David Green

Tftc, You're really managing to get realistic character growth and interpersonal relationships down, congrats

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter


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