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Red Riot - Chapter 37 - Red honour
🕑 Added 2025-05-25 11:21:28 +0000 UTCMatsu Uzumaki:- person of high interest to other Shinobi Villages. Recently promoted Jonin. Medical/Taijutsu/Ninjutsu/Sensory speciality (Not that other villages know about two of these!) MC of the story!
Gengetsu Hozuki:- The second Mizukage and trickster Lord of Kirigakure. Master of Illusions and torment
Himeko - Kaguya clanswoman with her Kekkei Genkai, a Genin and renowned violence enthusiast.
Sharkbait - real name Kenta Nogawa, a Genin that trained with Matsu, skilled combatant, expert bait for sharks.
Idate Hozuki - student of Matsu. Hozuki clansman. Genin.
Kuroiwa Karatachi - student of Matsu. Karatachi clanswoman. Genin. Capitalist!
Midori Terumi - student of Matsu. Terumi clanswoman. Genin. Straightforward thinking lass with good intentions for most people!
Han:- orphan student of Matsu that is raised by his uncle. Civilian-born shinobi. Genin
Padme Dendenrashi:- Priestess who has a fetish for violence, specifically watching others fight. Her daddy’s rich, sadly and indulges her whims/budget. Was present for Matsu’s fight against Shibito
Ameyuri Ringo (the eighteenth) - the current wielder of the Kiba Blades. Short and aggressive! Family has a tradition of females retaining the same name to further their standing. Jonin of Kirigakure. Family has a certain naming tradition.
Koremei Tendo - the current wielder of Shibuki. Weapons mistress with a grounding in many styles. Preferred fighting style, Kenjutsu, Shurikenjutsu, and Taijutsu. She's a unit! Big girl! Almost died due to standard Kiri betrayal. Rolled a Nat 20 with her surviving throw, one could say, as Matsu witnessed the act.
Koda:- Jonin of Kirigakure and a Squad Leader. Bit stiff but looks after his own.
Uzuo:- Trap specialist Tokubetsu Jonin of Kirigakure.
Minato Namikaze:- Genin of Konoha, applicant at the Hot Springs Chunin Exams.
Mina Uchiha - Genin hopeful that has a secret second job.
Jiraiya:- the Toad Sannin. Known as a super pervert. Jonin of Konoha. Sensei to Minato and two others.
Tsume Inuzuka:- Genin of Konoha, applicant at the Hot Springs Chunin Exams.
Shibito: - Iwa shinobi that is involved in hunting groups of Kiri patrols. Encountered Matsu. Currently TK Jonin ranked. (Canonically supposed to die to Minato)
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The Village of Steam had set themselves up as a neutral entity for the sake of restarting the chunin exams.
They had mostly done this at the behest of Konoha but they were obviously hoping to earn huge profits with gambling and lodging expenses to make up for it.
Their greed presented itself in many forms, but for me, it was only a boon.
I’d exploited it already by dipping into their coffers with gambling, empowering my allies while also inserting more and more plants and spies throughout their Village.
Now it was time to use their greed for Midori’s sake.
Instead of hosting matches back to back, or spread throughout the day, the Leader of Steam had promoted the idea of hosting the semifinals after lunch and then again around dinner. That ostensibly gave the Chunin hopefuls time to prepare for the final match.
But more importantly, the nobles and various groups might not be eager to depart late at night.
At some point, greed gave way to stupidity.
They couldn’t be blind to the tension building since the other shinobi villages arrived.
There had been notable upticks in violence and injuries since then, and that wasn’t even taking the exams into account. There had been more than a few people that wandered further than they should have, only to be quietly dragged away by another shinobi.
It was all in the shadows though, where most people didn’t see it happen.
The Chunin exams didn’t always have that buffer, however. It was raw and in people’s faces.
When the Kamizuru clansman had been torn apart it had been gorey and more than a few nobles had suddenly understood that shinobi wore polite masks around them.
They’d eventually settled down, passing it off as nothing more than Iwa losing on of their only hopes of promotion.
If I could, I wouldn’t have cared about Iwa’s misfortune, but it hadn’t escaped my notice that Gengetsu had been particularly smug when I’d returned with Padme yesterday.
Mu had been still.
Far too still.
It reminded me of an eel waiting to strike.
I had to stay aware of Mu and Gengetsu, and watching Konoha kill one of the Iwa nin might have undone everything.
Thankfully, the Village of Steam wasn’t on fire or being laid to waste.
Yet.
Instead, we were all going about our business, in this case, that meant various people were preparing for lunch. It was a meal I hoped to use to my advantage.
I’d had all the civilian born nin that had come to Steam out and about for weeks now.
Some of them lingered on street corners, others flirted with maids, or ingratiated themselves with the locals, and some trailed potential targets of interest.
Over the last few weeks, I had been able to head out occasionally and gather certain titbits of information myself. With that and the earlier spies and plants that Akiko and I had established, I had a plethora of information.
The trick was filtering through it, which took tim,e but with enough intel, you could start to establish patterns.
Like how Minato had taken various Konoha shinobi with him to different restaurants each day, they hadn’t done all that much of interest initially, and with it happening in front of you, it would have been passed over.
A simple gathering of friends. Nothing all that peculiar.
But then he did it over and over.
Different restaurants and slightly different groups with overlapping shinobi drawn from a pool of candidates.
It was never those older than him by more than four to five years and never with Jiraiya there. It was all Minato, holding court.
And that seemed to be what he was doing. He’d talk with the group and in rare situations, introduce two people who seemingly had never met before despite being from the same Village.
He’d cover a range of vague interests himself, but he’d ask enough leading questions to draw his group in. This would help them bond with each other and enjoy each other’s company.
And Minato would sit there in the middle having facilitated it.
He never displayed this around any shinobi though.
Whenever another Village’s shinobi came within sight, he and the others would switch topics.
It was only thanks to the civilian plants that we were able to gather information about what he was doing.
He kept it very low-key and safe. He obviously knew that you didn’t talk about such iidentifying traits in front of other shinobi. They’d use it.
Thankfully, I had other options, like civilians who had been paid to listen to anything foreigners said around them. Some people feeding us information thought they were giving Steam Shinobi intel that could be used in the future.
They listened dutifully and fed the information along hours after closing, all the while thinking they were contributing to their own Village’s safety and security.
These were the sort of people that passed unnoticed by many, including shinobi.
It was thanks to them that I was able to drip-feed Minato information about various delicacies around the Village. These were small idle conversations that just happened to occur within earshot of Minato.
Talking about the sauces used in one place while a different man lauded the barbecue of another establishment, fish dishes or specialised steam buns all set up to waft past Minato and his group.
Initially, it became a bit of a game to do it with more and more degrees of separation.
I had found that in the Village of Steam it was rather easy to get people to do as you wished. Small suggestions or a fortunate note. They were all so… relaxed, and susceptible.
Not at all like Kiri civilians who harboured caution in their hearts.
To get them to buy a meal and have them take it with them? Child’s play. Letting them ‘sample the sights and smells often worked better.
Tsume Inuzuka being part of the group certainly helped.
Minato would lead a small cadre of shinobi to those establishments for any meal times. With that setup, I began to prime certain locations with informants, never the same faces, though.
Minato would walk in and be directed to bench seats in front of the servers or to tables that happened to project conversation.
Slowly, I learnt things about Minato and his friends.
Oddly, their conversations often had me curling my lip in disgust. So many of them appeared to have numerous interests. They would talk of shopping for dresses or bags or even small ornaments. They spoke of hobbies like tea ceremonies, calligraphy, or fine dining.
They had a spread of hobbies that made me green with envy.
These were not shinobi who had to fight for their place within the Village. These were pampered shinobi with time to spare.
To be certain of the intel I had procured, I tapped some of the cryptologists and intel specialists we’d brought to Steam the night before I set the plan in motion.
At first, they turned up their nose at the intel.
Then I told them what I wanted to do with it.
They rather liked the idea of poisoning a Chunin hopeful, especially one quickly becoming the favourite to win the final exam.
The specialists put me to shame with their inferences and intel teased from idle comments.
I knew that Minato was angling for the role of Hokage, but the specialists, without my knowledge, quickly began to flag Minato as a Leader candidate.
“Look here, how he’s leading conversations and establishing groups. He’s setting himself up as a little nobleman with a court. Must be angling for a high position, something that requires multiple Clans backing him up,” one man said as his eyes skimmed over report after report.
“Hmmm ANBU Commander?” suggested a woman as she arranged sheets before herself, trying to form a pattern from the various seating arrangements.
“Could also be the Jonin commander, or…” the woman shook her head. “It would depend on Jiraiya gaining the hat first,” she muttered.
I blinked. “What’s that?” I asked.
The woman glanced up at me, her eyes blinking rapidly. She seemed puzzled by my being there with them, despite my delivering the intel.
“Oh, it’s just that there has always been a direct link from Hokage to Hokage in the past. Shodaime was Hashirama Senju followed by his brother, then we got his student. Most likely, the course of the hat from there is either another Sarutobi or one of his students. Most people are tracking Orochimaru but Tsunade is also another strong candidate due to her lineage and her sensei,” replied the woman.
“But if Jiraiya were to take the hat, people would start considering Minato, no?” I prompted.
The woman nodded her head quickly. “Indeed!”
The man snorted. “You’re extrapolating from too little data. It could go to another entirely. Also, I don’t buy the whole inheritance story that Hiruzen and his friends cooked up for the Daimyo and the rest of the Village. They were supposed to be his guards, and yet they survived, and he died? Yeah, don’t buy into it!”
The woman sighed. “I’m working off the data I have, and it fits with idiotic sacrificial tendencies that Konoha shinobi are known to exhibit. They get weird like that!”
I hummed in thought. I hadn’t ever heard people talking about it in that regard but I suppose having the students who were supposed to be Tobirama’s guards suddenly return with their sensei dead and one of their own announced as the successor.
It did paint a very odd picture. How did the Senju react to the story? How did the Daimyo react?
I shook it off before coughing. “So, my plan?” I suggested to get things back on track.
The pair of intel specialists glanced up at me. “Hmmm? Oh! The plan to poison the kid.”
“The kid from Konoha!” agreed the other.
I resisted the urge to pinch the bridge of my nose.
Intel specialists were a bit… different from the usual shinobi. I suspected it was because they were too stuck in their heads. Considering their ages, they had to have survived the graduation process on merit somehow, or else they were people who got through thanks to connections.
I nodded. “Yes, that plan.”
“Eh, it should work,” replied the woman as she returned to shifting pages around.
I sighed and glanced around. “Can I get those sheets back?” I asked.
Both of them glared at me, and I think the kunoichi was halfway ready to fight to the death then and there over the idea that I’d take away her pages.
I decided to let them keep the pages of intel.
I had an idea of how they survived graduation.
Someone had thrown a book into the ring and told them the others wouldn’t let them read it, and then nature had taken its course.
I set to work, knowing I’d need to be lucky for the timings to work out properly.
The first step was the handoff of the poison I’d secured.
I’d spent half an hour with the poison specialist explaining that no, I did not want the boy dead, merely hampered.
They’d stared at me like a normal person would if you told them you killed their pet. The only difference was I suspected this shinobi wouldn’t have minded as long as you did it with poison.
I wasn’t sure if they kept records on previous graduations, but I suddenly wondered if reading such reports would be a good idea. How many monsters were walking around Kiri?
Probably more than I liked to admit, I thought, as I inspected the poison meant for a boy that was standing in my way.
I handed the poison off at a dead drop with instructions on what to do with it.
From there, it traded hands until it reached a very specific restaurant, where a server spread the liquid into a particularly pungent dish.
I sat back as other tendrils came to work, nudging Minato and his fellows into action with happenstance and subtle hints. Never anything overt and it would take the same person time to backtrack that there even had been anything more at play than people going about their lives.
When Minato arrived at the restaurant, the dish was already prepared for him.
I couldn’t get too close to the restaurant lest I be linked to it more than I likely would be.
I couldn’t see if it all went to plan.
I could see that none of the other genin and chunin Minato brought with him were getting agitated. That had to mean something right?
Surely they’d be more reactive if something had been picked up.
I leaned back in my chair and exhaled slowly. It was frustrating not being able to trick him into drinking it myself.
Part of me wished I had more time for this plot. Thanks to earlier work, I had a lot of support in place, but this still felt entirely too slapdash for my sensibilities.
I wouldn’t be confident in how it would turn out until Minato worked his chakra coils, which most likely wouldn’t be until the match with Mina Uchiha.
Interestingly enough, he wouldn’t be as hampered as I might have assumed for that match, as he’d invited her along to dine with him before their match.
I wasn’t sure of the politics at play, but I suspected it said more about Minato’s charisma than anything else.
Those intel analysts didn’t understand how close they’d come with their predictions. I kept their names and faces in mind for the future.
With the poison hopefully delivered, I slunk away to talk with Midori. For all the good it would do to poison Minato, Midori still had to beat an Aburame. We had a plan in place, but that didn’t mean I could neglect her final preparation.
I returned to our home base and spent the last hour before the fights with Midori.
We didn’t talk about the coming match, but I did have her lie down so I could continue working on her chakra coils. It wouldn’t produce any noticeable benefits for the fight, but she found it relaxing.
When it was time for the fights, I once more took up my position in the above railings, watching as the exam proctor announced the first match.
Interestingly, there had been a change in the format.
Midori was going first.
I glanced towards where Minato and Mina Uchiha were.
Both were looking sickly, and they were being fussed over by their sensei. I frowned. They shouldn’t have any signs like that. Was this sabotage from my poisoner? Or was this Konoha’s treatment method to expel the poison from their systems?
This wasn’t how things were supposed to have played out.
They weren’t supposed to have discovered the poison until too late.
Then again, no plan survived contact with the enemy.
Konoha was flexing its control of the matches, which was the only reason I could think that Midori would fight first.
The trick would be if they could heal or flush it before then.
Thankfully, nothing I’d seen or heard indicated that Tsunade was here. If she had been I wouldn’t have attempted this plan.
I watched as Minato and Mina were fed charcoal and the occasional purgative, which caused them to spew into buckets while their sensei watched on.
At first, both appeared doubtful of each other, only to scowl.
With eerie synchronisation, they turned and stared at me.
I met their suspicious looks with my doubt.
They wouldn’t find a flicker of guilt from me.
Jiriaya continued to stare while the other Jonin clicked his tongue and turned away.
I drummed my fingers in annoyance before deliberately turning my attention to Midori’s match.
An Aburame was frankly an annoying foe to face.
You had to assume that the instant they stepped onto a battlefield their kikaichu were mobilising, if not already mobilised.
We weren’t allowed to prepare the field before matches but Aburame would be able to sneak their insects in, I had no doubt.
It would be up to Midori and the jutsu she’d had since I took her on as a Mudanin. She hadn’t been good at it back then, but a lot could change with—
“I forfeit!” announced the Aburame within seconds of stepping on the field.
Everyone stilled.
That… I hadn’t been expecting that…
The Aburame boy turned and bowed to Midori and then the proctor. “Apologies, but I used much of my swarm to defeat my opponent yesterday! I could fight you, but any more damage to my swarm would take months or longer to see my swarm return to anything viable for missions.”
He turned and offered a bow to the Hokage, who nodded in return.
Gengetsu openly sneered, but I could see the glint of amusement in his eyes as they darted to that of Minato and Midori.
I could only gape. Had no one told him about Minato and Mina’s state? That his forfeit wasn’t just his own retreat but that he was setting them into a bad situation?
Intel that I’d gathered on him flickered through my mind. He’d had a sensei, but the man had been standoffish with Jiraiya.
Was this internal Konoha infighting? That… I hadn’t expected that.
No one else had, as the nobles all groaned, and I spotted Hiruzen glance towards the suddenly far less smug Jonin.
I suspected that the bookkeepers had just done very well for themselves.
Midori, dumbfounded by this result, offered her opponent a bow as the match was called in her favour. She glanced up at me and mouthed a question, but I just waved her off. Sometimes you just got lucky.
I had to admit, it felt weird.
The Exam Proctor was quick to summon Minato and Mina down for the next match
Neither arrived, and a stir went through the crowd.
Hmmm, intentionally delaying? I mused as I watched a kunoichi working over Mina while Minato waited, still looking sick.
So they were prioritising Mina over Minato eh?
Jiraiya looked mutinous as he glared daggers into the back of the healer's head, but they didn’t mind, merely continuing to heal Mina, who was looking marginally better.
“Konoha! Send out your fighters! Or I will forfeit both contestants!” snapped the Proctor.
I held back a scoff. That was a hollow threat, and everyone knew it.
Steam had invested too much in getting people to stay. Konoha not getting a chance to field their shinobi would lead to resentment. It might not be Steam’s fault, but it would be their shame. nevertheless.
The Proctor understood this moments after he’d said it, as his face twisted into an ugly expression, only to curse. “You have five minutes before both are forfeit!” he snapped.
He even drew out a small sand timer and set it on a raised stone plinth.
Everyone’s eyes locked onto it.
My attention turned away from the theatrics below and instead to the crowd, where I was watching their reactions. Koremei, Padme, and her father had all departed yesterday.
Interestingly, I could spot some other faces that I’d grown used to seeing were also vacant.
I made notes of them for later use. It was worth knowing who Lord Dendenrashi would shelter in a bad situation.
The sand continued to pour, and as we approached its running out, a hush fell over the building as the proctor leaned down to inspect it.
Jiraiya, having only just gotten Minato in front of the healer, cursed and leaned in to give his student some final advice. Then he nudged him.
Minato stumbled, looking lost and vulnerable. Something about his expression tickled my mind, though. He was faking it… Wasn’t he?
I almost felt bad, but then I hardened my heart and watched Mina stalk onto the battlefield with a murderous expression. Her eyes were already blazing red, and she glared up at me.
Oh? Looks like someone’s been running their mouth.
I felt the chakra slam into me as my world shifted. AI found myself standing on red and black kaleidoscope world that was entirely barren plain. Across from me stood the only other occupant of this world.
I locked eyes with Mina Uchiha who sneered at me.
“You must think youself—” Yeah, no, I thought to myself.
I flexed my chakra, and the illusion shattered like glass in the grip of a giant.
Without a second to question the intelligence of what I was about to do, I stabbed my chakra into her and cast my voice.
“You tread into deep waters wearing your ignorance as pride,” I whispered into her ear.
With my message delivered my chakra vanished from her coils.
Mina was left staring up at me in shock.
The Proctor blinked and glanced at me. I smiled innocently back, and he swallowed nervously as he turned away, no longer willing to look my way.
Huh, nice to have confirmation that all the training I’d been doing with Gengetsu had benefited me.
Then I noticed the rest of the Konoha shinobi’s reactions. Many of them looked at me like I’d just confirmed their suspicions.
Minato was watching me, and I could see his eyes flicking about me documenting every little detail he could.
So, this is how one becomes a Villain?
I didn’t say anything to deny what I’d done now or prior to the match. Konoha had already made up their minds, so there would be no point.
The fact that I’d struck back at Mina was enough for some of them to see me as in the wrong. I merely sighed and flicked my fingers dismissively.
I’d be lying if I said I wasn’t bothered by their reactions. There were people down there I’d grown up in my first life as examples of badass shinobi.
Men and women of substance.
And here they were judging me.
It stung. Only a little, but it was still there.
Then I pushed the pain away, rejecting it. They knew nothing of the road I’d had to travel to get here. I’d done what I had to give my student a fighting chance.
She hadn’t been nurtured in a safe and supportive environment. She didn’t have a Sannin backing her up. She hadn’t been handed a summoning jutsu.
She had Kiri, me, and whatever teachings I could garner for her.
I would not regret boosting her chances.
Her success meant things could improve for Kiri.
I’d poison Minato all over again if I had to for that.
The proctor finally got on with it, raising his hand and slashing it through the air. “Begin!” he shouted.
Mina exploded forward, kunai launching out as she closed with Minato.
Minato retreated, flicking kunai back with the clang of metal hitting metal to show that they’d neutralised each other.
Mina kept pushing, though, focusing on ending this match as quickly as possible.
It made sense. The faster she could finish, the faster she could recover. Whoever had been healing the two had spent most of their efforts on Mina.
Minato staggered under the onslaught, darting this way and that, only to be hounded back.
More than a few of his kunai bounced erratically, and occasionally, he had to block with a kunai only to have it sent skittering off.
Mina finally closed enough to throw a punch that smashed through Minato’s paltry defences. Minato was launched into the air, and two more kunai clattered to the ground.
“A-activate!” Minato wheezed while soaring through the air, his hands forming a chakra formation seal.
Mina stiffened and her eyes flitted to the kunai that Minato had dropped, only for the seals to fizzle and for nothing to happen.
Minato hit the ground and rolled. “Damn it!” he growled.
Mina relaxed and gained a little more confidence.
I narrowed my eyes and began inspecting the kunai a little more closely. Minato could channel chakra so activating a seal shouldn’t have been an issue. It was control that he was lacking right now…
Mina sprinted at Minato, only for Minato to flick out four more kunai and smile at her.
Mina tried to skid to a stop, but it was already too late.
With six kunai embedded around her, Minato flexed his chakra properly and activated a small seal.
Mina found herself suddenly in the middle of a wave of explosions that only radiated inwards.
I hummed. Clever. It was like he’d laid claymores with directed charges instead of the standard explosion tags.
When the smoke settled, Mina was revealed on her face and smoking slightly.
Minato grimaced and shot me a reproachful look. I stared back blandly. Yeah, don’t blame me for your methods of bringing her down.
I had to give it to him though, if he hadn’t done anything, he’d have looked bad in front of his fellow Konoha nin. By looking up at me, he’d reminded them of their earlier ire and redirected some of his own issues.
The kid was dangerous in more ways than one.
Mina was quickly cleared of any lasting injuries with the medic pulling her over to begin working on her while Minato presented himself to Jiraiya with a downcast air.
I rolled my eyes. Kid was selling the act well.
I glanced towards Gengetsu, who looked extremely pleased with himself. Hirzuen looked intrigued by how things were playing out. Reto and Ei the second, appeared neutral, but Mu looked like a statue.
He had a stillness about him that made me think of sudden, unstoppable movement.
Before the proctor could announce the intermission, Mu stood, and everyone fell silent as his chakra washed over the stadium.
“I find this farce sickening. Konoha, Kiri and Kumo have obviously tainted the supposed neutrality of the Chunin exams!” he proclaimed. A few nobles that must have been slow on the uptake gasped at this ‘reveal’. Otherwise faked shock. A few shrugged as though to say, ‘and?’.
Mu gestured towards where the Leader of Steam was seated with the Daimyo of other nations and flicked dismissively. “I have borne this insult long enough, but I tire of the rank greed you display. Begin the final match now!” he commanded.
The Leader, called out like he had, stiffened.
Then, tellingly, he flicked his eyes to Hiruzen, Ei, and Gengetsu, looking for assistance.
Before Hiruzen could speak Ei snorted. “Eh, he’s out of line, but he’s not wrong. You’ve made a farce of this exam by dragging it out. Shinobi are meant to endure hard times! Give us the fight now!”
Gengetsu flicked me an amused look. He knew what I’d done and how Mu’s annoyance was playing into our favour.
I don’t think Mu cared. He wanted to get to what happened after the exams were concluded.
Reto leaned back, amused at how things were progressing.
Hiruzen didn’t have to look towards Gengetsu to know what he thought; he merely glanced towards Minato and Jiraiya who were imploring him to delay.
Hiruzen tapped the armrest of his chair once, twice, thrice. With each tap, his chakra pulse,d and the other Kage turned to inspect him.
“I see that patience for many has worn thin. The differences in how another nation conducts their Exams have grated on you, and you find yourselves unable to adapt.”
Ah, he was throwing it back in their faces, was he?
None of them flinched.
Ei outright sneered. “Eh, I think I’ve endured enough. Give the people what they want! Let’s see them fight now, and then we’ll give promotions to those who deserve it!”
Gengetsu bobbed his head up and down in agreement, his pompadour hairstyle bouncing with the motion.
Mu flexed his fingers. “The fight begins now, or Iwa and its nobility will withdraw now.”
One or two nobility spluttered at this but Mu glanced in their direction and they fell silent.
The Leader of Steam grimaced as murmurs from various nobles began.
While some had been swayed by Hiruzen’s words, more were getting antsy. They wanted blood. They’d been offered fights, and to have things end as quickly as they had for two matches, with a forfeit and another quick trap, had surprised them and left them wanting more.
The Leader of Steam made a gesture, and the proctor bowed his head.
“It is the people’s will that the fight between Minato of Konoha and Midori of Kirigakure begins now!”
This raised a cheer from the crowd.
Minato swallowed. Jiraiya once more leaned down and whispered in his ear. I caught something being handed to him, but couldn’t catch what it was.
Midori glanced up at me one last time for a sign of how to proceed.
I nodded and raised a fist in salute like I had done back at the Skull Cliffs when I’d been motivating my students.
In a synchronous motion, Kirigakure Shinobi hroughout the building copied me.
It wasn’t just the civilian-born shinobi either.
Every Kirigakure shinobi, clan or otherwise, copied me.
Midori blinked in shock, then a quiet, “Heh!” caught everyone’s attention.
Eyes turned to find Gengetsu with his fist raised. For a full second, he looked regal, but then he smirked, and the effect was gone.
Still, the effect was widespread. Nobles were whispering, Konoha was shifting.
And Midori strode forward with all of Kiri at her back.
The tide was rising.
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Midori’s mind raced. That… that wasn’t something she’d ever expected in a thousand years to happen. Everyone had acknowledged her.
Midori locked eyes with Minato, which was a relief. If it had been Mina Uchiha she wouldn’t have, but then again her sensei had been adamant that Minato was the threat, and once more he’d been proven right.
Minato was the threat. He had Toad summons, Sealing jutsu, taijutsu, speed, and a dangerous mind that she’d seen in effect for quite a while now.
She felt almost lacking in a way.
She’d had to have her sensei even the scales by poisoning Minato.
Still, you took the situation before you, not the one you desired or wished for.
Midori began to bounce lightly, rewarming her muscles and getting her weight shifting so she was ready.
Across from her, Minato smiled politely. He had a handsome face, she idly noted.
It would be a shame when she broke it.
It may be cathartic.
The proctor inspected both of them and raised his hand.
Minato gave her a small nod as he shifted into a chakra channelling handseal.
The proctor paused, which only played into Minato’s gambit better.
Minato wasn’t performing a move; he was preparing to perform one. The proctor realised this a moment later and slashed his hand down.
“Begin!” he shouted, and Midori accelerated into a headlong sprint.
She didn’t go for a shunshin immediately as she wanted to see Minato’s reaction. Committing to a blind strike wouldn’t work on someone ready for them.
Minato, rather than trying to throw kunai or lay a trap for her with seals, began to glow blue.
Damn, that was always a warning sign.
Instead of controlling what he was doing, Minato went the other way, dumping everything he had into the next jutsu.
His hands blurred, and he knelt. “Summoning Jutsu!” he roared as he bit open an old cut on his finger. Blood sprayed out, only for Minato to slam his hand into the ground, and a circle of text appeared for half a second.
Midori was close, close enough to be blown backwards as a huge smoke cloud erupted from the point of sealing and something big thumped onto the ground.
Midori threw herself backwards and gritted her teeth.
Damn, he’d gone there.
Matsu had warned her that Toad summons had some strong fighters. Summons that were as big as some of the tallest buildings within Kirigakure. It was all a matter of the amount of chakra that Minato could use.
Thus the importance of disrupting Minato’s chakra control so he wouldn’t feel comfortable relying on summons.
The problem was that a rat, when cornered, will often turn to desperate measures.
The chakra smoke cleared, and Midori decided to focus on the good news.
Minato hadn’t summoned something bigger than a building.
He hadn’t summoned anything beyond a huge plume of chakra smoke.
He’d flubbed the jutsu.
“Shit!” Midori cursed, regretting her decision to back off.
You never wanted to give someone who had demonstrated tactical brilliance a second of downtime. That stunt might have cost Minato a lot of chakra but there were ways to get it back, and she’d seen the pill bottle Jiraiya had handed off to Minato.
Pills that she did not have.
She unsealed a large fan that she’d bought months ago to help propagate her Clan’s jutsu from a shop selling ‘shinobi goods’. It was a glorified noble’s tool, but it could move air fast.
Midori lifted it over her shoulder and swung it hard.
The surrounding air whooshed away, and a solid path of smoke cleared away, revealing Minato crouching with a corridor of explosive tags leading up to him.
She returned the fan to a storage seal and started throwing kunai at the blond leaf nin.
Minato darted to the side blindingly fast, displaying a speed that he’d only hinted at in previous matches but that Matsu had made sure to highlight.
He was fast, but Midori wasn’t intimidated.
With him in motion she performed a shunshin on an intercept course, bringing her kunai up to deflect a barrage of kunai that came at her landing point, only to flip backwards as an explosion tag landed at her feet.
With the explosion knocking her backwards, she lost sight of Minato for a second.
But he also lost sight of her hands.
Midori flashed through handseals.
When she began as a Mudanin, she was terrible at her Clan’s jutsu. Compared to others in her clan, she was still bad, but right here and now, it was good enough.
She landed and exhaled a huge stream of mist into the air.
“Boil Release Skilled Mist Technique!” she thought to herself as she pushed her chakra through her mouth, unleashing a light mist that didn’t look all that intimidating.
It still had Minato backing up as it enveloped the battlefield.
He raised his head and began sniffing like a ninken only to flick his hand a moment later.
The sound of metal whistling through the air caused Midori to kneel as a trio of kunai sailed through where she’d been moments before.
She noted the tags on them were each fizzling as they passed her.
The crowd above her gasped in shock as some of her mist drafted upwards a light breeze started circling the metal railings.
Whoops! She’d forgotten about them!
They were just lucky that her Boil Release was only strong enough to sting the eyes and exposed skin. She had a cousin that could use his Boil release to eat through metal.
Thankfully, it had proven strong enough to disrupt the seals on Minato’s tags. Both the ones he was throwing, and the traps he might have already laid.
Midori stood and channelled chakra into her lips and nose as she took a fortifying breath.
Right, that was Minato’s explosive seals and his ability to summon a Toad. Time to close out this match she thought to herself as she sprinted at him.
Minato drew out a breathing mask that he slapped into his mouth. He had just enough time to take a huge breath before Midori was on him.
They began a frantic bout of taijutsu with Midori on the offensive, throwing jabs and feints in equal measure, only to tank a feeble-looking blow and clock Minato in the face.
She then slipped in close to tangle her legs in his and bring him down, a hand slipping into her kunai pouch as she did so.
She leaned in to put the blade to his neck as he fell, only for him to suddenly surge with chakra and vanish in a huge puff of smoke.
Midori coughed in surprise, only to growl.
Damn it! She’d almost had him!
She whirled, seeking him only to find him struggling to get up. It seemed his desperate, uncontrolled replacement had seen him landing awkwardly. He’d done something to his right arm.
She leapt at him only for Minato to snap up and meet her charge with a powerful kick using his whole body to empower the blow.
Asshole had bluffed being injured!
Rather than attempt to block, Midori used one of her sensei’s tricks to shoot two thin chakra strings into the ground and tug herself out of danger. She hit the ground, skidding past Minato on her knees.
As she passed him she swept her kunai in low and caught him in the calf.
“Gah!” he shouted as she tore through his mesh underarmour. He swung down, and from her compromised position, it was all she could do to skip away.
Minato threw something into his mouth and crouched down.
Instantly, his skin turned red, and surge of blue chakra billowed around him.
Shit! He was getting desperate!
Minato knelt flicking his hands desperately through handseals as he used the blood from his calf to complete the summons jutsu.
Midori didn’t back off this time, instead trying to close and end the match.
This time, Midori was caught mid-leap as something answered the summons.
Midori landed and found herself facing a toad four times her height and with a huge belly. Its tiny legs looked incapable of carrying its weight, but its eyes were locked on her.
“You need help with her?” rumbled the toad to Minato who was kneeling atop the Toad’s head.
Minato nodded, unable to talk because he was biting so hard into the breathing mask. Tears were streaming down from his eyes.
Midori cursed, wishing not for the first time that her Clan jutsu was more potent.
Before she could lament her missed chances any more, the Toad opened its mouth and a tongue shot out and wrapped around her torso.
She had a second to realise what was about to happen before suddenly being dragged into a toad’s mouth where she was encased in squashy, wet walls.
Then the toad closed its mouth, and Midori found herself in a nightmare of flesh and darkness.
“Do you—” Minato hacked a cough as the acid burned his mouth. “Surrender?” he wheezed.
Midori couldn’t see him, but she wanted to glare at him.
Fuck him! She wasn’t giving up!
She put both hands to the side and began to pump one furiously back and forth.
She’d only pulled this off once before, but she’d cracked the code with that success.
If you used two hands you could stabilise and push the power of the jutsu higher.
A huge Rasengan formed in her hand, easily the size of her head.
She gleefully twisted in the fleshy embrace and slapped it into the top of the mouth.
A second later, she was expelled out, and she slid across the floor as the toad slumped to the ground.
Blood and chunks of flesh rained down around her.
Midori staggered to her feet and found Minato sitting on his backside, covered in gore, staring at the now very dead toad.
“Gama—” Minato started to shout only for Midori to shunshin in close and place a kunai right against his throat.
She glared at him hard. “Give me a reason,” she growled, ignoring the way something wet slid down her face even as she gave the warning.
Minato stared only to shift and look at her blankly. “You killed him…” he whispered.
Rather than respond she twitched her kunai and cut Minato to remind him of his position. Now was not the time for questions but for surrendering.
Something in Minato hardened at that moment, and Midori knew he wouldn’t go down quietly.
They twitched, only to find two other forms looming over them like they’d always been there.
Midori had her arm clasped in a giant man’s grasp, while a much smaller hand lay atop it.
Another small hand lay on the giant man’s chest.
Jiraiya, her mind supplied.
That was the giant…
Although some considered him a bit of a kook, Matsu treated him with respect. He didn’t even sneer when referring to him as one of the Sannin.
Matsu himself was dwarfed in his position, standing calmly iin frontof Jiraiya, but he didn’t look scared.
He met Jiraiya’s angry look with bland indifference.
“Let. Her. Go,” he calmly stated, meeting Jiraiya’s eyes as a small groan of leather sounded out.
Midori swallowed unable to look away as Jiraiya narrowed his eyes only to exhale through his nose. “She was going too far,” Jiraiya declared.
“He wasn’t accepting his situation,” Matsu replied without missing a beat.
Jiraiya flicked his eyes about. “She killed his summons. He wasn’t thinking right.”
“He should have considered that before summoning a companion to fight his battles. And I better not so much as hear a croak around her. If you have to remind the Toads that when you fight you often get hurt.”
“Hmph!” Jiraiya huffed and let Midori go.
Midori stepped back into Matsu, who moved with her. The warmth of his body was a silent reassurance that he had her back.
Minato stayed kneeling, his eyes still pouring with tears like small rivers. He watched Midori and Matsu back up another step, and Midori felt something tightening in her gut as Minato’s eyes narrowed.
Well, she’d just made an enemy for life, it would seem.
She was about to ask her sensei to get her out of there, only to stiffen as the Exam’s Proctor spoke up. “The victor! Midori Terumi from Kirigakure!”
Matsu stepped out from behind her and took her hand in his. He ignored the gore that covered her and instead raised her hand high to the applause of nobles that surged as Kirigakure shinobi started to clap along with them.
They kept it refined and polite but that they applauded at all was notable.
The Proctor then announced that specific candidates from the Shinobi Villages would be honoured with promotion to Chunin.
“From Kirigakure! Midori Terumi, Han, Idate Hozuki, Kenta Nogawa, and Daito Igara!”
Midori gaped. That was three of their four-man team elevated to Chunin, with Kuroiwa probably not getting a promotion due to not making it to the third stage. Kenta… Sharkbait got through, and so did Daito? That made five of the twenty that made it through!
Matsu had also stated that others would be promoted upon their return to Kirigakure, but that for now the internationally acknowledged Chunin would have their time in the sun.
Han started to twitch.
Idate slapped him on the shoulder. “Stop crying, you’re making us look bad idiot!” he growled as two shinobi from Kumo were read off as Chunin.
Han coughed. “Just got something in my eyes, is all.”
Midori chuckled, still feeling delirious that she’d won.
Both Steam and Suna had two shinobi promoted which seemed odd as only two had made it to the third round proper…
Rain received a promotion, with Han glaring at them.
When Iwa only had one Genin promoted Mu rose and stalked away.
Midori swallowed as Gengetsu continued to applaud the decision long after it was polite to, his mocking claps filled the arena and felt like drums of war rather than praise.
Neither Key or Beast received a promotion.
Konoha… received three promotions with Minato, Mina, and the Aburame she should have fought in the semifinals all stepping forward.
Midori stared up at the crowds of nobles as they applauded her and her fellows one more time.
Knowing you would never be in a situation like this again was rather strange.
As everyone departed the stadium,, she idly toyed with the storage scroll containing her Chunin flak jacket. Han and Idate had already donned theirs, but she hesitated.
Matsu noticed as he slipped in next to her. “Want to talk about it?”
“I’m just stunned that it’s over and that… well, I won… I never would have thought I’d make it this far when I failed graduation.”
“From Mudanin to Chunin in less than a year… wow, calm down, my record is under threat,” he teased. Then he wrapped an arm around her shoulders. “You earned this. You’ve risen from a bad situation and become stronger for it.”
“Thanks sensei,” she replied only to slump. “Guess I don’t get to call you tha—”
“Nah, I’m always going to be your sensei. You can’t just get promoted and think you can drop it like that. Also, you’re nowhere done on lessons to learn, that way lies mediocrity, and that isn’t you.”
Midori felt herself perking up. She glanced behind her. “Still, shame I won’t ever get to experience that again.”
“Eh, nah you will any time you take your own students to the Exams.”
Matsu winked at her. “It’s just as rewarding, trust me.” He flicked his eyes to where the boys were both walking together with their chests puffed out while Kuroiwa baited them into getting into a fight with each other.
Neither was taking the bait though which just made Midori smile more.
Maybe they had grown up?
Then Kuroiwa said something, and they spun on her together, only for Kuroiwa to make them trip each other up as she darted back to Midori. That set them off, and Midori laughed long and loud.
She had no idea how things would change now that she was a Chunin, but that could wait. Today was hers.
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I watched my students bounce around in delight for a while, not willing to murder their joy in its infancy.
We got back to our lodgings and were met with stern-faced shinobi sharpening blades and preparing themselves in a way that I’d witnessed only for those during the war.
They wrote final letters to those they loved and rewound bandages, a nervous energy returning to those who knew they were likely to see battle soon.
Ameyuri Ringo stalked up to me. “You’re with me. We’re to follow the Mizukage’s guard detail from a kilometre back.”
I flicked my eyes towards my students and the various other shinobi that I looked after. Ameyuri grunted. “They’re to head back in a day… once things have calmed down,” she said, answering my unasked question.
That got a nod from me. What else was there to say? The Mizukage led, and we followed.
“Think we’ll be close enough to watch them fight?” I asked.
“Yeah,” she replied with a toothy grin. “The trick will be not getting caught in the middle of it. They’re not going to hold back,” she gushed.
My team were a little sad that they wouldn’t be with me but I was quick to console them. They were good but this wasn’t a fight they were ready for.
For that matter I wasn’t sure I was ready for it.
The boys were still a bit confused about what was going on, which didn’t surprise me in the least.
They’d been so focused on the Chunin exams and doing well, they hadn’t noticed the currents moving around them. I could only clap them on the shoulders, drop a stack of ryo bills into Midori’s hands and leave them to it.
“Stay out of trouble,” I ordered as I turned and joined a group running headlong into it.
We walked out of Steam as a platoon of ten shinobi, all of us Jonin with Ameyuri being the only shinobi I was familiar with but the others I’d seen around enough to know of.
A tall man stepped forward and nodded at me. “Heard good things about you Jonin Matsu. You’re going to operate as our squad’s sensor nin, give us early warning. I’m Jonin Koda and I’m Squad Leader of this group,” he said waving a hand towards the gathered shinboi.
Ameyuri chuckled. “You ain’t in charge of me!”
Koda huffed. “You are attached to my group, until your objective presents itself I hope you’ll follow orders,” he stated calmly.
Ameyuri nodded. “I can accept that,” she replied.
Koda huffed a breath out and shot me flat look. “Take note Matsu, Tehre are going to be Swordsmen about. You follow my lead firs and foremost unless you get separated. Don’t think for a second if you encounter any other Swordsmen that they will kep you in mind. Some of them might even use you so be careful.”
He then made a sign and the squad fell into a diamond formation with me in the centre and Koda to my right.
“Get us situated,” barked Koda to my right as we leapt into the trees.
“We’re a bit behind the Mizukage’s group… how many are there supposed to be?” I asked as I noted another two groups of Kiri nin racing out of the Village of Steam parallel to us.
Koda snorted. “There’s four that we know in the guard detail. Three of them are of the Seven, but then there’s bound to be ANBU circling with him.” he gestured around us. “I know of three other groups like ours that will be working around the edges of the fight, cleaning up the Iwa scum that might interfere. Expect plenty of them. Iwa nin breed like rats.”
I glanced around, noting the various clan emblems on display in our group. There were three Hozuki, two Yuki, Ameyuri, myself, and three more minor families that were not of note. That everyone here was Jonin was the more interesting fact.
Also of note was the group that was shadowing us. Unlike the other groups of ten that I registered, this group was made up of only three shinobi.
A smaller group to help them escape notice.
Hello Kori Yuki, come to make sure Gengetsu dies have we? I thought to myself.
With the knowledge that he was lurking at what he must assume was beyond my range, while being within his was telling.
The Byakugan had made him sloppy.
I pushed my sensory range out further, pushing for as much accuracy as possible. I started picking up other groups of shinobi that I vaguely recognised as having been within other Villages' camps.
Mostly Konoha and Kumo though.
“Got a few campers hiding in the trees, up ahead,” I announced as we continued up.
“Which Village?” asked Koda.
“... Kumo,” I said a moment later as I matched their chakra signatures with those I knew.
“Let them know we spotted them but don’t fight just keep moving. If any Konoha nin or Rain shinobi are close, tell us,” he growled.
At that I fed approximations of where each shinobi was hiding. We ran past the group with at least two of our group observing each spot, letting the ‘hidden’ shinobi know we knew about them but otherwise not acting.
When we passed, the group fell away, and I relayed this information to Koda.
He merely grunted and signalled for us to keep running. Ameyuri grumbled at the lost chance to ‘thin the herd’.
We ran for roughly an hour before anything else of note happened.
At first it was just a minor flutter of chakra but it was enough to have me twitching. “Contact!” I called as in front of us the forest erupted into an explosion.
From the north and south two forces moved on our position looking to pincher us between them while ahead of us the Mizukage vanished from my senses only for more eruptions to let me know a fight was taking place.
“North and south closing on us one minute! Twenty nin in each group!” I called out.
Ameyuri shifted to the south with Koda me and two others. The other five turned to the northern group and moved to get space from us.
Ameyuri shifted up next to me as she drew the Kiba blades. “If we encounter Shibito, his head is mine. I got a mission from Daddy Dendenrashi, alright?”
“Ah? He’s all yours?” I replied.
Ameyuri grinned. “Good stuff, didn’t want you to think I was cutting in on your kill list,” she replied before locking eyes to the south.
It wasn’t worth asking if that was a real thing. It was Kiri, of course people create ‘kill lists’ for themselves.
We so needed healthier hobbies.
Grudges should be left to fantasy dwarves.
While a minute was an eternity for fights, it still seemed to drag on, even with one shinobi darting forward and laying a few quick traps that earned him a nod from Koda.
The trap specialist then slipped into the ground, ready to ambush from below.
When the group moving to intercept us came into view, all of us shifted positions, making it harder for the group to hit us as a wave of kunai shot forward.
None hit, but it kept us moving.
Then the Ia group entered the trapped field and explosions, kunai and even sharpened sticks tore through them. Damn, that was impressive.
The Trap specialist then popped out of the ground and hurled a water jutsu, breaking the groups focus further.
“Attack!” Koda roared.
I saw two Iwa Shinobi shift into eight as they performed a basic illusion, only for the real bodies to fade away.
Ameyuri met this with a sweep of her blades, sending a wave of electrical energy forward to dispel the illusions.
A moment later the actual two shinobi leapt up from the ground floor at us, we darted back as a stray jutsu threatened us but I wove my chakra into an illusion of my own.
The two close-range attackers stiffened as a whirling screech filled the air behind them.
They both turned, hurling rocks and flames from their fists behind them.
Ameyuri and the Koda took their exposed backs as the offering it was and punched holes into both of them.
Ameyuri landed atop hers with a feral glint her gaze already turning to another opponent.
Koda fell back next to me, his head on a swivel. “Nice trick! They’ve been hearing that jutsu so much from your students, you practically conditioned them to fear it!” he chuckled.
I smirked. “I figured,” I replied drily.
Koda waved a hand to the north. “How’s the other group going?” he asked.
I grimaced in response. “Not as well,” I replied. “Two of them are dead on our side but they otherwise have the Iwa nin on the run.”
“Shit,” Koda cursed before shaking his head. “Nothing to do about it.” his eyes flicked towards the fight as the Iwa nin we’d been tangling with turned and fled as they realised they were outgunned.
Before we could pursue Koda held up a fist. “Hold! Don’t pursue! Iwa nin are known to bait traps like this! Next trick of theirs will be human waves! Prepare to face them!”
He glanced, “Injuries?” he barked earning a few raised hands. The trap specialist limped out from behind a tree and raised a shaky hand. “Got clipped,” the man announced.
I dropped down next to him and dug the kunai out of his thigh.
Before he could even protest the action I had his leg numbed and I began healing.
Koda hummed. “Good, we’ll need you Uzuo! No more recklessly engaging the enemy like that!”
Uzuo, the trap specialist, bowed his head. “Y-yeah, gotcha boss. And thanks little man,” he muttered to me.
Another explosion erupted to the east, and I licked my lips as I finished healing Uzou.
“That one felt closer?” I asked.
Koda stiffened. “Eeposition!” he called.
We moved two kilometres back after gathering up the northern group. We sealed up the two dead shinobi and quickly moved on.
This proved to be a wise choice as a huge plume of smoke announced that Gengetsu had summoned his Clam.
In response, a small white figure appeared in the sky and a huge explosion swept through the forest.
Ameyuri grinned into the sky. “Fucken hell they’re really going at it! Come on Gengetsu finish the job this time!”
Koda shifted. “You understand that you’re speaking treason. Our Illustrious Leader never failed to—”
“Oh save your brown nosing for when we’re in front of Gengetsu, and don’t try and threaten me with that shit Koda! I’m just part of this mission, not under your command!” Ameyuri barked as she stabbed a Kiba blade towards him.
Koda pursed his lips even as he worked with Uzuo to set traps around us. “Village paramet—”
“Urgh I can’t believe you ever made Jonin with that stick up your ass making you this stiff!” Ameyuri groaned. She turned towards me. “Please tell me some more people are coming towards us that I can kill?” she asked.
I nodded. “Yeah, I’d been about to announce them. Seems Koda was right. Iwa’s sending human waves at us. I have a rough count of fifty shinobi? Chunin levelled with four or five Jonin mixed in?”
Koda cursed while Ameyuri grinned wider. “Fuck yeah!”
I coughed. “I don’t think they know our position as they are sweeping the area around the fight,” I announced, my eyes flicking to the east to indicate which ‘fight’ I was referencing.
Another rumble ran through the area and I swallowed. Was feeling a bit too widespread to be just a ‘fight’.
Koda nodded. “We will choose our battlefield.” he pointed to Uzuo from earlier. “Uzuo prepare some more traps further afield, chakra and basic, we’ll feed them in if we can.”
He glanced around at our squad. “Some of you might have to run interference or as bait to help thin the numbers.”
I coughed again. “I might have something to fill that role perfectly”
Everyone in our group glanced at me, and I answered by forming a specific handseal that was unique to a cluster of jutsu.
I pushed my chakra through the precise tenketsu and couldn’t help but grin as I announced my new favourite jutsu.
A quarter of my chakra should be enough for this, right?
“Shadow Clone Jutsu!”
Chakra smoke erupted around me, and when it cleared, I had the joy of looking at five copies of myself all with identical grins.
“Oh, I could get used to this,” I declared in stereo.
I turned back to Koda as our grins turned savage.
I almost pitied those poor Iwa shinobi.
Almost.
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A.N. Thanks goes to my patreons for your continued support!
Hope this chapter was enjoyable to read. I didn’t want to completely leave you on the edge so I made sure the fight was well underway before wrapping things up.
I’m sorry but blame the Chunin exams. They needed to be given the right amount of attention rather than being breezed over.
Comments
Bat
Ooof Minato has learned a hard lesson early and now declares vengeance against Matsu student. She will become a powerful shinobi or die now. No in-between.
Jericho Rising
Now that's a perspective I definitely wasn't expecting!
Definitely not a racoon
Gotta wonder how Minato now feels after meeting Matsu, who might as well be Minato2.0 from Minato's POV. 1 year younger, but already a jonin, has a signature technique, also wants to become kage but it's apparently much harder in kiri and still he's able to rally the entire village, not just his classmates and friends. He's from the same clan as his crush, is more charming than him on account of growing up around courtesans and the list goes on.
Wyrdseer
I love this story.
LordLaw
Epic chapter, fucking hell I absolutely love this story!
Tigr Brigeah
Not sure I'm a fan of turning Minato into an enemy I guess I'm still not rid of my pro-Konoha bias even though this is a Kiri story
AnonymousJohn
How exactly did he feed 25% of his chakra into the shadow clones? This jutsu splits your whole chakra reserve evenly; six bodies should mean each has ~16% of his chakra. This is what makes the technique so dangerous; no matter how much chakra you have, you can cripple yourself.
Monkeu Pon
Matsu made one mistake, he took a shot that didn't take Minato out. He shoukd have ended the future S rank threat to his village right there.
War sage
Same
War sage
Because these Konoha nin he killed were basically no named, characters, nobody's, while for the Konoha nin camp it's like due to that it has characters we actually know from the series
Azril Aditya
Why did he hide that he detect the Konoha Camp? He still has soft spot for Konoha? After knowing that his student make a terrible grudge with Minato? he should use this opportunity to weaken them . I thought he already harden his resolved. Besides didn't he already killed Konoha nin before? Why the special case now?
Tophat Tofu
I had quite the grin while reading this thanks for the chapter (also that line to the Uchiha was cold asf)
That Warden
Lot of people feeling bad for Minato and the toad.......lol screw him and the toads. There was no way of this story ending with konoha being friends of kiri, Matsui wants to improve kiri and to do that he is going to have to step on a lot of toes and bodies, konoha isn't going to give another village a chance to be their equal.
Simplexity
I still hope that both Mu and Gengetsu die in this fight. That is probably the best outcome for Matsu especially now that he knows Gengetsu's genjutsu trick(s)
G 21
I love double release months 🥹. Chapter was super great
Wayne
Aww, Midori won, was hoping that she'd fail but even worse she killed a toad summon and made Minato an enemy for life. Not exactly the best idea to make enemies with both Minato and Jiraiya. Konoha isn't an enemy you want especially when you're aiming to reform Kiri into something less bloodthirsty and wasteful.
Aisea Havea
If it gets out he can copy jutsu without a sharingan, he may legitimately take Kakashi's title as Copy Ninja, stealing from both teacher and student
Razorfloss razor
It happens unfortunately and toads being ninja are used to it. They may not like it but they will understand it.
Aisea Havea
That was probably not a canon toad from the physical description that i compared with actual toad summons from the series but it could be his personal toad summon like Gamakichi is to Naruto and Gamabunta to Jiyaiya since Minato isn't shown in the show with his own personal summon, usually summoning Gamabunta for big fights. From what I've searched up though, is that it was Jiraiya who made the contract with Gamabunta first. Edit: what i mean by this is at least we can rest easy knowing Gamabunta is still alive and well and the other two cool toads that Naruto summons against Pein shouldn't be this one either
Nalanaya
Oof. Poor Minato. Not exactly undeserved considering how many people he's going to go on to kill, but that definitely stings. And also reeks of a set up for conflict dialogue with Matsu and his own character arc on revenge and responsibility. Which I'm all for...I just worry about the possibility of it starting with 'Minato goes out of his way to kill/cripple Midori' and ends with 'Matsu goes out of his way to take revenge in return'. I get this is a dark story, but I feel like the death of Granny and others, and the slowly sinking relationship with Hanahime are already kinda just fine as low points? Losing a student (the most innocent student at that) and starting his own cycle with the nominal best and least contentious peer in Konoha? That could be a bit much. As for blame...well that might be a convo for others, but this is clearly Jiraiya and the toads fault. Starting with the latter first, they were decently big, so probably an adult. Moreover, probably experienced in combat with Jiraiya considering how green Minato is. Then, with no specific instruction, they decided swallowing a non-disabled Ninja was a good idea while they also had no special protections or features of their internals (like chakra reinforcement, poison, etc.) Maybe they wouldn't have recently assumed a tired kid could KILL them...but injury absolutely shouldn't have been out of the question. That was a stupid play to pull on an elemental blade wizard, the Toads are more then established enough to know about the risks of swallowing things that can fight back, and this toad specifically wasn't an inexperienced kid. Most of the responsibility of this death? Is honestly probably on them. Then there's Jiraiya. Minato got poisoned in a cheetsy way sure, but it was a 'nice' poison. Not deadly, no long term effect, and not used in a fight where his opponent was trying to kill him over defeat him. It was also specifically trying to eliminate the possibility of Summoning. Who slipped Minato the drugs to last long enough to summon anyway? And who probably encouraged him to fight that hard in the first place? From a career standpoint, Minato is already fine. He's definitely making Chunnin, and he's already got such a highly placed Sensei that he's not going to gain any advantages from winning. Nor is he going to lose any real social/political power from losing in the finals- he wasn't that well recognized in the first place unlike the Sarutobi heir. The only thing he stands to gain is potential political capital in a bid for a leadership position. Ie, a position Jiraiya is pushing him towards. A position...that will have plenty of more opportunities for a genius like Minato to show their worth. Trying that hard to win, while already poisoned, against a foe that just by village alone he has no reason to think won't go for the kill if pushed? It was stupid and arrogant, and exactly Jiraiya's job to dissuade his extremely valuable student from doing, much less promote with giving him the combat pills and presumably the motivation to push to win instead of just giving a decent effort and 'settling' for taking second place with a great showing while being a total dark-horse. Edit: Goddamn mobile Patreon sucks. No spacing allowed because enter posts the comment. Going to come back on a computer later.
Konan2020
Toad are not a summon that I would choose to swallow a conscious enemy, the fact that a bunch of genins had a basic Rasengan should clue Minato to not get in close, if the Toad stayed in melee they would have won
Babyface
Maybe Gamabunta or Gamakichi
Aisea Havea
Single attribute Water release, i think
Water daoist
What is matsu chakra nature again?
Anonykor
Oof on Midori for killing the summon. Minato is not the kind of person you want as a sworn enemy. Depending on how long this fic goes, I could see her dying to him in a war. She’s not going to be able to counter the Flying Thunder God, even if warned ahead of time. I was hoping she would show some contrition after the fight, like a bow of respect or something, to nip that possibility early.
The Grey Mage
The Yuki guy who replaced him in canon is probably close enough to one to get the job done.
Green0Photon
At this rate, they're gonna call him the Ichinin with how willing he is to stand up to the Sannin, like they against Hanzo. Also he's making it pretty clear he's the next Mizukage candidate. Or at least, someone down the line, like everyone is assuming with Hiruzen, a Sannin, and maybe Minato. Doesn't feel arc appropriate for Matsu to become the Mizukage just yet, but Gengetsu has been waving some death flags. I think it's quite possible that Matsu is gonna have to deal with someone reckless and antagonistic. Vs Gengetsu, who paranoid and antagonistic.
The Grey Mage
I don’t think that was an important toad? I mean, I’m sure he was important to Minato, but afaik he doesn’t match any of the named toads. So, it’s probably not a huge deal? Although it might impact Jiraiya’s cycle of hatred thing being passed down.
Petrox
Minato though he was playing normal Pokemon, while in reality he was playing nuzlocke. The toads will think twice now of offering aid just like that
Namnar
Does Kiri have any kage level ninja to replace Gengetsu when he's gone? It feels like they'll be behind in that front after he dies.
War sage
I couldn't wait, had up upgrade pateron. Heck yes not only did Midori won, some of others got promoted. Yea some of those from Konoha gunning for either Matsu or Midori. We'll this loss will stick with Minato for awhile. Not surprised that Jiraiya stepped up, as not only was he pissed off from Minato being poisoned and Mina being the priority but the death of a toad summons probably shocked him to his core but in the end ots on Minato for doing the summoning. I feel like Matsu ended up with alot of cash lol. But yea not only is the Kage vs Kage battle be epic, but it looks like we may get a mini ninja war
Sinnohan
I think Matsu’s student killing Minato’s summon will help combat that.
ParoxysmDK
Having just reread the chapter, I really wanna get a PoV shift to Jiraiya and Mina to get their thoughts on Matsu and the occurrences that have happened with him so far. Especially Jiraiya. And yeah of course the upcoming battle is gonna be glorious. Also this story has been amazing so far.
RDZ90
I agree with you, but Mito, might be a character we are sleeping on, Mito might reach out to help Matsu in some way, she already gave so much to Konoha, she might harbor some resentment for Konoha not helping out enough during the war, or she might see Matsu as the future, kind like the uzumaki blacksmith daughter, kiri bit into uzhio and bit of more than they bargained for, with Matsu possibly becoming Mizukage.
Alex Horsey
The fallout because of this battle will be fucking massive Kushner will get a lot of heat because of Matsu being Uzumaki. And people say all they won’t do that because they are good friends they’re still 13-year-olds as much as they are killing machines they’re still kids the drama and the issues will be great.
NinjaShinobi124
I'm always up for some Minato humiliation. It's for his own good. He became the strongest of his generation with any true competition outside of maybe the 4th Raikage. Imagine how strong he'll become with true rivals and adversaries. Can't wait for his eventual fight with Matsu.
Blahful
Why does that matter?
ArtHunt
Do the other villages not know Matsu is a medical nin? I thought he started healing Han before he passed out in the arena.
Amagendor
Where is that from?
Amagendor
He has contacts with both Uchiha and Hyuga. So replicating the Rsengan to spite Matsu?
Amagendor
I don't think Gengetsu is going to be that kind of villain tbh. He already has an antagonistic role. It wouldn't serve his purpose as Matsu (and his other tools) are going to kill Onoki. He already showed matsu that he can't harm him. Gengetsu also finds matsu's open declaration for the hat entertaining. he finds all those intrigues so very boring. The extend of his antagonistic tendencies will be his poisoned apples for matsu. Challenges where he can very likely die or succeed.
Fran
Weren't summons supposed to survive, even those kind of injuries, because their true body wasn't summoned?
Rinaldo
People can die?!?! Minato thought, the day after his fellow Leaf ninja grusomely killed a Stone ninja.
LandoCali96
How different will Minato end up with early career trauma?
RDZ90
I also just thought of this just throwing it out there, will Matsu being an uzumaki and being an succesful enemy of konoha place mito and kushina under scrutiny or create tensions, the uzumaki having being allied with the Senju, the Uchiha and their allies using this to further advance their goals of gaining influence against the homage and the senju block including Danzo, just a thought, this story is amazing 👏 😀
RDZ90
What an amazing chapter, I'm on the edge of my seat, I wonder what the fallout of Minatos loss will have on his standing and how he will take it personally (butterfly effect) also if people will turn on him, I would love a chapter on the fallout from the Chunin exams, also what lord Reto kazekage thinks of Matsu having met him before, looking forward to the fight hoping Gengetsu lives long enough to become a villain and Matsu is pitted against him later on the story, nevertheless thanks for the update, please give us another two chapter this upcoming month.
Amagendor
That was interesting. I didn't expect the Konoha infighting or that the poison affected Minato and Mina that much. With this Exam he pretty much gave away that he is a medic(he healed Han while still on the battle field) and a sensor(he casually broke a Uchiha Genjutsu for everyone to see). With Han's reaction I guess he will spec heavily into poison to make up for his weakness. The death of the toad was really suprising. We see Summons take lethal damage but they alwayys manage to survive. While he can blame Midori and is justified for it he became to reliant on the jutsu. It will be interesting if Minato tries to copy the Rasengan to spite Matsu and Kiri(and to earn some goodwill with the Uchiha and Hyuga). Hoping that Gengetsu survives so Matsu gets to kill Kori. As Matsu's hospital idea is cleared for progress I am looking forward to how many will come to earn his skills as well as some recurring characters.
MagicWafflez
honestly, I think matsu has already butterflied some things. First, with Gengetsu vs Mu: that treacherous yuki member has gotten sloppy because of the eye that matsu managed to get for the village... and Gengetsu has had the chance to practice against it too. second, this poisoning/toad death will make minato grow up and get stronger ahead of schedule... likely without matsu messing with things he'd have breezed through this and been all the weaker for it edit: actually, matsu being a medic might be able to save gengetsu and thus prove the benefits of a combat medic. xD
SailorOfHouseThunderBird
Absolutely awesome chapter ❤️
philip
That was absolutely brilliant. You really did justice to the Chuunin Exams. I especially loved how Matsu worked alongside the poison and intelligence experts to achieve his goal. This part felt underrated—his ability to secure Human Resources, both in terms of position and strategic intelligence, really showed off his leadership skills as he orchestrated the sabotage against Minato. I could really feel Minato grudge starting to take shape after the battle—it’s going to be fascinating to see how that develops in the next few chapters. The upcoming battle between the Kage and Iwa vs. Mizu is gonna be legendary
HornsOfTheseus
Because she shoved a big ball Rasengan through its brain which is a lethal hit.
xJehova
thanks for the update! great chapter with tension building between the hokage/jonin leading into the big fight. I also felt like you did a good job with the genin interactions :)
Jace Stephens
Why did the toad die? Don't they just pop? We have seen them take bigger hits and survive.
J
Damn, Matsu bigging himself up as Konoha enemy number 1.
THOTSLAYER
Please moooore! Deadass the only reason im on your patreon
fine
Gamabunta I think cause the younger are narutos
fine
Damn what a chapter
Alex Horsey
What do you think will happen to? Minato Namikaze the relationship with Kushner Uzumaki hear me out he matsu Uzumaki was the student of the woman who killed his his toad with some hatred go To Kushner Uzumaki I think when he gets back, he will be mad first at most like Kushner and then I think most of the will go back on himself realising he took advantage of his toads strength and he fucked up he knew about that Jitsu that spinning due to what Matsu students had
HornsOfTheseus
Which Gama was it that died? I missed it
Saby Arrieta
Matsu finally learns the lesson of never meeting your heroes and we are all the heroes in our stories but also the villain in someone else’s.
