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Hard Enough - Chapter 311 - Interlude - Indigo events

🕑 Added 2025-03-24 19:00:11 +0000 UTC

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Tim

"Or was he an idiot and he just rolled out of bed and handed you the ring?" Why do I feel that this felt like Viva was speaking from experience?

SailorOfHouseThunderBird

Pretty sure Erika isn't ace, iirc Sabrina caught her thirsting over Brock in her mind when she saw him in the professor coat that Oak gave him. Also, is everyone in this comment section a bit thirsty, or am i just dense? Not trying to promote bi erasure or anything, but I can't be the only one who read all that as just honest friendship right?

PitrPatR

It would certainly be interesting and I can see the potential there. If I recall correctly, our introduction to Erika involved some bemoaning her lack of dating opportunities. She doesn’t appear to have many chances to interact with boys her own age and the girls she takes as trainers come from similar backgrounds and probably fit a certain mold. Vasquez is a type of person she likely hasn’t interacted with much, which could make her interesting.

QuazarKMax

I think the only way Brock might be able to get the message through to Lola is since he is still his siblings legal guardian to kick her out and ban her from seeing them until she gets the help she needs but even that would be a long shot since as a trained operative Lola would know what to say to tick all the boxes. So she’d probably just play along unless Brock really just loses all composure and throws what her cousins did in her face something akin to “life isn’t fair. I would think you’d know that after what your cousins did during the war and the position it put you in”. It would probably cause some kind of breakdown but at this point I’m not sure what else Brock could do to achieve his desired outcome. Looking forward to Lola’s reaction to Forrest and Brock being in the middle of the Power of One movie events because Sabrina will teleport them there to help. Always got the excuse Sabrina predicted it was going to happen so were on Shamouti island for it.

iceknight90

Time for Lt Surge to be the mysterious GOLD MASKED HERO! The guy who randomly turns up, assists them, then departs mysteriously. The aloof extra ranger!

nugitoBambino

lmfao i didn't expect Janine to be a clam jammer... let an electric lesbian cook janine. i mean, come on bruv! Visquez was putting on a rizz masterclass!

9Tales

I feel it's more of an employer employee relationship is the vibes i get sure a close one but still.For close friendship they have to really hang out through the story I haven't really seen them do that it's only talked about im my opinion obviously i could be wrong.

BronRevo

Would've been good but it seems like Viva is fixing for Visquez to be Erika's partner.

the pyro stick figure 76

The problem has never been lack of land or resources. The problem is that Lola doesn’t respect her kids opinions, and is very obtuse to any conflict she’ll cause. You can give her all the land and resources to work with away from the family and it won’t matter because she only cares about it with the family so she’ll still try to renovate Brock‘s house no matter whose toes she steps on.

Viva01

Making the water Gym, especially so clseo to Cerulean is going to step on some toes politically. so just giving it to her is not a good idea on a few fronts.

Viva01

Yeah very much. this is also a situaiton where he has returned home after being out so he's off balance. this is further compounded by Lola's return home and his being treated like a child.

Viva01

You know that's an amazing theory that I quite like.

White Neko Knight

I can see Erika being Ace. To me she comes off as someone who's been sheltered a bit and hasn't been allowed to explore her sexuality.

rezo42

Alright, so I have a conspiracy-bored-worthy theory. for a bit, I thought Lance/Erica might make an interesting pair in this fic. Sabrina has made comments that Erica is low-key jealous of her relationship, and we have Lance's point of view lamenting a noticeable dry streak. Lance wants to date a strong trainer. While Erica might not be a heavy hitter, she isn't a lightweight either. Plus, she has a deep understanding of politics, which gives her more common ground with Lance. The problem is they have only been in a room together once in this fic that I can remember. Now Erica is locked in as maid of honor, and while I think Surge is the best choice for the best man, I could see Lance as a groomsman. The reception could be interesting, is all I'm going to say.

Jericho Rising

Brock still owns the old family home. Just put it in her name and let her have at it to make the water gym she seems desperate to create. Honestly it's been leading towards that for awhile now.

Jericho Rising

I was pleasantly surprised by the crude and crass language In the first part of this chapter and how you defused that theoretical tension with Sabrina's meet up and Forest's worries and confusion. At first it came as a surprise that Forest was so unsure of himself and immature compared to Yolanda but then I realized that she had the support that was Brock while Forest has been rebelling. She matured faster despite not going on a journey yet.

rezo42

I think he meant Brawly

HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan

You know, I didn't think Sarge served as part of the Marines, but that *is* the crayon branch so... he must have done some time with them to be able to identify the flavors. Well, that of he thought it would be super funny. I bet Lance's facial expression was GLORIOUS

Jean Marc Kunnen

Bruno? The only time i remember brock and bruno interacting was during rocket academy raid were bruno pissed off both brock and sabrina and that one time bruno just stared at brock when he had to guard a hallway.

HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan

I think Sarge can definitely play stealthy. We've even seen him go stealthy at various points of the story. The guy just prefers to be loud and straightforward over quiet and sneaky. So while I think *everyone* will know Sarge is in the G-force, I also think no-one outside of a select few will know he's a HERO member. He will lock that info down tight because it's Need To Know Only and he understands the value of Secrets

HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan

What about one of his Gym Trainers? They've been by his side for years and I'm pretty sure he's friends with them. Definitely hangs out with them outside of working (like the video games they play) If they want to play politics for the wedding (which I highly doubt), Lance could be best man. I don't really see it, but I *can* see him standing as a groomsmen. The two of them get along well (and guys are a lot less picky about who they have as their groomsmen then women for bridesmaids) Another option is Bruno. While Brock and him haven't know each other long, they do know each other pretty well. And I think Brock and Bruno have been friends for around the same length of time as Sabrina and Erika? Or, as a funny option, Titan.

HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan

Eh, Malva is a little on the back foot in this POV. She experienced over a week straight of failing to meet a goal she initially thought was stupidly easy. It's understandable that she would be a little unsettled right now after failing something she thought simple. For example; Imagine if, over the span of a week, every time you went to take a sip of water you spilled it. This is a skill you *know* you have. You've done this before plenty of times! But wouldn't you start to think something was wrong if it happened over and over and over and over and over and over and over again? Is the universe out to get you? Is it just a coincidence? Are you ill? What exactly is happening?! You'd be a bit unsettled, one would think, and a bit off your game. And if you can't manage something as simple as this... what else have you suddenly lost skill in that you never thought you could fail at? So yeah, Malva's POV here lacks the confidence one would expect from an Elite 4 member.

HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan

I really hope Gio wins. It would be neat and, I think, a bit of an underdog uprising. Especially since we've not seen/read anyone really talking about Gio the way they talked about Roxanne and her friends. Side idea: Gio becomes a key member of the G-men. So much so, that years down the line it's Gio, not Lance, leading the force. ... partially because of politics. Lance has major political ties to Indigo while, as far as I know, Gio just happens to be from Kanto with no obvious patriotism (or political ties)

HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan

New region just opened up. Give her a few months to get her hands on some foreign pokemon (through trade or catch) and train them. She's gonna have way more options available to her here.

HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan

While I can see Visquez being into women, I see Erika as being Ace. Idk why?

HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan

Lola strikes me as kinda paranoid. I wouldn't be surprised if she has a small team of close-knit pokemon that she keeps on her person at all times (in pokeballs). Especially after years of travel; she's probably in the habit of keeping them on her

angie bell

oh surge in the team i wonder if our ex-leader of Rocket will get recruited along with his band of thieves? Giovanni does care about no war happening and maybe grudges against some of the gangs trying to make trouble like Spy Girl seems like trouble. seems like Broke should buy some land so Lola can make a space to design and "express" herself I bet Brock and Flint could pick out some nice stones to go with the water features for the water Pokemon and maybe some features so it not all water exclusive so it not too out of place maybe a ruin in water feel? Forrest notices the effects of his training i think most aura growth happens during adventures if Brock ever got a wilderness retreat his aura would explode!

HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan

“These are drawings of you beating people up until you get money to stop… You drew them in crayon,” he said, his disbelief growing.  This has to be my favorite part of this chapter. Maybe even my favorite in the last dozen.

Simca

Beat me to it. My exact thoughts

Desidia

Where's Lola's Pokemon? Are they all in Brock's marsh and ponds? Or is Lola still forbidden from entering Brock's gym reserve area?

SailorOfHouseThunderBird

Bruno v Marshall seemed fun. Totes rooting for Gio. I'm really looking forward to the 2000 movie arc. To me, that was the absolute peak of Pokémon.

Draconic Hermit

> hidden support network Yes, it's called having peak Protagonist energy.

Jean Marc Kunnen

had to look him up because i forgot who he was as well. he's the trainer with the nidorino (now a nidoking) in the beginning of the fic and the first to challenge brock for a gym badge and later the elite challenge this circuit.

White Neko Knight

I suddenly want to ship Visquez and Erika. They'd make a cute couple and they seem to fit together.

Desidia

Winter is coming. That'll be good for Amaura, but I still wanted Lorelei with a new Ice Pokemon.

Sweetsugar

Who was gio again?

Cperkenling

Lt Surge part had me Wheezing, great job man

QuazarKMax

Yeah I thought that too

HonorBound Fate

Man Gio has come a long way since the first chapter three-hundred and ten chapters ago.

Anareth

The Malva section seemed a little off. Not wrong per say, but I would have expected her to be a bit more confident of her place in Team Flare given that she's outright a member of the Elite Four. Somewhat like how Blaine was confident when dealing with Giovanni and the Madame.

9Tales

I really hope surge ends up as the best man. He and brock are really close and I can't think of anyone else except Forrest for the role.

ShinLupin

Man on Man Action, Kong might have some very complicated Feelings Right now I also suspect their will be discussions About Trainer Fighting each other Hand-to-Hand. Malva confirmed as a Criminal and a jerk. Yeah, she just landed a spot on the list, maybe have Lola go Rambo on her. Surge been recuited for HERO-work. Wonder how long until the secret is all but polite fiction? Or can Surge Play it stealthty? Erika, the Ultra-Maiden. Is she at risk becoming a Bridezilla? Some Monsters should not be unleash carelessly. Roxanne has toughed up! Way to go Girl! Uh Lola... yeah that one is a work inprogress Forrest notices ohw he changed and his own growth Orange Islands and Movie 2, be Ready! Ash is coming!

Qweku_v

Excellent chapter. Wow, Gio is a finalist? Good for him.

Alexander Gofric

Loved the foreshadowing of the Lugia movie can’t wait to see how you handle that.

Donald Bagwell

I want a sucker punch train from brock to surge to lola… to honestly back to surge from lola. But real talk? Loved this chapter

TorrhenWintry

"Come on out! Aggron!” she shouted, and Forrest perked up.  He wanted that Pokemon on his roster. He opened a note app on his transceiver and began jotting down his observations." -Didn't Forrest's Lairon evolve in his battle with Brock?

Venudon27

I hope this means we get to see more Surge again.

Rhett Sellers

Now I know Viva was in the army. Making Surge eat crayons! 🤣🤣🤣


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