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Hard Enough - Chapter 303 - What lurks in the depths

🕑 Added 2025-02-24 19:00:09 +0000 UTC

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GucciG

I hope Brock doesn’t back down with Lola.

angie bell

looking up the bulbagarden kalos is gonna be interesting especially the Ninja Village and Otori Mountai Koga and his daughter are gonna flex so hard on those guys sight seeing ninjas!

Donald Bagwell

I am very happy with this! It would also be hilarious if lola had a basculegion and no one in Unova has an idea on how to evolve them. Meaning agatha has to see from lola

Jordan Lopez

I remember them being in sinnoh. Remember he had a chimecko and carnivine along with being close to gardenia .

Jordan Lopez

Well it's been stated that regions closed to them are still watching them. It's another reason why the black thorn clan was extra wary of Brock and kanto. They didn't want to have ppl in closed regions to think that Johto and kanto weren't one unit United.

nugitoBambino

oh @Jean Marc Kunnen really? huh I logged it in my mind under "big bertha howitzer" but yeah now that you point it out I think that was just a connection I made, not a formal "this is how brock got to the name". yeah @Ch W no idea lol

Smiling Reader

I want either Brock or Sabrina to literally throw Lola out of the house FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART. Brock can continue being a role model brother after putting Lola in her place.

Smiling Reader

Pretty sure she has the same mental defenses as Surge. Or at least something close to it.

TheDudeAbides

I thought it was obvious that brock vs lance wasn't shown in the other regions. How could they, nobody knew where they were at the time and it's not like satellites or space travel are a thing in this world.

TheDudeAbides

This is turning out to be the longest ten hour plane ride in history.

G 21

Time difference between the regions? Idfk

Jean Marc Kunnen

I do remember that james’ family has a house in sinnoh but aren’t his grandparents in hoenn?

Jean Marc Kunnen

His reasoning for the name has never been mentioned and most everyone would just chalk it up to a weird coincidence

carebear90

I wonder how a ten-hour flight back for Brock and Sabrina turned into a whole day passing in Kanto when it was still the middle of the night when this whole thing started. Did somebody/something delay them? While reading, I fully expected Brock to return at the end of the chapter, Aura churning all menacing-like. But then Cynthia and Oak gamed the day away. :D

Mike

I hope the author clarifies about Cynthia’s strength. Rather how she got it. Her ability to sense aura (Oak) shows formal training. No way it’s just talent.

Rinaldo

Not seeing even the initial conflict between the family and Lola is especially egregious with it being vaguely described by a detached Cynthia

Alexander Gofric

Azelf Mesprit and Uxie if Cynthia hears that she's going to go wild

Alexander Gofric

Forget Diancie how about the stories he's told his siblings about

rezo42

interesting chapter, even if viva is a tease. I'm calling it now Diantha and Brock are going to fight, Lance will buy all the pewter merch before attending the fight. lastly i wont be surprised if brock landed only to receive notifications that A) Lola barged in the house by distracting the family with a visiting champion. B) she is currently on the run from the indigo league. after which he decides to just crash at Sabrina's and deal with it after he's slept and showered.

Matt H

I agree with everything you said! And that's what the author of the other story I mentioned did: more time-critical perspectives were shown sooner while others were delayed.

Jordan Lopez

One nice thing this chapter helped make clear was the personalities of the 3 champions right now and the most of the events and pokemon battles like Brock vs lances weren't broadcast beyond to sinnoh, unova or kalos. So Brock is in for a world of attention once all the ppl from those countries learn of everything he's done as a gym leaders, potential champion, and businessman with the mega stones. I'm surprised one of his siblings hasn't mentioned the story about the fairy/rock type that's native to kalos 😂

Viva01

... Wow I am now super conflicted about how Lola would react to Agatha and vice versa. Damn there's some potential with that interaction with Lola being a former soldier...hmmmmm, leave that with me.

Jordan Lopez

Thanks I remember a lot of little details about this fic but I didn't remember that one clearly. But I did take pause thinking that he did get growly. I just want viva01 to do more then just put James in the box he has him in. He treats him like he's stupid and not a battle.

HonorBound Fate

Nanny grav pov when

Donald Bagwell

Can I make the request of Oak and Agatha having a contest on favorite grandparent? Flint awkwardly looking in a corner Brock being exasperated And the kids watching like its a cartoon?

Viva01

Yeah, it's fun to just have Oak as this old master that is enjoying his retirement and learning new things about the world. Most of this chapter was about 'old' monsters with the human monsters all looking for ways to understand each other while the monster in the deep aka Lugia crushes the interlopers.

PurpleHart

As someone who quite frankly loves reaction chapters, I will agree to an exent. I love seeing reactions to things happening in the story, how the world responds. Things like Lance and the governments reaction to the ship landing, reaction from the different gym leaders/guardians, Brock's reaction and everyone in Hoenn, reactions from the new champions revealed as with the start of this chapter with Alder, hell regular people reacting on the pokenet about the huge news! Give it to me, I love it. Where it loses me is with things that obviously could have waited until after the climatic confrontation. Immediate reactions are one thing, but why was poacher Lawrence in this chapter? Why did we have part of this chapter from Lugia perspective? Why did Team Aqua's grunt logistics show up? Those are things that can take up space after the big blow out between Brock and Lola.

Ch W

Thanks for the chapter. If this was asked before, I'm sorry for repeating. Did Brock name his rhyperior after Sinnoh's E4 Bertha? Is he gonna have a thought panic to Sabrina about the slip-up?

Donald Bagwell

Im gonna say this right now… Oak is my favorite grandpa and I hope he adopts the Slate family in its entirety (kids only)

QuazarKMax

James already went and got Growly again in this timeline

Seanfrks

I mean, that may true as well. Might have just assumed that it was Lola and jumped to the worse conclusion out of frustration with this chapter.

Bakerdea

Love the chapter! Keep it up Viva. Your an inspiration.

Bakerdea

I thought that whole thing was about Melody, from 'The Power of One' movie.

Jordan Lopez

I've been meaning to say this but I'd love it if James grandparents from sinnoh are on that boat and that they were one of the ppl pushing for kanto to be found. They could help James make peace with his home life and let him be able to see growly again

Jordan Lopez

Oh I thought Lugia was referring to that girl who kissed ash in the Lugia movie.

Jordan Lopez

I pray whatever is keeping you from reading this doesn't mean you serious harm

Matt H

To anyone impatient for the next chapter (and that includes me, for the record) here's something to consider: Chapters like this are an interesting conundrum for authors. At almost any other time during this story I think most of us would enjoy reading chapters like this since they help build out the world and the characters in it. And yet, these chapters can't really be delayed because they would be less impactful since we would already know what happens. It's an odd situation where these chapters likely make the story better as a whole in the long run, but irritate a subset of readers in the moment due to the serialized nature of the story. There are ways to mitigate this to some extent, but the problem doesn't disappear entirely. The Path of Ascension comes to mind as an example, but I won't say anything further at risk of spoiling things for anyone who hasn't read it yet.

Necrosis

I just want to say thank you for writing this story. Unfortunately I won't be able to read the rest to see this story to conclusion. That being said thanks for making a great world.

Blahmeh

I agree. So much of the chapter I just didn't care about after the cliffhanger last week. Weekly release or not, it feels like a poor choice to switch gears after last week's chapters.

QuazarKMax

They shouldn't be contesting it at all. They've been cut off from Kanto/Jhoto for what decades at this point and this is the first thing they bring up? It's like they're asking to start the war up again.

Thomas Keller

Yet Lugia explicitly said that he didn't know why Lola worshipped him and that it didn't do anything? It seems to be a case of Lola lucking into the right circumstances to be a capital E Explorer in this separated world, but because she never truly forced herself to slow down and heal she ended up becoming a absolute mess who dragged everyone else into it whenever possible

Michael Olson

I'd be more frustrated if there wasn't a history of also pushing a chapter on tuesday

King hand axe

I know this is a very slow, progressive slice of life type story, but it kinda does feel like you deliberately pushout inconsequential chapters when every insinuation is of the climax to a long build up. I thoroughly enjoy the story, so please don't take this as anything but a small critique.

Glitched Knights

I don't know how Viva is gonna incorporate the region with literal Pokemon warlords

Glitched Knights

I wonder if that Lugia that left to deal with corruption in the South is about to get Pokenapped by Cypher. If so, good. I always loved how XD-01 looked! I don't like what it takes to make a Pokemon into a Shadow Pokemon

Worrior Lord

Then my faith is true🙌🙌

Alex Horsey

I feel sorry for Flint. I can’t leave Flint story into you been buried alive with a your future daughter-in-law bearing new anger of volcano is not a great way of staying alive. I think Flint story end here. we always like you Flint honestly I think you weren’t too bad. still a shitty Dad.

Seanfrks

Honestly, really did not like the whole Lugia marking Lola flashback/reveal. Lola not being all there mentally as a result of PTSD was already enough, and just adding the influence of a legendary makes it seem like you are trying to make out what she did in leaving her family wasn't her own choice in the end of the day.

ShinLupin

give it time, maybe much time, but it can happen

ShinLupin

Lola? Not Sabrina?

ShinLupin

seconded

ShinLupin

The usual rythm is Monday and Tuesday.

ShinLupin

Maybe Sabrina can get into Lola's think head? either with her powers or by being really, really scary and quite protective of Brock & Siblings?

Fred Steel

If I had to take a guess, if that plot thread happens, then Serena currently lives in the part of Johto that's being contested by Kalos, and will later move to Kalos before Ash goes there.

MaliMi

Agreed.

dragonslaver

(Just joking of course 😜)

Mike

I don’t think it’s Lola. Just alluded to a young girl. Could be someone else

dragonslaver

Viva01. I have to tell you, from the bottom of my heart. That i absolutely hate you at this moment. You can't just prepare us for brocks anger to then give us a whole chapter of nothing but harmonic communications. DROP THE SHOE PLEASE!

Mario Schade

I.really.can't.stand.Lola. And right now I'm hoping for a crushing defeat, because only a Pokemon fight and a defeat there (=no access to the family) can somehow bring Lola to her senses. Words are lost on her.

Bat

That is a good line and I hope Brock tells Lola that

Chris

Huh, the GS ball being a reason for the missing Lugia child. Very interesting foreshadowing. I wonder if that’ll become Brock’s big mess to deal with while Ash and friends deal with the 2nd movie shenanigans. Both issues would compound into each other in such a way that it would really force the world to split their focus. Also hope no one’s in transit or visiting the new nations at that time, otherwise you have a perfect storm for people to be lost at sea and discover another lost nation.

Qweku_v

DUN...DUN....DUUUUUUNNNNNN!!!

Worrior Lord

If I believe in poke-Jesus hard enough, we’ll have a double upload

HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan

Thanks for the chapter! Now I really want a future chapter where Brock meets a Legendary, and the interaction is from the Legendary's POV

Fred Steel

I didn't even consider that Lugia was referring to Lola in his segment. That's going to make things *really* interesting when Sabrina notices. It also changes what I thought the 'itches' in Lola's mind were/are. I agree though that Lola still shouldn't have left.

Coes

Same. I need closure. I have been wondering about this for like 4 weeks. It makes for a good page turner but dear God my blood pressure.

PurpleHart

Listen, I'm not angry, at this point I expect it and honestly, it's on me for reading an ongoing fic. Especially one known for moving at a glacial pace. But c'mon you know what you're doing here. The reaction/changes occurring because of the three nations showing up can come after the confrontation that you've been aluding to for 250 chapters at this point. I mean you've been building up Lola's return and the family reaction to it since extremely early in this story. We're on the precipice of getting it and now all of a sudden we are reading about poacher Lawrence who I'm pretty sure is making his debut and Team Aqua troop movements? Again, not angry and I hope this doesn't come off as me being an ass, it's just frustrating. Maybe a 5% chance it comes in tomorrow's drop and we don't have to wait another week. Maybe tomorrow's chapter we can read about taillow migratory patterns in Hoenn.

The GrandMage

Brock is oncoming like the first strands of Boss music. "What are you doing in my house? You've got a house, exactly as you left it. Abandoned and uncared for."

MaliMi

Do not care that Lugia marked her. Still hate Lola with every fiber in my body.

Rinaldo

I think Brock will not be too upset at his family (Flint in particular) because it was always going to be fraught and would be too much to ask Flint to handle by himself even without the added factor of a Champion showing up.

Addicted2Games

Can't wait for Brock to come back and give Lola what for. Also, something just occured to me. Do we know when Serena moved to Kalos? Because she Kalos only just became available now, where did she go after that pokemon camp w/Prof Oak after meeting Ash?

PurpleHart

50

Bat

Not surprised in the end Lola won but at least Flint actually tried to bar her at first.

Petrox

Lawrence saved his ass. Attacking legendaries would have been safer than attacking Brock's house on that time. Now I know how they got so many children. It was all Lola

Matt H

I can't believe I never thought of this before, but I'm now desperately wishing to see a battle between Cynthia and Oak!

ShinLupin

ah, Lawrence and flying palace... guess he dodged a Rock only to get felled by being Ash'd later. Seriously, what an selfabsorbed ass. If anybody deserves a serious Prof Oak giving a reminder why you don't mess with old vets, then he. Speaking of vets Lola is still in her Lala-land. Will reality ever catch up with her? But her skills as a trainer seem still to be at "scares armies away", this might cause problems.

Ant1h3ld

Wasn't really a betrayal I think? Lola abused his distraction and then burrowed herself into the place like a botfly maggot. And then abused his affection.

David Green

Love this, Sparks are gonna fly when Brock finally turns up

Coes

Please dear God the suspense is killing me. How many more chapters until Brock comes home?

Deltoren

Oh brock is gonna be pissed. This betrayal by flint is bad.

Worrior Lord

Aw shucky ducky quack quack

Orbnet

I have been waiting for this! And I also want to say I read you like a book Viva :p


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