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Hard Enough - Chapter 302 - Ripples

🕑 Added 2025-02-18 19:00:09 +0000 UTC

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Anonykor

Yeah, I think Mega Stones will be the driving factor in the future conflicts in the story. On an international level, it becomes even more of an arms race.

Bird B

!!Izumi Fastball Incoming!!

HonorBound Fate

I’m mostly speculating. Obviously Pokémon like Kleavor, UrsaLuna, weirdeer, etc.. haven’t been discovered yet. They aren’t in the sinnoh games, anime, or dex so it’s likely they’ve been forgotten to time except in pictographs, journals and such.

Rhett Sellers

A funny image. But I think Sabrina would be more creative than a shovel, particularly since she will know in advance. If there is one thing the most powerful psychic (and fiancée) knows, its when there is someone making a move on her man that she feels threatened by. When creativity, motive, and determination meet, expect the unexpected. Sabrina would bitch slap Murphy's Law, rename it Sabrina's Law, and set it loose on Cynthia 🤣

Rhett Sellers

I mean, brock hasnt shared the method except with one of his gym trainers. I would imagine similar motivations for not sharing powerful item based evolutions exist elsewhere in the world too. The timelines in all the gens are slightly off from each other as well, so its very possible many evolutions we take for granted in later gens arent discovered yet.

Rhett Sellers

Imagine if the exterior has vaporeon on it, like those anime girl paint schemes in japan, and every time brock sees it at an airport later in life he gets flashbacks

Rhett Sellers

Nicely phrased @Jason

Rhett Sellers

Its a matter of perspective. To me, 7+ years is almost a decade.

Rhett Sellers

She has clearly a large amount of experience using aura. Experienced aura users have been shown to have superhuman or even supernatural abilities in this. If she is hypothetically a water aura expert, she could just turn into water and leave like suigetsu in naruto. Not that that is what happened, but its clearly feasible based on what we have seen from sabrina, koga, and agatha already. Karen might one day be able to shadow travel or something.

Rhett Sellers

I was more thinking its twice now she's kept him from exploring the hoenn desert

HonorBound Fate

There is also that the sinnoh games are years in the future.

HonorBound Fate

You’re not wrong.

Rinaldo

Not enough data

Jericho Rising

Oh my Gawd the Rotom/Porygon interactions in Brocks Gym gonna be wild

HonorBound Fate

I’m asking this pretty late so I may ask this again later, but are the other regions missing evolutions that Brock has. We’ve seen that Kingdra was a Pokémon that wasn’t revealed prior to the exhibition match between Brock and lance. For example rhyperior, team rocket had access to sinnoh - however little it may have been - Giovanni’s agents would certainly do threat assessments on the elite four and “Interestingly named” sinnoh elite four member Bertha should have a rhyperior. There’s a good chance that the knowledge to evolve rhydon is public knowledge, and if so why wasn’t Giovanni’s rhydon evolved. Also I don’t think he had mammoswine so maybe they don’t have a resurrection machine to revive ancient Pokémon with which to teach ancient power to evolve Tangela, yanma, and piloswone.

I_WANT_SOMETHING_ETERNAL

It feels like, he felt the next step was o be marriage. And while Sabrina is a good girlfriend, he's spending 90% of his time caretaking. If you are in a relationship, you do not have to marry. It just seems rushed. I long for more Pokémon development.

Donald Bagwell

Love this, add on flint trying to get them to stop only to be side eyed by the entire ranch before empress raises a single eyebrow in a “really?” Pose

Donald Bagwell

Remember the rocket attack? The onix and gravelers and golem? I fully see a more paranoid brock setting up more shit just to kick ass

Donald Bagwell

He left at 11, taught sabrina how to people from 11-13/14 as fake dating, got back together around 16, and engaged at mid 17 Sounds like a teen drama

Donald Bagwell

She made it through patrol routes with base knowledge. I take it as she is an elite spy/ intelligence agent that was similar to koga in the war personally

Donald Bagwell

Not cruel but deserved. I want suzy smack talk

Donald Bagwell

I wonder if we all give a dollar extra or something if viva would give an extra chapter?

Donald Bagwell

Enter blackthorn elders being incompetent

Big Sloppy

Gen 1 cloyster can learn teleport

Mike

An interesting ripple: the trinity nations overestimating Indigo’s strength due to their League tournament. They hi jacked the TV feeds; so only the tournament channel can help them pass time.

Brendan White

Let me guess...Lola's Cloyster used to be a Shellder that was joined with a Slowking. That's how it knows Teleport.

Jason Sampson

Lola doesn't get that her home is an abandoned building. She abandoned it.

Jason Sampson

There wouldn't happen to be a higher still unannounced tier that doesn't leave us with cliffhangers?

Jason Sampson

YES, FASTER JET! MAXIMUM THRUST!

Ch W

And thanks for the chapter

Ch W

... Before Kruger could continue, a chill swept over the room, and the lights flickered. ... I'm gonna guess a Rotom passing by, maybe a spy for the Trinity Union.

Jean Marc Kunnen

I think they meant that empress has adopted gible not cynthia.

QuazarKMax

Kirlia gonna be rocking back and forth in the shower with wide bloodshot eyes and scalding hot water after getting that vision of what went on on that plane 😂

Jean Marc Kunnen

They have not known each other for a decade. I’m fairly sure brock’s like 16-17 years old and he had his journey a year late i think because lola ran away so at best they know each other for half a decade

9Tales

ROLF, Oh god I don't need that image

Rhett Sellers

She hasnt. They just cant english properly when expressing things they want to see happen.

Rhett Sellers

How was the proposal rushed? They spent hours talking in the desert, having a heart to heart, and he asked her to marry him, and she said yes. That is the opposite of rushing a proposal. Particularly after theyve been close for almost a decade.

Rhett Sellers

You mean Mega Mewtwo X vs Darkrai when?

Rhett Sellers

I loved the chapter, Rocket Trio included. Particularly the vain Milotic!

Rhett Sellers

🤣🤣🤣

rezo42

Or Lola will set off the security growlithe, which will set off the rest of the reserve. Either way, pore Cynthia will be following Lola thinking. "please, please don't cause an international incident." Only to see an army base worth of Pokemon take battle stations.

iceknight90

The Vaporean Sex Jet cannot arrive in Indigo fast enough

Seanfrks

Yeahhh, that would be way too tame of a reaction from Brock.

The GrandMage

I just imagine Brock coming by for The Reckoning only to have Lola scream, "My baby!" And rush to hug him. "I am a grown man!" Meanwhile Cynthia and Sabrina have locked gazes.

Mario Schade

Phew... I really hope the whole scene around Lola works. What exactly do I wish for? I don't know, but I can't just accept this kind of character without consequences of the actions and so i fear there will be scenes i dont like... but i believe in Viva01! So I probably want a really hard reality check for Lola. Is it possible to have sympathy for her after the war has probably ruined things and she seems to have done it all out of a sense of family? Yes, probably a little--but life is not a solo game and every action has consequences in a partnership, friendship, family, society. And characters who simply ignore that and still get everything they want I really can't consume with a clear conscience. They just get on my nerves. Now, the world isn't fair... but within a story, I can wish that Lola will experience a total failure here and perhaps realize afterwards that she has a problem. And since there are still a lot of strong Pokemon everywhere, the whole thing probably won't end with a little argument. Brock Gym vs. Lola, Flint vs. Lola?, Brock vs. Lola! Reality has to hit hard and maybe Cynthia will help Lola realize that something is actually broken here.

Viva01

The Rocket trio scene is slice of life, but it highlights some key points in that the world has changed from what it was supposed to be doing due to Brock. Jessie is in the top 250 or so trainers in the people going for their badges. She has a Milotic thanks to Brock's teachings and James now has a Gyarados. Forrest lost his do or die match to make the same bracket as his friends due to most likly learning about his mother's return. of a chapter that is 6400 words it's a third of it with the other points being the big figures aka Kruger and Lance showing the impacts that the sudden appearance is having on them along with multiple cultural differences. Lola is back as well causing even more chaos with her inability to just sit down and wait. Her grabbing Cynthia also causes significant impacts to negotiations as well as impacting her family directly. The plane scene needs to happen as an alert went out causing planes to be grounded that were on about to depart to Indigo. again more impacts of this sudden reveal. Brock needed a different way to get

Simca

That Cliff hanger was Diabolical…

TheDudeAbides

Well the announcement came at 10pm Kanto time and then in the morning meowth and James had time to see Forrest lose his match (I assume, since their description of the match sounded like they were there). The president sees them and decides to buy the poffins but his assistant isn't there to buy them until after Jessie's match, that means that he must have seen them just before they took the break. Otherwise, the assistant would have been there before they left. Also the president gets the call about Lola escaping around this time, so presumably she hadn't been gone for long. If brock and Sabrina got on a plane reasonably soon after the announcement (like, they get in the air by midnight Kanto time) then they'd be arriving by 10am-ish. Personally it reads to me like Jessie's match was sometime around or a bit after noon. I say that because Meowth and James having a rush and then taking a break would make sense at lunch time. All of that is to say, I think Lola might be showing up to Brock and Sabrina already being home.

Eren Jaeger

I absolutely love this story and your writing, but kinda lame to add in scenes that either don’t need to happen at all (the plane 🤮) , or scenes that could have been in literally any other chapter (rocket trio who I love dearly) , just so you can drag out the cliff hanger another week. I actually found myself not enjoying the rocket trio scene because the only thing I was able to really think about was “they’re seriously gonna make us wait another week” as more and more of the chapter was going by. Almost expecting next week to be all interludes just to drag it out even longer.

TheDudeAbides

What do you mean Cynthia adopted gible?

TheDudeAbides

Rushed? They've been together for like, half their lives at this point?

Mike

My main gripe is Lola just escaping with her Pokémon from debriefing. It’s one thing with just a nurse but another at a secure facility with security personnel

QuazarKMax

Brock also owns the land, as trained Pokémon Lola’s team would know that when the owner tells you to get out you leave or potentially get arrested.

rezo42

Now I'm picturing Sabrina just hanging out in the parifery whith a shovel anytime Cynthia comes over

dragonslaver

Oh my friend. Believe me when I say, we ALL feel you. SO GIVE US MORE VIVA

QuazarKMax

Most of them remember Brock can carry 10 Pokemon on him at once and of those available slots he took several of his weaker Pokemon with him to train them on his break hoping to get them to evolve. Gible, Zubat, Cranidos and Tirtouga are just the four off the top of my head so yes there are several of his elites at the gym.

Mike

Anyone pick up on the Darkrai plot point ? Ooo boy - Mewtwo vs Darkai when ?

QuazarKMax

Yes very much!

HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan

Idea: Lola is powerful, but she's also been out at sea and traveling for a while. Fighting wild Pokémon and stuff. Brock's Gym has many pokemon trained to amazing precision. Some are powerful like Empress, some have more fitness like [insert name of that one Geodude]. My proposal? Brock's pokemon kick Lola out. It's not a even much of a contest (partially because Lola is in shock and partially because Brock's pokemon are telling her pokemon exactly how their trainer feels about Lola which... Lola's pokemon aren't assholes. They aren't going to force the interaction)

Squeeky602

Lola is going to bust down the doors. This will set off Empress, who has lost children, human children even, to violence before. Then Cynthia will step in, which will set off the Gym alarms, sending all the pokemon into defence mode. Pewter Gym is considered a Military asset...International Incident imminent!

DigDoom

I don’t think Cynthia is unreasonable though. She would definitely be interested in the situation but she’s hardly going to abduct a Gym leader’s Pokémon while their governments are beginning negotiations. Lola doing something stupid like telling Cynthia she can have Gible in front of Brock, Sabrina or Empress… who knows

Tyler Babcock

There doesn't happen to be a pateron for advanced chapters when this pateron full of advanced chapters aren't enough during the cliff hangers? No? Can't wait for the next one.

ReadAthon45

Nice chapter. Does anyone else wanna see Cynthia and Lola’s reaction to Brock’s Aura

Astralogical

Knowing Lola being a bit loopy and selfish I can see her trying to set up Brock with Cynthia much to sabrina chagrin

Rinaldo

I think we can sus out most of who Brock WOULDNT bring. Don for volatility, none of the babies or unnamed elites, Empress as she’s taking care of her kids, probably not Hypnotoad or Shin as as he’d likely have tide as safety net in case of a plane crash. So that would leave Titan, Bertha, Jorm, Zephyr, Tide, Selene, Knight, Gawain, Link, and a toss up between Sanchez and Shrek. So you’d probably have Hypnotoad as the sole one who would likely not make a mess of things if Shrek isn’t there.

Oblivious Bookwyrm

Not really. You can surmise that pretty much every Psychic type pokemon can learn the TM, since that is more or less the case for Gen 1 Psychic-type pokemon (It’s why Lunatone and Solrock learning it doesn’t bother me). And you can assume the same for Psychic-inclined pokemon that aren’t Psychic-type themselves, but learn a lot of Psychic-type attacks or have abilities that are typically attributed to Psychic-types (I’m thinking pokemon like Dialga, Palkia, Noivern, and Lucario). As long as an Author gives a reasonable explanation, a reader’s suspension of disbelief should take care of the rest. That’s a tactic that should be used sparingly however. I never really got the point of fanfictions giving pokemon moves they shouldn’t learn. It needlessly breaks canon; Pokemon have such huge move pools typically that it shouldn’t really be necessary to write a compelling narrative.

Glitched Knights

Oh fuck. That makes so much sense that I hate it

Orbnet

Yeah but she is clearly not right in the head, she needs to heal. What would probably be the best is a lot of therapy and her being in a institution trying to... wake her up? And then slowly earning and slowly getting acces back to her family

Jean Marc Kunnen

Lance and kruger would like to disagree lol

Ben Lockwood

I think for sure empress is still their, not sure about the other elites. Empress will probably have a larger problem with Cynthia, with trying to get the gible, as she has adopted it.

PiezoVolt

Yea it's ironic that Lola leaving out and end to Brock's journey and her arriving put an end to Forrest's in a way

David P.

I know some people might have the sentiment “It’ll be a long time before Lola is welcome in the house, she’ll need to put in some real work for it” or something to that effect. Is it wrong if I instead say I hope that never happens? I desire the full rejection. The complete shut out. I want it to be biblical. I want it to be so harsh that Cynthia feels the need to step in and try to defend Lola. I want two Tyranitars and a Mega-Steelix to tell her to stay out of it. I want so many things.

nugitoBambino

oh really? i disagree, I thought this was the perfect level of setup where it was in line with all the characters personality. Like yeah, there's coincidence, but it's a story and my initial gut check of "yeah all those people would act like that to get to this point" checks out to me

I_WANT_SOMETHING_ETERNAL

I like Sabrina, but the proposal I feel is rushed. Seriously. I like romance, but I like him taking care of business. Also, his new evolutions seem to have fell by the wayside. I still love the fiction, but I want to be honest in my feedback.

Orbnet

I was right! Damn you Viva01 why couldn't I be wrong and be rid of this cliffhanger? xd

Joe The squatch

just a passing thought I had, but of brocks elite team, who does he not have on him right this moment, do they understand the situation with his mother... and how would they react to whats going on right now

carebear90

Sure, but it also massively limits who an author can reliably teach Teleport. Or, taking your example: Who could an enterprising thief who stole this strategic resource even sell the TM to? But this is one of the reasons I don't see a problem with Sabrina teaching Lunatone the move in this fic. Most Psychic types would be able to learn the TM if they had access to it, IMO. But what about the non-psychics who could potentially learn it? We have absolutely no clue. And that's a shame.

gra gra

Oh god she's reaction gif posting.

SailorOfHouseThunderBird

And im keeping my fingers crossed for it. Im just hoping that Lola gives Brock and Sabrina a good reason to jump her like Viva forgot this wasn't a JJK crossover for a chapter. 🤞 🙏

James Nagy

I don’t think it would cruel at all. If anything the vice versa would be cruel.

Jordan Lopez

I like that you've shown that Cynthia might not just be Lola's friend she might actually kind of be her therapist

Jordan Lopez

Lol Brock is so much like his mother just not so lackadaisical of ignoring what he does to other's

Bat

Oh the waiting…..

Jordan Lopez

That could mean in a story like this it's a strategic wartime advantage that cannot be traded or sold to other countries

Mike

Author one complaint: I love the drama here but I feel you are making it too contrived. Everything is lining up too conveniently for an explosion 💥

Mike

That’s true. But this new shatter point would make her ripe for the picking: *Enter Cyrus with the New World*

QuazarKMax

How does the previous chapter link up time wise to this one? Brock got that plane back asap and when it was the middle of the night in indigo - a 10 hour flight, but we don’t know when this chapters final scene is since Lola was in holding before running off so if it’s the afternoon I can see Brock and Sabrina getting back mid explosion. Really looking forward to the next chapter the drama is looking to be delicious 😁 Great job Viva 👍

Retribrutus

You know, it might seem a tad mean or downright cruel to think this, but how funny would it be that ALL of Brock's siblings would be more ecstatic to hear that he proposed to Sabrina rather than Lola popping back into their lives?

Aiden Maxwell Childs

Soooon. Soon it begins. Super mom, great and terrible

carebear90

What sanity? She's already completely nuts...

kelan parris

Thank you

Qweku_v

Royal Road has the link

carebear90

Of course, she has the Cloyster to Flint's Onix... I still find it sad that only Gen 1 pokemon get to use the Teleport TM... since it never existed in any other gen. I bet there would be so much more pokemon who could learn it if they had the TM available in later games.

Gojisoar

Of course when I decide to shill out and pay for the patreon i catch up to some of the most tense, dramatic, angsty, hyped up moment in the story. AHHHHHHHGG. (ノ`Д´)ノ彡┻━┻

PitrPatR

I am curious to see if/how Mega Evolution comes up. Steven has put a lot of money and political capital into trying to be the guy you go to for mega stones. Kalos has the potential to upset those efforts. This could also become an issue in conjunction with disputes over territory which are already being raised. Indigo got caught flat-footed, and most of the younger generation knows so little about the issues that led to the war that outsiders coming in with these claims will likely prompt a defensive response should those claims go public. There’s a lot of ways for things to go wrong, and that brings a kind of tension to the story that the battles don’t. I’m eager to see where things go from here.

ShinLupin

Lance and his rival-mode for Brock, just endure your Hero is on the way. Poor mr. president will need a vacation soon, a health-check sooner. The Rocket Trio shows their development, Misty shows a little of why Mono-type experts can be scary. Lola jumps without watching, thankfully a sane, level-headed woman is dragged by her. I hope whoever is still in the Gym will be able to contain the chaos that is Lola... Maybe Empress can lay down the law?

kelan parris

Can anyone tell me the discord link or point me towards it?

First drunken immortal

MORE MORE MORE!!!!

Chris

Well Rachel, time to navigate your first real media scandal for the gym. Good luck.

Mike

Pitching in right now. Lola is going to have a full meltdown. Rejection from her family will shatter her sanity.

JustAFan

Daaaaammnnn. Cliffhanger Really want to see the confrontation & explosions especially with Cynthia there

G 21

Artghh

Qweku_v

Chaaaaoooossss!!!

Homeless One

Hoo boy, it's happening! Battle Stations, everyone!

Petrox

Damn, first they screwed Brock, now it's Forrest turn. Can't wait for next week.

David Green

Fucking lola, she seems to sweep everyone up in her wake

Thomas Brusilovsky

Lola is a force of nature lmao

Donald Bagwell

Deliciously evil to end on this. Never said it before, never plan on it again. Also wtf is going to happen with cynthia seeing what might be gible in a spa day with brocks sisters? Either way evil of you to end it here!

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter

Minh tri

Can't wait for the confrontation!


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