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Red Riot - Interlude - Violence is my love language

🕑 Added 2024-12-26 23:04:49 +0000 UTC

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Astra

lol she’s like a rabid dog becoming a bit less rabid 🤣

Raikor

Learning that Matsu was saved behind the scenes by the clan head was an interesting surprise. I had figured they just respected him, but it does make sense with how genin were the majority of his opponents *every* time he went there. You would think more Chunin or higher would investigate the brat who so casually came to train with them. I love Himiko and it’s great to see her make friends. Also a surprise look at Matsu’s second.

Xi Cree

The Mizukage has a love hate relationship with Matsu... on the one hand he's proving to be one of the strongest, most capable ninja of the next generation, a perfect tool for motivating lazier entrenched factions, and a source of new ideas that seem to be working out extremely well... On the other hand. He's a self-proclaimed potential rival who is growing rapidly, and if he grows TOO quickly might want to take the seat of Mizukage for his own without waiting for Gengetsu to die or step down on his own first. He is a THREAT. One which is an easy weed to pull right now, but if it gets too strong too quickly could kill the gardener.

MagicWafflez

hanahime is for sure never happening. eventually it will get out that matsu never killed rei. which means *only she* had to kill an important person to her. she is for sure going to hate him for that.

nugitoBambino

@Jerico Rising I think the fact the bone jutsu isn't chakra intensive is what makes it such a crazy combo for a half-uzumaki. It's like when Kimimaro activated the cursed seal against Gaara, he went from small-medium bone weapons to like a bone forest lol. IDK, like a full plate-mail bone knight whipping around uzumaki chains would be awesome lmao

Jorge Moreno García

The 2nd Ninja War started around 14 years before Naruto was born(BNB), and the Third starts 4 years BNB. When Naruto is Born, Minato is 23-24yo. Matsu is around Minato's age, so theoretically he too could have a child around the same time frame as Minato.

Oblivious Bookwyrm

Meh. I prefer fanfics with OCs or Self-Inserts over AU. When your fanfic has the same main character as the original work, it’s just begging to be compared to it every step of the way. And most of those kind of fanfics fall short in that comparison. It always feels like if I want to read a story about the main protagonist, I should just reread or rewatch the original work. Granted, I’ve never read Traveler. So I might give it a chance, but it ain’t surpassing Hard Enough in my eyes. When any other story can make a government audit an actual compelling enemy against an overpowered protagonist, and have an entire arc dealing with accounting be PEAK fiction, then we’ll talk 😎

Jorge Moreno García

You know, I sort of wish to see Kizan humbled by Matsu. Either by Matsu's Genin attaining the rank of Chunin before Kizan, or by Matsu himself when he becomes Mizukage and offers Kizan a position in his new goverment. Kizan: So keep your enemies closer, huh? Matsu: Nope, you are just somewhat useful for now.

Imef

Aren't they two generations apart? I'm not too well versed in the Naruto lore, but I think Jiraiya was like a father figure to Minato? By my estimate, Jiraiya, Tsunade, and Orochimaru are well into their mid-fifties maybe even early sixties by the time the main cast become Genin. Then again, the third Hokage trained the Sannin and his grandson is younger than Naruto... So Matsu is a good deal younger than the third and slightly younger than Orochimaru... So, 1.5 generations apart at minimum? That'd probably mean any child he has in the next 15-20 years is more of a mentor or person of respect than an actual peer to the Konoha 12.

NinjaShinobi124

Not gonna call it until Hanahime is reintroduced but I'm happily predicting that Himeko will be the future love interest (unless this is harem fic, then I am certain she is).

Jorge Moreno García

Now I want Matsu and Himeko's Child to fight in the same Chunin Exam as the Konoha 12.

William Prince

Now hold on, Bookwyrm. Hard Enough is easily Top 3, maybe it is the best, but let's not discount the beast that is Traveler. 2+M words and counting, and some of the best structured and descriptive battles put to paper. Not to mention unparalleled world building. That said, I agree more chapters.

Jericho Rising

Agreed, once a month is better than a lot of great stories

Jericho Rising

That's legitimately the point of what the voters asked for.

Jericho Rising

Kaguya bone jutsu isn't too Chakra intensive I'd imagine. So while cool, it detracts from the massive Chakra pool Uzumaki are known for.

Jericho Rising

Not blooded as per the usual testing. The mizukage ordered an execution of the weakest, there was no combat to the death, thus matsu wasn't blooded.

Oblivious Bookwyrm

“I wish we got this fix more than once a month” Nah, work/life balance is important. I much prefer Viva being in a healthy mindset to continue writing than burning out. Besides, Hard Enough is the best Pokemon fanfic by far, I don’t want him cutting those chapters down

PitrPatR

When Himeko mentions that Matsu didn’t blood himself as was expected, is she referring to before the graduation test or after? Because unless a fresh genin caught something a kage missed, she should be under the impression that Matsu killed Rei. Maybe the Mizukage respected the absolute gall required to try and fool all of them, but the genin seemed to buy it, even those that knew Matsu better. Or is she saying something based on her understanding as a member of the Kaguya, who appear to expect fights to the death earlier than graduation?

Middlemoe2

Proving once again the Himeko is best girl! Also just saying but an Uzumaki/Kaguya kid sounds like a fucking nightmare for the ninja world yet absolutely precious for their parent s XD!

Jack Herschel

Interestingly enough, the name of the Kaguya bloodline seems to be a higher-echelon clan secret, at least in this era. I wonder what’s gonna happen when Matsu inevitably name drops the Shikotsumyaku

Carter

I like Himeko but I feel like she focused a little too much on Matsu this chapter. It got kinda annoying imho

Trevor Fuhlman

I like Himeko... That is all.

Blahful

Agreed!

Green0Photon

> Everyone wants Matsu's rebellion, even the Kage and clan heads This is pretty obviously true. This is pretty clear why, tbh 1) Matsu is strong. Ridiculously strong. And he grows super fast. If he's not stopped, it's clear he really could be Mizukage. 2) And Kiri worships strength. Matsu isn't just strong physically and with killing, but he's strong politically and has a vision. He's someone who people want to follow. He promises people, even those of the clans, a better life. When you're in a despotic authoritarian regime, a strongman promising a better life is exactly who you want. 3) Matsu is an Uzumaki. And when you're evil, you love corrupting your oh so high enemy. That's part of why they destroyed Uzushio, and why they treated Matsu the way they did. It's one thing to make him your bitch to laugh in the face of Uzushio, but what better way than to corrupt their children? All that strength and potential, and it's Kiri's. That baby who should've had Uzushio's culture, no, he's from Kiri now. (Kuukuukuu, as Orochimaru would then laugh.) 4) The Mizukage knows he can't live forever. He wants a worthy successor. And increasingly he's found someone bold enough and skilled enough to do so. Throw some tricks at him, grow the next generation, make him strong. And maybe he would be worthy of carrying on Kiri. 5) Matsu isn't affiliated with a clan. Sure, any particular clan would love a clansman as Kage. But it's bad for someone else to have it. So if they have a guy who can be neutral, that's huge. Especially if he's actually strong. Because meanwhile, the strong only come from clans. And here's this guy, friends with everyone in the next generation. (Bro's like Minato, really.) The only downsides are if he's not strong enough. That's why they want all the internal killing ceremonies, after all. It ensures they're strong. But Matsu isn't just strong enough to live through that. He's strong enough to defy it. And those close to him grow stronger way faster. Increasingly it looks like the person to follow is him. Because he's strong. When you're strong, that's all that matters. And for how he's made strong people from the weak. There will be those who want to keep the status quo. But sooner or later, they won't be able to resist, between people convinced to follow Matsu and for the strength of Matsu and his followers. I wish we got this fic more than once a month.

Tom Tat

Now it is officiall! She must be his final waifu! She is f adorable!

RDZ90

Nice, I guess most of myself included if there was any romantic or strategic partnership regarding Matsu, Himeko seemed a strong candidate, nevertheless it was nice to see her current mindframe and get a glimpse of the Kaguya clan, I would respectfully request for another short pov with Hanahime to see the Terumi clan, perspective, Nevertheless thanks for the update and have a happy New Year!! Looking forward to another installment of this fantastic fic!!!

MagicWafflez

xD omg! I didn't realize that I wished for an update on what kizan was doing, but that was amazing~♡ I can't wait for matsu and him to cross paths after matau hits jounin "what happened to your face?" hm hm~ the kaguya situation was nearly dangerous for our little future mizukage... luckily their clan head is also a shipper at heart... I bet that was the weird look she got when talking about him. I definitely think he can count on their support for the position when the time comes... and they're secretly a lot more numerous than expected... I should have realized, with how murderhobo-y they'd need a large strong base of normal people to not die out.

Blahful

It's almost like everyone wants Matsu's rebellion, even the mizukage and the clan heads.

White Neko Knight

Himiko is going to be an interesting love intrest.

Razorfloss razor

It'll be hilarious if the kaguya end up becoming the best healers in the village.

Faolen

That clan head has plans, and is watching Matsu's development with great interest.


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