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Red Riot - Chapter 30 - The battle in the steam

🕑 Added 2024-12-22 19:00:12 +0000 UTC

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Astra

Well realistically they probably wouldn’t let someone like Bee leave Kumo so easily. Not for something like this. I also had a oh fuck moment when Orochimaru came sauntering in. Btw this line “Hito took a few careful lungfuls before stepping forward, looking for any signs that the boy had survived.” -> I thought he was the one who died already?

J H

I love this story. I know you hear it a lot, but as someone who came to your Patreon for Hard Enough and then discovered this gem, I'd love more chapters being dedicated to Red Riot. I love both stories but would definitely be a fan of a few fewer chapters of Hard Enough to get more Red Riot each month.

Xi Cree

You guard your back for the moment that the cost benefit calculation might shift.

SailorOfHouseThunderBird

Yeah, i meant that i had hoped to see it in use, and was glad to see it.

Blahful

I don't think he cares to betray you unless the cost benefit favors him. For example, he'd not care to dissect Matsu and instead get himself another Uzumaki.

J

Well, at least Gengetsu will be enjoying all this chaos

Xi Cree

This Orochimaru, Ei, Matsu standoff is what I love for with this fic LOL The fun thing is that Orochi if he wasn't on the opposite side of the enemy divide would be an amazing collaborator for research projects... So long as you were good enough to guard your back from him at least LOL.

Xi Cree

Man I can believe it... Spell check would be on your behind every time you used his name.

Jericho Rising

Wonderful follow up to last chapter.

Tom Tat

This story is so good that I could not waiting anymore and decided to support you. Great staff and finally SI which is not a Kanoha shinoby

Daniel Ryan

I read it more as I, if I wanted to do A phonetically I'd use Ay or Ae.

G 21

Amazing and exciting stuff. Loving the plot

David Gaddis

That moment you remember this is only after the 2nd war, not the 3rd, and you realize you might have to reread some chapters. Life's tough bruv

Vudkan

Would anyone be able to point me to the chapters to remember the Hyuuga genjustu stuff? I honestly think I need to do a full reread as it’s been a bit, cause I thought that Matsu had sealed away the hyuuga eye? Or did he seal away only one? Or did they get enough info from the time they had it to help Gengestu create his anti hyuuga genjutsu? While looking for these scenes I saw when he (didn’t) reveal the eye to his sensei when sharing his dreams. So I know he’s in possession of at least one, just trying to remember the other details.

Skinnybonz

The tent scene was hilarious, Yukari's indignation to Akiko had me chuckling.

Oblivious Bookwyrm

Ah, nah I get it. It’s so annoying tho, from a reader perspective! I didn’t even know who that was until I looked it up. Even when you stated it was the future Fourth Raikage, I was like “What??? The future Raikage’s name is not Ei. Is this an alternate universe OC??” Given various Kumogakure Ninja are named after the English alphabet, I read that as “E”. For me, this was like Zolo all over again (I actually read a fanfic that insisted on calling Zoro that)

Viva01

Do you know how annoying and trippy it is as a writer to write A and have it register as a name when editing? I can assure you Ei is easier to use from a writer's perspective. Trust me on this. The entire time I was writing NNT I wanted to kill 'A' off purely for the grammatical nightmare he caused everytime I went to edit a chapter with him in it.

MadOpportunity

I just wanted to say that I thought the opening fight scene was excellent. Generally I think POV changes are massively overused and spoon feed the audience (please no Gengutsu) but having the confusion & disorientation was a great way to show genjutsu skill and make the fight dynamic.

Oblivious Bookwyrm

Oh Hell, no. His name is A, not “Ei”. Please, for the love of all that is good, do NOT perpetuate Viz’s translation mistakes

MagicWafflez

I asked a similar question on chapter 26, which was answered by viva. so matsu graduated at 9, almost 10. his students were in the year below him, and had 6 months from their graduation to the chunin exams. he celebrated his 11th birthday on screen with his 10th happening while deployed at war.

MagicWafflez

Im thinking he didn't plan it, but it *totally* felt them near by and decided to drag them into it.

Alex Horsey

I would love it if Matsu Matt said because we’re going on that tour let’s go and have some jasmine tea to calm the nerves like it would be fucking hilarious like me having a one of the tail beast, the group of people around a small table drinking tea talking about stupid stuff that would be funny waiting to go on a tour. It would just be hilarious if he act like uncle Iroh from avatar it would just be funnier I doubt that will have nothing. Nothing like this will ever happen.

Zeroguard

He did use Gengetsu's genjutsu, that's how he was able to even affect the Hyuga in the first place.

Zeroguard

Probably yeah, though he'll likely want Matsu more formidable still.

willydasilva

Thank you for the chapter! Love the fanfic

Blahful

This is Matsu. And it's been 2 weeks. Plenty of time to do a little tip-off. He doesn't need to contact Ai, he just needs to let Kumo know. For such diplomacy (accusation) as this one, a high profile team would be sent. At the minimum a Jounin who can properly accuse without quaking in their boots.

Fran

He didn't have any contact with Kumo before this, how would he be able to contact Ei or the jinchuriki?

Alex Horsey

But actually, I love I loved it. I hope this happens in the next chapters like this all go and have some tea. I can see his face smiling and actually sitting down and all the most awkward tea ceremony in history. Better that all them tried to make some conversations. Nice weather and all. Waiting for that person to show them that tour.

Blahful

Okay, so did Matsu planned this? Did he tip them off for insurance?

NinjaShinobi124

Really hoping for a "world reacts" chapter soon as Matsu gets more well know. Really want Konoha and the others nations react after the show I'm sure Matsu will pull at the Chuunin exams.

oakes

Imagine if Gengetsu just faded into view behind Matsu. And he had been there the entire mission. That would have been nightmare material right there.

oakes

Jezus. As usual Matsu has giant brass balls, and he is very good at thinking on his feet. Amazing work Viva, this story has always been my absolute favorite

Xodarap4

Well that's another A rank mission on top of their Bounty mission plus the honeytrap mission. Is that enough for Gengetsu's requirements?

Earendel

Yeaaaaah new chapter

MaliMi

I agree on Gengetsu. Not knowing what he does next or why is the major point of his character. Anyway the next few chapters should be fun.

Corvus Black

He's still 11. He's the same age as Minato.

Flipflop

How old is Matsu, I though he was older than 11 by now?

MondayMorning37

Thanks for the Chapter!

foxyd

Man this story is so damm good, it's the entire reason I'm subbed to this patreon

Corvus Black

Damn Matsu is a beast. Took out those four Konoha ninja like it was nothing. Him standing over the dead Hyuga branch member analysing their seal was very Orochimaru-like. Speaking of Orochimaru, damn my boy did a Dynamic Entry and kicked Manda in the face. He was strong enough to knock him over too! Five Gates at age 11 is remarkable but yeah he's not ready to take on Orochimaru in a real fight just yet. His Bingo Book entry is getting quite the upgrade from this though. A is 16 here, and this must be the jinchuriki before Yugito as she's even younger than Killer Bee.

Ari

I always thought A and B were closer in age

SailorOfHouseThunderBird

Hoped we'd get to see Gengetsu's improved jutsu get some action. Somehow i didn't expect Matsu busting out a baby All Might move to get out of that situation, that turned out way better than id been expecting. Tftc, love this story.

nugitoBambino

I can just imagine his next line: "would anyone like some tea?"

Michael Ox

Thank you for the chapter! With the new Chakra signatures I almost thought Gengetsu was going to appear! Great writing!

LandoCali96

There's one time you call the Arashi character, Hito after the fireball. I thoroughly enjoyed seeing the fight from the enemy's perspective and love this story in general.


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