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Hard Enough - Chapter 261 - Family connections

🕑 Added 2024-09-30 19:00:06 +0000 UTC

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world-concepts-are-breaking god-is-dying

They are litterally made of wood and aura is something that can be felt by aura masters like Brock and Sabrina. She was able to detect the island with Lugia when she was but a child thanks to her high affinity to psychic aura, it isn't a stretch at all for her to be able to perceive the aura in eggs now that she is likely the strongest psychic in the world.

world-concepts-are-breaking god-is-dying

I think the base for the Growlithe's quick growth has already been planted because I think I remember in a chapter a comment about how easily they grow up to be combat ready with the Growlithe that patrol the gym being just barely beyond puppy level. It does make sense considering dogs are breed to be useful to humans and if from ancient times that meant protecting them it is not unrealistic from them to be combat ready in a short time. Even Cranidos is already at badge level even when he is younger then Teddiursa because ancient pokemon had to be ready to fight early if they wanted to survive.

world-concepts-are-breaking god-is-dying

They are found in the wild in Scarlet and Violet so I would guess that differently from the secret evolutions, that require a particular habitat to trigger, the hisuian variants are more easily found around but are simply incredibly rare in Unova and more common in Paldea.

world-concepts-are-breaking god-is-dying

He litterally said they are Hisuian voltorb. How could they be rock type?

world-concepts-are-breaking god-is-dying

That is in fact more of a reason to not stand out by assaulting Melvin or go through legal routes. They are probably illegal immigrants or in any case they have a dark enough past that they can't risk it being revealed or they could face serious charges.

Jericho Rising

I like the paths you've opened up with this chapter. Just hope it doesn't take too long to clean up the loose ends.

Jericho Rising

Melvin had "legal" documents; that turned out to be less than legal. They're veterans and smugglers but they're good people. I doubt they'd have had the urge to do something blatantly illegal like assault Melvin.

daniel wingborg

Found 2 typos. Titna-> titan. And mroe->more

David

this

angie bell

Hisuian Voltorb I know the people plug the hole in them temporarily to move them out of town and that they can be found in Paldea the circus got around the circus perfect since they love to laugh but a charge a light one tricky or if the hole is covered? I wonder if the seeds in them can be planted? or if they need an apricot acorn tree to change the acorn?

Petrox

How can such veterans got scammed by Melvin?

ShinLupin

two eggs of Alola-native/exclusive Pokemon, it would be fate if one is a Rock-type and the other psychic.

HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan

Concept? Love. In this world? Unlikely. AJ's personality is just a poor match for contests. Maybe in the far future after he's mellowed out a bit. But right now he's a brawler not a performer when it comes to battle style.

Stan Lewis

Thanks for the chapter. I thought the introduction of the voltorbs was a bit out of left field, but I don’t mind it. Also, quick notes, it looks like there was a typo when you tried to spell Titan. It came out Titna. Also, I’m not really sure if you introduced Sarah’s name before you started using it, so that felt a little awkward.

Donald Bagwell

VASQUEZ APOLOGY GIFT

Donald Bagwell

While I agree here is the thing… AJ as the head of Kanto Contest Circuit Hear me out He is doing shows and has ties to Pewter, cerulean, through Brock celedon and of course vermillion. If he attributes his circus to an entire contest a challenge when each contestant runs a performance for the crowd and THEY judge the contest. A new act completely for charity for the orphan fund for whatever city he is in like Brock. More than that? AJ doesn't want to be a gym leader, but a traveling circus ace trainer? Maybe a frontier brain? Hell maybe he picks up for many considering his team! Next up, aj knows he still has more to learn. Could be fun

Vara

Interesting for their to be hisuian voltorbs to be "alive" in the wild. I wonder how he came upon them.

Bast

Thanks for the chapter!

Matt H

It's not so much a comment about this chapter (always amusing to see a bunch of elders turn out to badasses), but more the pace of the story. A comment on a recent chapter reminded me that we're only HALFWAY through the season despite everything that's happened. Individually I don't think the chapters have felt rushed, but in aggregate I think you may be toeing the line with what Brock could conceivably manage in a given period of time without it being implausible. To be clear, I love this story and I think you've done a fantastic job with it, I just think you might want to start adding a couple days or a week here and there to allow more time to pass. That can give you more freedom to allow events to develop around the world, characters to grow up, etc. Take the project to recreate the Hisuian Growlithe. Under ideal circumstances I expect it'll still take at least a couple of generations of dedicated breeding to get results. Unless eggs can hatch AND the Pokemon grow to sexual maturity within a month or two we're probably still at least a year if not more away from the first Hisuian Growlithe. That would correspond to hundreds of chapters at our current pace and multiple real life years before any developments on that one plotline. Similar deal with Gible. As a pseudo-legendary they have a slow growth rate so we're again looking at another year in the story before we could conceivably see Brock with a Garchomp.

Sean

How does Sabrina know they are grass types?

HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan

Full honesty; I was 100% ready to let A.J. go. I'm not really invested in him so his leaving to head (or just be part of) a circus was A-Okay to me.

HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan

Oh! Visquez is making an appearance! I'm looking forward to that.

HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan

Edit: 'I spent some mroe time with Forrest' Should be 'more' not 'mroe'

HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan

Edit: 'A small hand togged mine and I glanced down to find Timmy growing at me.' Uh... is 'growing' supposed to be 'glaring'? I mean, Timmy *could* be growling...? (It would be odd but consider: is smol child. Growling isn't that odd for kids)

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter


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