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Hard Enough - Chapter 255 - Put humpty together again?

🕑 Added 2024-09-09 19:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Aisea Havea

Bruh, a Kangaskhan for a Skarmory? Skarmory are rare, but they aren't Kangaskhan rare...

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I found this to be a nice chapter for AJs development. Where is the nice benefits of giving him something to do when he decides to leave Brock's employ. This now raises the question, around what time would AJ want to leave Brocks employ? Right now we know three things one it's not right now he's in the middle of the gym circuit, two he still has a lot to learn from Brock in the area of aura manipulation particularly, which Brock did say he'd do. Three, this story still has bare minimum seven years to cover and we're only halfway through year one and AJ is still young there's plenty of time. We still have the question of when is a good time for him to leave? And we do know that for the start of year three Brock is likely to leave the gym and travel Hoenn for a multitude of reasons. So I'm predicting around that point.

Viva01

Forrest has a Fearow, but he also has Skarmory now which Ash didn't know about. He doesn't mistake it so much as he's expecting one pokemon only for another to appear.

Jean Marc Kunnen

how did ash mistake skarmory for fearow? they look nothing alike and he has a machine that tells him exactly what pokemon it is that he always takes out whenever he sees a new pokemon.

Pamela Gillespie

I remember Brock's intentions when he got AJ to join the gym it was intended to be temporary, to provide an opportunity for AJ to learn about bonds and the power of friendship. It looks like he's succeeded.

OrigamiGuyII

Great chapter! A few things I thought i'd mention, one, would it make more sense to use Hypno instead of Exeggcute, for Melvin's pokemon, as the criminal hypnotist is a pretty accurate trope. Two, if you ever need to show a lawyer reading a last will and testament, you could make a joke about Exeggcuting his will. Now I think about it, that joke would have been suitable for after beating Ace trainer Will as well, since he had that one Exeggcutor that had the cool Seed Bomb. Third and finally, I appreciate that you used Pokemon Trading to get Skarmory on Forrest's team, and I look forward to seeing how they bond despite the rough start.

Caras Galadon

I like this chapter and I am happy with this part of the story getting a conclusion

Focus Armstrong

I think it'd be cool if AJ became the ringmaster of a travelling troupe. His eventual induction into the Guardians and would lend him to becoming a roving unit protecting indigo, maybe even going to Fiore, meeting with the Frontier Brains, and even Rota . It's likely he'll leave soon but there's no reason why he can't learn remotely with Brock and I'd like to see brock sending his sponsored trainers to more gyms and locations.

HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan

I have thoughts about A.J. Primarily in the form of "I think he should leave the Gym". No insult to Brock, but he hasn't been the best at training up his assistants this year. He's had a lot on his plate, so it's understandable, but the bottom line is that, from A.J.'s POV, A.J. has been left pretty much on his own. Yes, he's had access to amazing resources, but he doesn't seem to have made a lot of friends at the gym. And, most importantly, the question now is: What does A.J. want to do for the rest of his life? From our (reader) POV, A.J. has been gunning for a future as something like an Ace trainer. But now he has the circus and, after reading this chapter from A.J.'s POV, he seems interested in a future as a Ring Leader of a circus. If he pursues that career path, what purpose does being an apprentice at Brock's Gym serve? It doesn't really provide resources, training, or even connections that are all that useful to the leader of a circus. When A.J. seemed to be on the Ace trainer career path it was an amazing choice. But now? It doesn't really line up. Without friends or other close bonds to hold him to the gym, but strong bonds with (hopefully) returning circus members, and a career path that is unaligned to work related to a Gym... saying goodbye to the Rock Gym is the smart choice for A.J. Also, from an author/reader POV, there are a LOT of characters and their stories to keep track of right now. I think it's okay to let some go from time to time, and right now is a good time to conclude A.J.'s role in the story. I think one more chapter where he says goodbye to Brock and the Gym (and the other people at the gym), and I'll be okay saying goodbye to this particular character.

HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan

Thanks for the chapter! I like how Forrest is falling into a Steel Type trainer. I don't forsee him becoming a Gym trainer or Gym Leader, but maybe an Ace trainer? Or maybe he will finish his journey and realize that he doesn't want to be a trainer full time? Or maybe he'll stick by Ash's side for years like Brock did in cannon? *shrug* He's a kid and the world is his oyster.

HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan

I'm hopping that Forrest learns that he doesn't want to be a Gym trainer and that he would be happier doing something else. Kid seemed lukewarm at best toward the Gym trainer lifestyle. I also think it would be a great opportunity for Brock to teach his siblings that he will support them in whatever they do. Even if that means leaving the Gym for good. Idk what Forrest should do with his life (maybe steel type Ace trainer?), but I do know that being a Gym trainer just isn't it for him. (Compare to his sister who seems to enjoy doing basic Gym trainer tasks)

Jericho Rising

Actually it's been mentioned here and there in bits and pieces already, a little context through a quick phone call with Brock would fill that in nicely

Jean Marc Kunnen

while brock is indeed very strong, the strong-man role would fit trixie more

ShinLupin

A.J. made a big step in his personal development. Will the circus move to Pewter? Could be a new way for the Gym-pokemon to train. Or a new event-challenge: face the Gym decked out in Circus-style! Brock could be a convincing Strong-man.

Stan Lewis

Thanks for the chapter! I’m happy that things worked out for AJ. Couple notes: I think you accidentally swapped Hypno for Exxegutor. Also, you spelled Bugsy, Buggy. I’m pretty sure you also mistyped Alakazam.

TorrhenWintry

I like that it seems Forrest is leaning down the path of a steel specialist. That's my favorite type and it has a lot of potential

ShinLupin

Forrest might turn into a Steel-Type expert, if he even wants to go from there to Gym-leader or any similar position is another matter.

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter

HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan

Edit: "The man wanted to multiple for multiple counts of fraud, theft, and illegal usage of pokemon Hypnosis?" I think you want to remove 'to multiple' here

Donald Bagwell

So Forrest might become a steel leader or something in the future? Maybe have Brock explain the frontier brains? Have Forrest make a puzzle based on geography and physical locations/ things he learned from Brock and become a young leader?

Noctus Tagaris

That was really great, thanks for the update!

Deltoren

ok this chapter needs some backstory. the chase and attack by aj seems to come out of nowhere. not his dislike of the crook but the crook being there and him running off to get him.

HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan

Edit: "When you’re chasing a Furret always aspect they know how to escape!" I think 'aspect' should be changed to 'expect'


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