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Hard Enough - Chapter 254 - Golden week interludes - The Champ and the Runner up

🕑 Added 2024-09-03 19:00:06 +0000 UTC

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Gorama27

It would be interesting if Lance fell in love with Kaede. So much drama around the clan with this couple.

The Oblivious Elf

Lorelei x Lance is the way my friends

iceknight90

Lance: I'm a Christmas cake! I'll never be a bride! (sobs)

the pyro stick figure 76

I kind of love how panicky Lance was about the fact that he hasn't had a date in a while, because if you do the math he's only 19 and he's only been champion for six months meaning his comment about not having a date in years means he does not have game. A nice reminder that while he's mature he's also still young. As for, how he's handling the daycare fire. It's very interesting seeing how he talks himself into doing this. We see him internally start referring to Kaede as family which I'm very interested to see how she handles that, and he raises the important question to himself being what would even happen to the Pokémon that were given out and raised by people who had no idea they were stolen years ago? Is there even a precedent for how this would be handled in the indigo government? I do want to highlight the info we were given on the battle frontier. It stated that before it opens at the end of the circuit it's going to be stress test by hand-picked members of the ace circuit guess who just became number one of that circuit. So it looks like Brock's going to get to face quite a few legendary's Great motivation for his Pokémon. Lastly his concerns for obtaining a new dragon that handles fairy types better includes the legends continuity Brock could likely help him get a steel dragon. Now for Karen's section I only have two things to comment on. One, wasn't a match for Norman scheduled before Agatha? When is that one? Two, is that we know Karen is heading to the silver rangers first, however we also know Brock does have plans to go back there with his sister and a few of his sponsor trainers like AJ do we have any idea how soon that is besides before the conference?

Noctus Tagaris

The Virgin Dragon Master Lance vs the Chad Rock Enthusiast Brock lmao - that's the meme i had in my head after reading Altaria soothe lance lol

Jean Marc Kunnen

there was also that meeting to reveal who was part of team rocket were brock calls out that lance was being petty against lorelei.

HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan

Lance probably starting to have a negative Pavlov effect to seeing/hearing from Bruce right now. Almost every time they talk *something* is going wrong (usually for Lance). 1st meeting? Brock throws down the gauntlet and publicly calls Lance out for bad behavior. 2nd meeting? Brock kicks Lance's ass publicly. 3rd meeting? Brock kicks Lance's ass AND reveals a type exists that makes dragons scared. 4th meeting? Brock gives Lance an egg and points out how League is failing. I lost track around here but I think the 5th time they see each other is Moltores burning a mountain range and the 6th has they beating down Team Rocket (beating baddies is good, the fact that they needed to do it is bad). Then during the Rocket Raid, when catching up with Brock, Lance finds Brock dealing with an escaped baby pokemon, where Lance unknowingly gives away access to a rare/powerful dragon. (Right now Lance won't see that as a bad interaction. In the future he will probably regret it) I think there *was* a meeting where Lance just dropped by the Gym at some point to watch and Ace battle? And I don't recall anything really bad happening, but Lance did get semi-pranked by an employee of the Gym? So... yay for one probably-not-negative situation for Lance when interacting with Brock! Anyway, Lance and Brock might like each other, but from an outside perspective, they only really meet up and/or talk when something bad(ish) is happening for Lance. So I can see the next time they interact, Lance subconsiously preps for something bad to go down or be brought to his attention and-! Nothing happens. Brock is 100% friendly with no bad news for Lance, nothing catches on fire, and Lance can't figure out why he's a little on edge the first few minutes they're talking...

nugitoBambino

rule of cool overrides petty concerns like 'memory' in stories. This name is awesome, and get's my vote, I'll look the other way on something tiny like 'memory realism' if that what it takes lol

nugitoBambino

lmao yeah a one-sided lance x cynthia would be pretty humorous

ShinLupin

is Lance seeking love? The first woman that comes to mind as an equal to the Dragon-Master is Cyntia. Would he be smitten on first sight or rather after a pokemon-battle? :D

G 21

Ooh nice

Dustin Lee

A Tyranitar would be good for Karen. She is lacking overwhelming power. She needs something to rely on when tricks won't work. Either that or a vanguard that can fuck up the enemy for the tricksters to come in.

HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan

Completely unrelated note: Can Teddiursa be named Alioth? Its the name of the brightest star in the Ursa Major constellation (i.e. the Bear Constellation). He's gonna be an Ursaluna one day so I think a name tied to the stars would be neat. Although, remembering that Alioth is the name of the brightest star in the bear constellation is a big ask for Brock. So I'll accept if this doesn't happen due to the improbability of him remembering the name of that specific star.

Donald Bagwell

Dude same

HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan

I mentioned this in reply to someone else's comment, but our boy Lance be STRESSIN. The last six-ish months of his life have probably given him gray hairs (and he's not even 30!). He's not thinking about losing his job and being fine in E4. He's *praying* for a vacation. And if the closest thing he can get right now is Brock stealing his job? Lance is willing to give it a go at this point. I mean, he's seen his workload compared to the Elite 4; he's okay with a demotion if it means significantly less work.

Mario Schade

Nice Interlude. If i have to question something.. maybe it would be the time frames for training and the people expecting a big jump in results. 1 Week with houndooms.... 1 week silver range.. it seems so little to really get a big boost because we speaking about trainers with an already high level profile. This was the only thing my mind registered a little weird for my image of your world. I was a little bit surprised, that Lance was thinking about loosing the title to Brock and just be fine with being E4. That.. idk..seems more unsecure than i imagined him in total.

Jean Marc Kunnen

wasn't lorelei implied to be a lesbian in this fic?

Chopper4ever

I think lance and lorelei would be a great ship. Opposite attracted to each other, and it would be enjoyable to watch their slow burn romance from enemies to lovers. 💕🙏

Jean Marc Kunnen

he's mentioned planning on going there with flint a lot of times but never actually puts a date on it i think.

Lavick Vell

Great chapter. My first thought when Lance was thinking about romance was Cynthia. I've never seen that pairing done before. I can't remember, has Brock made any plans yet for going into the Silver Ranges to look for a Tyranitarite? It would really suck if Karen actually got one first.

Jericho Rising

Honestly Empress is a great example of this. It's only through her connection through titan that she even gave him the light of day, Even if he can beat her, pseudos are NOT to be trifled with. Brocks little guys need to grow up faster. Teddy, zubat and Gible need some progression. Shin and cradily going to get some love soon I hope too. Especially with Steven wanting one trained by Brock.

HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan

What about Karen's Tyranitar Vs. Empress? And maybe Empress is Karen's Tyranitar's mom too... that could be fun!

HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan

I wouldn't say Brock is clueless about where Karen got her stone. It's implied in an earlier chapter that Brock knows she got it by spending time in an area with a pack of Houndoom. He just doesn't have any verbal (or otherwise) confirmation.

Moises sifuentes

Fantastic chapter, I like seeing other characters and their different points of view from Brock, it's good that Karen wants a tyranitar, it will be a great addition to her team, but I think she will discover that a wild and temperamental pseudo-legendary is not easy, she can be strong but taking it to the level of obedience and handling will take a lot of time that you don't have to use it in tournaments, I think you greatly underestimate what a pseudo-legendary savage is, you will end up asking Brock for help and if the tyranitar is female, funny scenes of a jealous Berta could come out

Jean Marc Kunnen

as he mentioned in this chapter, brock is the strongest user of the fairy type, something he doesn't have much of an answer for.

SailorOfHouseThunderBird

Damn, Lance is already planning out his return to the E4 under the new "King and Queen of Indigo"? Just how scared of Brock is he?

NostalgicTime

I wouldn't mind more interludes right after this one, sorta like a break from the main story. To catch us up on what's been going on with other people/regions.

Donald Bagwell

Just noticed the chapter yesterday! Loved the chapter, I also want Karen to get a female tyranitar just so it fights Bertha for Titan with empress not caring for either I’m looking forward to everything here my dudes

Jean Marc Kunnen

i'm not entirely sure where you got that idea from considering kaede has two trait that lance mentioned he absolutely does not want in a partner, one: being related to him and two: specialising in a type that dragons are weak to.

HoldTightAndPretendItsAPlan

Edit: "he’d had some knew inclusions." I think you mean 'new' and not 'knew' here

Petrox

I see that you are shipping Lance and Kaede. It would be a good end for redemption arc of the Blackthorns and cleaning house. Unfortunately Brock would hear Sweet home Alabama every time he sees Lance and Kaede, even when they are distant cousins

Big ToFu

its still crazy that after all this time brock still doesn't have any Tyranitarite and he's clueless on where Karen got her own megastone from. i wonder if empress might have one in her cave buried.

Qweku_v

Excellent work

Deltoren

"where they liked to holw to let other pokemon" Howl

Bast

Thanks for the chapter!

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter


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