Lexygts
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Dragon Series - suspended further
🕑 Added 2024-05-30 19:00:05 +0000 UTC
Hey there, unfortunately I wasn't happy with the results of the chapter so I'm going to continue withholding it. I'm very passionate about the project and it is my favorite story actually, however I feel like the way I write it makes the reader focus way too much on the characters. I feel like my love for fantasy stories is preventing me from making this hot.
As of late I've been testing some new story telling techniques and rearranged some events. I'm noticing how the results are improving. I've decided to take my time now on this project and upload it whenever I feel like it's in a proper state.
Comments
SWAT
Honestly you should just do as you want, good characters make good stories and myself I do like a lot fantasy. Yet I understand that with most of your content it is perhaps unlikely people log in to watch « normal » stories. Either way, do as you please !
Alex
Exapansion and comparison is enough of a hook for anything that could happen. Finding mostly adventure situations would help it stand out.
Chance Hanley
Does the Dragon Series necessarily have to be a porno? The issues you're bringing up (too much focus on the characters, having difficulty "making it hot" because you "love fantasy stories" too much) sound to me like you're writing a story that doesn't WANT to be a porno, and trying to force it into being one is going to make it a lesser story than it would be otherwise. If there's a genuinely good story brewing here, don't worry so much about how fappable it might be and let it spread its wings! That's my two cents, at least.
