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The Weekend Visit, Part 28

🕑 Added 2023-12-10 00:03:36 +0000 UTC

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Lady Lucia

I normally try to let my writing speak for itself, but yes! It felt like it would be less impactful if Kate just told Annie 'on screen' right away, so I made the call to temporarily keep it from the audience for a single part of the story until a better moment.

AndiJF

I was a little confused by the transition between Parts 27 and 28. I assume that "off camera", between the two parts, Kate blackmailed Annie into asking Lilah and Luna about going to camp? Going from "I have a fun idea" to "taking a nap" had me wondering if I had missed something.


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