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No Victory in Strength (Minecraft Jaune) - Chapter 6

🕑 Added 2024-09-01 00:48:58 +0000 UTC

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HellKnight70

Q1) I have no idea why! Q2) It's good so far. Question. Has Juane repaired Juniors club yet? That's a faction that could be added. And it could lead to conflict with RWBY since Jaune could find out from Junior that it was them that destroyed the club, docks and highway. For Coco, as a last resort, offers Jaune a redesign on all his armor since they look 'terrible'. Juane gets pissed because he doesn't care about the looks and only the function. Q3) Mercury could work. Question is how though since he's technically still serving Cinder.

Thelurker12

Yep. The idea is Ironwood tries to use the same thing everyone else does - money and connections. When that fails, he argues for Greater Good. Jaune says he's helping like three other Greater Goods. At which point Ironwood short circuits and basically defaults to Atlesian patriotism despite Jaune telling him he's not a citizen of Atlas, so...

Mysterious Benefactor

Very nice chapter. I really love how you done talk between Ozpin and Jaune. Ruby statue was pretty funny too. 1)Personally I like the idea due to these ships being rarer. And I personally like Kuudere character type which Ciel could fit into with some work. Also inserting a no nonsense character inside all the covert love plays can make funny scenes which was the main reason I would want Ciel to be included but character bloat can be detrimental to this type of stories so it might also be bad to include her and Penny. 2)Personally not much. Maybe help with fashion. Like making him even more handsome with better clothes. It can also help them bond as she would be really happy with near infinite fashion potential that Jaune can produce with his semblance. And team RWBY seeing even more handsome Jaune with good clothes could be a funny scene. We also talked about factions more in depth in your discord and I personally liked what you done with them pretty much. 3)Mercury is fine. Maybe Sun would also work.

Redwing641

I know. Quality fics like this need time to write and the wait is always worth it. Keep it up Author. Can’t wait to see what happens next. Hopefully Ironwood uses the cliche patriotic speech only to get shot down by Jaune’s honest and pure nature like what happened with Ozpin

Thelurker12

This fic is already a priority, so hopefully the wait isn’t too painful.

Redwing641

Waiting for an update for this fic is pain but whenever a chapter drops it’s euphoria. Commissioner if you are seeing this please finish this fic Also please put thirsty Pyrrha in the fic for comedic purposes

The Brotherhood of Steel

I love this chapter especially how you portray Jaune reacting to Ozpin's offer. I like how he was willing to help but not going to take crap from the kingdom since they've done little to help them. I definitely like how it forces Ozpin to be honest with him and how it might show how future interactions with the various factions will go. I like how cardin is portrayed and how he points out the fact that team RWBY and PCNR have obvious favoritism from Ozpin as lesser stuff would get teams expelled or suspended. Lastly I also like how the council meeting is portrayed as none of them are fully just diving at headfirst oh how they think they should handle the situation and are approaching with caution. Moving on to your questions. 1. (Just going to focus on Ciel for this answer) a lot of people likes how the fandom portrays her as the kind of calculating logical person but under that facade does have emotions but is too scared or not sure how to show them. Think of it like Yuki nagato from the Haruhi series combined with her counterpart from her spin-off. As to why she might be interested in Jaune I see it as someone logical finding someone who defies that logic. At first she's interested in him not in a romantic way but trying to just figure out how his abilities work which could eventually lead to her developing feelings as she discovers more about him. 2. Have Coco screw things up with him to the point he snaps at her and she realizes that he's actually someone who genuinely just wants to help people for no gain of his own. This could lead to her apologizing and even asking to just help Velvet with her weapon because like Jaune Velvet just wants to help people. This could lead to Jaune possibly accepting the apology and maybe helping her out as well or at the very least becoming friends with her. 3. I definitely like the idea of Mercury becoming his friend not just because of the fact that he is genuinely becoming his friend because he doesn't care about his powers or wants anything in return. But also because Mercury would be the type of person to call the others out on their BS.


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