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This Girl's Kind of Weird - Chapter 4

🕑 Added 2024-03-19 14:11:42 +0000 UTC

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Thelurker12

In these kinds of stories, the past version is replaced by the future one. It’s generally not considered murder cause they would’ve ended up as their future versions if the timeline wasn’t altered.

Yugo Strange

I wonder what happened to the past Ruby mind when future Ruby moved in Is she gone or tucked away somewhere,if that's the case is she basically in a sleep like State or is she fully aware,and is able to observe what's going on ?

AKi1red

Hey I just found this story and joined your patreon so my vote is for this story also the bhaalbuddy sounds good but definitely more of this

pilot puntastic

The Bhaalbuddy idea sounds great! Huntresses being way too strong to find a partner is a very funny concept, truthfully though the idea of Adam the incredibly dangerous terrorist choosing to cut ties via train just to get away from Blake is hilarious. Also smug Ruby is a concept that deserves more attention. To me I think Roman's best Character trait is his loyalty to Neo, his partner in crime and sort of pseudo daughter. The line "Any attempts to try and get him out were met with utter refusal to give his tormentor a reason to come after him again and catch her in the crossfire." He's scared of Ruby and was willing to rat on Cinder but to me i think that it's the thought that Neo might get caught in the crossfire that keeps Roman from trying to escape. He's not a good man but he does care about Neo. If you really think about it why would Roman want to hit Beacon? They don't exactly have big piles of cash just sitting around nor do they have any rare item that a collector would want. Weapons might fetch a nice price but all of them are custom and extremely traceable. This may be why Neo is the muscle to Roman's more cautious approach. Neo gets utterly Stomped here pun only half intended much like how Neo is only half dead. The rose petals surrounding Ruby's limbs is a great way to show how Ruby got around her incredible weakness without her weapon. Ruby seeing through Neo's illusions is interesting, could the silver eyes be able to see Aura? If it was meant to be a weapon against the Grimm then seeing Aura would be a neat way to sort who you are supposed to hit and who not to hit. Jaune just crying is understandable. First he got kidnapped, almost tortured, saw his kidnapper get beaten nearly to death before his very complicated friend changed moods on a dime and freed him. Yang being so distraught over Ruby's new outlook on life and blaming herself could have been very dark and depressing but the fact that it was layered with bits of ego from Yang makes the scene a lot funnier. That her plan to fix Ruby was to go full Weiss on her was icing on that cake. Honestly I'm hoping having a prim and proper but very strong older sister on the team will give Weiss some nostalgia. Ruby having such a dark past explains a lot about why she's fighting so hard to get everything perfect here. Instead of drifting away like she did when she had nothing now she's holding on for dear life with everything she has left. I really hope we get more of Ruby talking to Penny since Ruby didn't just see Penny die once, she saw her die three separate times! For the first it'd be complicated. But I'd wager on a big part of it being fear. For someone to know so much about you would have me questioning how much they know and why they've chosen me. For the second I'd say that despite how much of a bad person Neo is that she didn't deserve such a terrible beating. She has been called a Monster from as early as she can remember. That has to warp a person's sense of self. Neo could have been good but she was labeled a Monster by the people meant to love her before seeing them die and joining a Criminal.


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