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Let's Try That Again Redux - Chapter 14

🕑 Added 2024-10-03 16:34:27 +0000 UTC

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Scott

Yes. My mistake. I'll fix the conversation with Rita I always thought it was Angelina.

Pheebouss

Nice chapter. I liked the fact that Cedric brought the Champions together, in other similar fics, it's almost always Harry who does it so I liked the change. I noticed a couple of extremely minor mistakes: the Gryffindor Chaser is named Angelina, not Angela; and the Weighing of the Wands happened in a desert classroom. Like I wrote before, extremely minor. The thing that stumped my was the entire bit with Skeeter. Harry came back at the end of 3rd Year. Everything before that should have been canon, and yet Skeeter says they hadn't seen each other for 2 years, where Harry returned 5-6 months before and therefore had never met her before. Is it possible you mixed the conversation with another HP fic?

Scott

LoL

Daeron Targaryen

Ron wants Harry’s cannon.


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