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Let's Try That Again Redux - Chapter 12

🕑 Added 2024-07-08 15:00:06 +0000 UTC

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Scott

There wasn't much to change in this one. I was pretty sure this is the first time he met Amelia

BushDid9711

Is this not the same chapter as in the original? Hell he's "giving Hermione and Ginny the benefit of the doubt" when he's seen they've been potioned and compelled. Also Amelia Bones introduced herself again here after Harry and her met in chap 11. I do enjoy Hermione isn't one of the bad guy's in this version.

orthodox1057

That's a quick, ruthless and efficient cleanup. I wonder how things will proceed and how the focus will shift. A random stray though I had is that the narrative reminds me of Mass Effect 2 where there is an overreaching goal but the journey there is focused on the people participating in said journey. Truthfully I am curious at how the student interactions will work out. A full grown man, a veteran auror will struggle trying to connect with teens. Slughorn is an interesting character, he strikes me as a man who knows people just as much as potions. Like almost any other magical he has his silly side but I can't help but notice that there is no fully functional adult to balance out Harry, hence my mentioning of Slughorn, there's also Flitwick as mentioned in the chapter. I am really eager for the development.


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