Unexpected pg 4 Sketch
🕑 Added 2019-05-22 05:36:13 +0000 UTCHEY! :D I'm back! I've been chomping at the bit to get this page going. I've finally moved in to my new digs and got my setup working again so there shouldn't be another dry spell of content. I'd like some feedback with this page if you would. I want to make sure the page reads correctly. Let me know in the comments if anyone gets hung up reading through it!
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Zockereinstein
No issues at all about the panel. Just a suggestion about the following works: if this chapter is going to be very story-oriented, then you should consider to alternate it with some other work with "a bit rawr"... for example, coloring chapter 1, or even starting Cycles 5 maybe ;).
Spotts1701
It looks fine to me, readability wise
Kerlem
"Hi Mer? I can't make it it today. Looks like I picked up a bad case of lycanthropy. Rarr, snarl, grrr. I should be in tomorrow."
Magic Man
Calling out sick to work I see