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A Girl Named Sue pg19 WIP

🕑 Added 2018-11-24 09:14:07 +0000 UTC

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WereWorld

Thought you might Wuschel :P Thanks!

WereWorld

Thanks Sam! :D Yeah, I want her to really interact with the environment, adds a lot to the scene imo

WereWorld

Yeah, no entirely satisfied with this one so I'll be retooling it to flow better :) thanks for the critique Zock!

Wuschel

Love this page. <3

Sam

I loved the cool mini sequence with Sue’s earring. I appreciate the horrifying grimace she’s making, and all of the little interactions she’s having with the couch; it really makes the whole metamorphosis seem more visceral. Really looking forward to watching what happens to Sue’s torso and midriff next!

Zockereinstein

Wonderful panels. The thing is that there seems to be some "narrative room" between the panel where her back is cracking and the following ones, just considering her body position. Well, to this point is could be somewhat difficult to find a suitable solution, but well, you are the creative here ;).