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A Girl Named Sue pg18 WIP
🕑 Added 2018-11-16 09:22:42 +0000 UTC Just wanted to let everyone know how much I appreciated the comments on the last page, I'm going to take everyone's advice into account for when I make the ink pass with these pages. :)
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WereWorld
nice catch Tim, I'll be sure to iron out the details in the final pass ;)
WereWorld
Yep! Something I'm trying to incorporate in these changes :)
Kerlem
I'm suspecting that she might wind up on all fours in this one.
Kerlem
There seems to be more hair on the back side of her ankle in the first shot of the third large panel than there is in the second shot. Other than that nitpick, it's coming along great!
Nils
Wow. She is looking really good now. Much more like a beast before your redraw. The old one was good this is brilliant. I do love how you keep her head mostly human so that we see her terror about what is happening. Shall we assume that the final draw has more to do with the beast of biology 101 than the first chapter?
Agent00Soul
Curious to see how you illustrate her vocal changes. I'm thinking we got a preview in the bottom three panels.
WereWorld
Hmm maybe replace the panel 2 perhaps? I'll keep these in mind Zock thanks :)
Zockereinstein
One of my favourites... of course :). Really love it. Maybe the stretching would be a bit more effective if you rotated the view a little so the toes would be a bit more visible, because you will create a better reference of the stretching foot. Another comment, generally speaking, is that I miss a view from behind just before the stretching starts, but adding the new panel would be a completely mess :P. What do you think?
