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A Girl Named Sue pg17 WIP

🕑 Added 2018-11-12 01:40:30 +0000 UTC

Comments

Kerlem

Acht zusätzliche Zitzen, keine Brüste, wären realistischer. Sich um Welpen zu kümmern, wäre keine Priorität.

Ich meine das Sue mehere Brustpaare bekommen sollte würde ihr als weiblicher Werwolf besser Stehen

KC

Sue Smash.

Zockereinstein

As a footnote: I see that you will use the "fur-way" in order to cover nudity issues, right? Not a bad idea, but maybe some camera angle could have worked, I don't know ;).

Zockereinstein

Maybe you could change the last panel. In my opinion, not watching her face in the group of panels diminishes the overall effect of pain, and a solucion could be to "put the camera" a bit away from her in the last panel, and "rotate" a bit in order to get at least some of Sue's face. It could be also a good idea to leave her there on her knees as in the previous pannels, so you could even show her full body...

BerryWhite

I also can't help but notice she's looks like she's transforming into the form she takes on in Biology 101. If this is the case, I approve!

BerryWhite

I'd personally switch the # 4 & 5 ( I think ) panels, with a little more shirt damage and spine arching on panel #4. The rips seem inconsistent the way it's lined up right now.

Nils

She looks great much more like a dangerous, wild and strong beast than before. There’s a real animal in being. Thank you keep going with it. I really love it.