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A Girl Named Sue pg14 WIP

🕑 Added 2018-11-03 23:20:13 +0000 UTC

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WereWorld

oof indeed :P

Zockereinstein

It is because the process is done slower, but it is better this way, as long as it emphatizes the "body horror" effect and deploys the pain and fear of the TF in a better timing than others before.

Wuschel

Oof <3

Nils

Prretty cool and great style, although the feet transofrmation looks more like a Wereape than a Werewolf, :) Unless I have no idea of how wolf paws look like in that case, sorry

WereWorld

wow! Thanks so much for the detailed critique! That's EXACTLY what I'm going for with these panels! Glad to see it working :D

WereWorld

just hasn't happened yet ;)

dkurp

I find with the foot here (and the hand earlier) you're taking great care to setup an 'anticipation' panel (panel 2) where we see the normal foot immediately followed by the abrupt breaking of the bones (panel 3) as they reshape themselves into their new form. It really adds a lot of life and kinetic energy to the metamorphosis and I think it's some very successful work. Can't wait to see more! :)