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A Girl Named Sue pg 23 Final

🕑 Added 2019-04-22 05:50:57 +0000 UTC

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WereWorld

All about them eyes :)

WereWorld

Always pay homage to the legend when possible :P

WereWorld

So glad to here it! I spent extra care with this page as I feel it's one of the most impactful ones of this chapter. Glad you noticed the little runny nose addition too, that was last minute but I thought it added a lot more to the change.

SAS_Art

Outstanding. So great to see such fantastic detail and attention given to perhaps the most iconic part of a werewolf transformation. For me, this is the new gold standard for the muzzle growth shot. And echoing the comments of the others, the lingering humanity conveyed with her eyes is exceptional. Not to dwell too much on her suffering, but I like the added detail of her nose running in the later panels. Lots of people add tears to a transformation scene to convey pain and anguish, but this added detail shows some extra thought and takes it one step further. Fantastic work.

Kerlem

Yes, at least David Kessler got a warning that something would happen. This was entirely out of the blue. For her sake, I hope that the pain lessens over time.

Wuschel

That poor girl. ;-;

Agent00Soul

I even like it better than AWIL because of her eyes and the narration. David had already gone savage by the time his muzzle pushed out but Sue obviously has her own mind still. The narration of a comic assists with that, but her eyes really tell the story.