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English ver.(DAY 9 - DAY 12)

🕑 Added 2022-05-27 12:03:13 +0000 UTC
English ver.(DAY 9 - DAY 12)
English ver.(DAY 9 - DAY 12)
English ver.(DAY 9 - DAY 12)

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Polioro

Thank you for uploading it into English ^^

cosmo

I'm happy to be useful. It's kind of fun to try to figure out how to translate the intent of the source!

Lithium

Thank you!! I love the English translation of the second panel, very nice!

Lithium

Thank you:) It helps a lot.

cosmo

I think I figured it out! "O-OK... It's Yukie. (It means blessing of snow)" "It's from being born on a heavily snowing day."

cosmo

Day 9, Panel 3: please -> pleased like girl's -> like a girl's Panel 4: you're friendly -> you're a friendly I'd like to improve the English in the second panel as well, but I can't figure out how to improve it while keeping the open nature of the original Japanese. I'll write a new comment if I can figure out how to to it, or maybe someone else has a suggestion. ( ´_ゝ` )

Polioro

In the first panel *at day 11, sorry 🤦‍♀️ my bad.

Polioro

If a vibrator is not waterproof that would be a problem... Talking about the spelling, in the first panel it should be: "Aren't you comming to the party" and "I've some chores" >.<


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