Lithium fanbox

English ver.(DAY 1 - DAY 4)

🕑 Added 2022-05-25 03:44:06 +0000 UTC

Comments

admiraltolokus

I dunno if I can read again the last couple of scenes when Lucky is dying of old age, it hurts too much.

Lithium

Thank you. It helps a lot. I will use this advice on the production version!

cosmo

Cool! Do you want your Fanbox followers to point out any errors we find in the script so you can clean it up before you put it out for sale eventually? I can spot 2 minor errors in day 3. titss -> tits inthis -> in this And for day 4, last panel, I think "He probably thinks of me as an awkward girl" probably is a better sentence. Or maybe "He probably thinks I'm a weird girl". I'm happy to give this kind of feedback if you want it. ^_^

Lithium

Thank you for saying so!

Lithium

I'll do my best:)

Lithium

Thank you too:)

Lithium

Thanks too!!

Lithium

Thank you:) Yes, I'm planning to sell the English version in DLsite.

23gwdzyu

Hey, if you need help with spell-checking and writing better English I would gladly help (for free of course). I don't know Japanese but I know English very well.