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DOS Ch-208.1 (NSFW)

🕑 Added 2025-04-16 21:22:48 +0000 UTC

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Daniel Barranco

Gracias por leerme. Si tienes alguna retroalimentación te leo

Daniel Barranco

Lo escribo en español... Una disculpa por eso. Más que ver el capítulo por su contenido obseno puedo decirte que me encantan este tipo de situaciones ya sabes el hecho de no encacillar a tus personajes como siempre moralmente correctos o mojigatos en el sentido de las relaciones y el sexo. Siempre que no hagas que estos encuentros sean sin sentido, ayudan bastante a qué el personaje de sienta humano...El desea y respeta la oportunidad. El hecho que ciertos MC sabiendo que quieren y desean se contengan se me hace falso. No a todas, no siempre pero. Preguntaste simplemente pregunta tiene todo; dinero, fama, oportunidad... Que humano lo dejaría pasar. En fin me gustó veo a un Troy humanizado más allá a del dolor y la controversia. Gracias buen capítulo

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Benoit Valtin

not a fan when it's just vulgar, it was nice with rihanna because she had a real kink side, but scarlett is not like that (officially) I would have preferred it to be softer in the flowery words.

TheLazyWarrior

Thank you! Although not entirely first, I would say the first chapter dedicated exclusively to smut.

Laurot

Pretty nice! At least a 7-8/10🫶 And for this being a first i think thats awesome👍🏼

ZaA

Pretty good first go, honestly. I'd say that if you give it another go, either for practice or fun or whatever it is, that including some details like smells, a feeling or series of the feeling of emotions (that slow expansion of the pupils, slight swirling high that accompanies the rush of warmth to your face, and the widening of the eyes that quickly softens, etc..). I feel like you did quite well with the physical generals and dialogue though. Multiple of the stories that I'm reading all have had a smut chapter recently LOL. Haven't read any for over a year before

TheLazyWarrior

Why would it be gay??

omzy8484

is it gay that you wrote this and i got chub?🤣🤣

James Harrold

I don't think it will be Scarlett Johansson, all of her interactions with Troy give off more a friend vibe to me. I would think a model or some type of sportswomen maybe?

Qweku_v

Who do you think should be the endgame for Troy?

James Harrold

Solid first attempt at writing a smut chapter. Hope you do more in the future.

NoirXK

And I repeat: “Living my dreams, Troy! I really hope this is not the last we see of Scarlett.


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