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Brutal Garden (EN) (test sample)

🕑 Added 2021-03-24 10:24:01 +0000 UTC
Brutal Garden (EN) (test sample)
Brutal Garden (EN) (test sample)
Brutal Garden (EN) (test sample)
Brutal Garden (EN) (test sample)
Brutal Garden (EN) (test sample)
Brutal Garden (EN) (test sample)
Brutal Garden (EN) (test sample)
Brutal Garden (EN) (test sample)
Brutal Garden (EN) (test sample)

Comments

bg

英語なのでよくわかりませんが、すごく面白そうな雰囲気が伝わってきます!

Random

潾 - I disagree because that insinuates she's participating in the training instead of being an outside observer.

Random

That works too :)

潾

I think it'll be easier to say: You call this training?!

Beast Anime

Would it feel okay to write "Do you call that training?"

Random

Page 6... "You call it a training?" Feels like it should read "You call that training?"

Beast Anime

Thanks for the suggestion! If you see any other strange parts, please feel free to let us know.

潾

Looks amazing! Can't wait to see the rest. For the 2nd pic, shouldn't it be: "Because it is a very dangerous place" instead of "Because it is a various dangerous place" Not sure what the original line was suppose to be, so its just a suggestion

Nastassya

Looks interesting <3

Excellent.

Random

YES!!!

Xilas

Nice I’m looking forward to this, thank you for your hard work ^_^


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