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Project VB : Test Page 1
🕑 Added 2020-07-29 22:03:31 +0000 UTCFinally got around to making a test page, so I figured I'd chronicle the process of figuring out how the fuck it'll look like, so Im starting with this! And feedback is absolutely appreciated, and needed even!,
I'll also be jotting down some notes on what I wanna attempt for the next one, so expect some jarring differences on each different page.
THINGS TO FIX:
Go for a more Manga Style BG, use Screentones to portray color/depth/shading
ACTUALLY DETAIL THE BACKGROUNDS YOU LAZY FUCK
Streamline the paneling a bit so its easier to read
Keep the Key Colors, but dont rely on grey fills so much
Again, any and all feedback is appreciated, thanks! (Hopefully the next one isn't too far off)
Comments
luzzy
oooo i love this so far, specially the paneling. It has an amazing flow to it that isnt confusing to read
Looks great so far!
