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Devlog 10/04/24 💻✨

🕑 Added 2024-10-04 13:00:15 +0000 UTC

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Ash

I would love to aid with grammar errors, ive noticed some mispellings in the earlier chapters and didn't know whether i should point it out or not. Regardless, your art and game is fantastic, I just joined your patreon to tell you that. If you need someone to review text for grammar reasons, let me know I'd be more than happy to help you! ^_^

Caliburn

No trouble at all, really, but okay!

Welcome to Heaven

That's really, really kind of you to offer, but I would feel so bad! You already do way too much to help with the project. Any more and it would weigh on my conscious! Thank you so much though T U T <3

Caliburn

Ma’am, I’d be happy to check for the little text errors before the release this time, if you’re so inclined. Just wanted to offer.

Welcome to Heaven

Oh wow, thank you so much for all your kind words & suggestions, and I hope I can answer some of your questions :D * I would say Theo does have some bottom dysphoria, but it's mild compared to his top dysphoria (before he had top surgery) and social dysphoria. If he had the main character's morphing powers, he would definitely change things down there, but he doesn't really want to get bottom surgery since he has hospital anxiety (he hates any kind of loss of control, and he already had to go under anesthesia for his top surgery) and doesn't dislike his current genitals that much. He is ok with someone he trusts touching him down there as long as he feels like he's in complete control of the situation. It's a little difficult for me to articulate exactly how he feels, though. * Also, don't worry, Theo and the main character end up together! The main plot-driver of the game is basically the main character trying to find an alternative way to get lust energy so that they can be with Theo again :3 Thank you for your excitement for this lil project & I'm really happy to hear about the positive influence my work has had on you! Have a wonderful day/night 🌻

Welcome to Heaven

Ah, yes, I think re-ordering the words makes it sound more elegant. Thank you very much! And thank you to everyone else who gave their advice as well :D

ChocolateSapphic

I am not sure of the grammar structure but all I have to say I am so hype in seeing Theo and MC again Question, does Theo have bottom Dysphoria? I'm not sure if I'm wrong in saying this but it's rare to see content of vulva and vulva sex scenes and it would be nice to see more since we seen frotting, anal, the beloved magic wand, and other forms of sexual activity. It would be nice exploring sex for folks with dysphoria and seeing more representation of characters that look like they are BIPOC/POC Literally Theo is one of the characters I love seeing represented and I really hope in the future that MC finds a way to find themselves back to a long term relationship with Theo or able to have a solution to the feeding maybe involving Theo able to have different abilities from the Scientist or other Succubus involvement in using their portions for assistance But yea just wanted to say can't wait to see future updates and I love seeing your content Heaven. Thank you for making this game, made reason I subscribed and able to feel more comfortable with my sexuality, gender and overall change my mindset that sexual activity can be slow, loving, or adventurous depending on who the partner(s) in question with consent.

liz

it’s “hadn’t already cum”

Mina Luna

I survived my first uni week and now a w2h devlog as reward. perfect timing :3

Patrick Walker

I'd go for reordering it to "If you hadn't cum already"

Fin Walling

My grammatical expertise thinks you should use camed, but that’s just me.


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