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Nanase Craft - 50 - HD
🕑 Added 2019-02-13 06:18:42 +0000 UTCWhile there's a lot I do like about this storyline, it's made me rethink how I handle my planning for such stories and how / when to include more gratuitous transformations in general.
Like, yes, we can have them, buuuuuuut I feel I need to adjust my writing so the stories that contain them are better, and in some cases leave that for the sketchbooks / milestones (speaking of which, we should have some new ones of those next week).
Commentary
I was looking forward to the balancing scale nonsense, but I've found there isn't much I can really do with it that doesn't take too long and isn't repetitive or isn't just gratuitous, SOOOO... Bit of a montage followed by getting on with the conclusion.
That said, there will be a logic to what this section of the dungeon was all about before this is through, and I do like that bit.
Comments
IvyReed
The LAST thing we'd want is for you Dan, or us the audience to get oversaturated with transformation fun-times and "ruin" them for ourselves.
IvyReed
panel one Sarah has really short fingers (and presumably toes) because the Nanase right next to her has longer than usual fingers and toes... right?
John Trauger
I can totally get behind wanting more story to NP comics. I'd just like to see the grade of gratuitosity stay constant. :)
Chronos Cat
Aww, but I like repetitive things (so long as the thing that is being repeated is a good thing).
Stephen Gilberg
Maybe Sarah looked as un-canine as possible. O_O
Kevin Wright
Pudgy Nanase with doggy ears is even cuter.
Daryl Sawyer
lol, this reminds me of one of the last parts of the first Goonmanji. Overall, this story is considerably more like the original Goonmanji story than the second Goonmanji story.
Scotty
Sarah probably looked like she did in panel one given Nanase's form in panel 2 should be the rebalanced result.
Scotty
my headcanon is that Nanase was given that form because she had to dig for the next button or doorway.
Jere
you say Gratuitous like its a bad thing
IvyReed
I am frightened of and unquenchably curious about what Sarah looks like by comparison.
Gen-Awesome
I do love uneven growth, especially big feet. Pity it's so rare.
coredumperror
lol, I have to wonder where the heck anthro-doggy form could have possibly come from, in terms of balancing. Not that I'm complaining. :)
Seadog Driftwood (Casey)
Nanase makes a cute pooch, but pudgy Sarah is just adorable!
