Sequence - Susan to Other Susan

chris

I don't mean this in a bad way at all, but in the 2nd stage she kinda looks like a crazy cat lady.

Taran1s

Love her expressions as she goes through the changes.

Sweet.

McClaw

What would be amusing (to me) is to have Susan do this sans hair growth and get very similar results. "Who knew?" And then, of course, we learn that Susan has been deliberately straightening her hair to keep it from getting wavy like it is in the second stage...

Ryan Flores

Those biceps.....

Connie Edogawa

you should absolutely make it canon. heck, I even know how you do it, provided the setup I'm describing can happen in canon. step 1: Susan and Diane have by this point been informed that they are, in fact siblings (this is where the plan falls apart, since you're the author and could easily have it turn out that, SURPRISE, they AREN'T related) step 2: Susan and Diane decide to try and get to know each other better. Susan mentions she's not super into fashion, and Diane won't let this stand. step 3: Diane drags Susan into a makeover and she comes out with that hair.

Kyman201

Wow, Stage B has such floofy hair! Do it! Maybe, I don't know, she gets dragged to a salon by Nanase and Ellen, and goes along with it because eh, might be fun.

Edward Haag

All the better to use the hammers. And look fabulous while doing it.

Edward Haag

After a closer examination, you're right. The dress is hiding just how much the hip is swung out. I still maintain she should have gained at least a little height. Those heels are pretty high.

Dan Shive

Speaking as the person who sketched it, including the building block shapes of her figure, she is absolutely in a pose that affects her height. She is cocking her hip quite a bit (compare how much her hip is sticking out on her right vs her left), and her torso isn't straight, either. Her pose is such that it accents curves in general.

Doomed

Yes. Do that. Awesome.

Edward Haag

No, she really isn't. She's got her hand resting on her hip, but it doesn't appear to be cocked at all, or if it is, it's so slight that it wouldn't be anywhere near enough to counteract the height increase from the heels. She just looks squished in the final frame.

coredumperror

She's cocking her hips sexily, compared to standing straight up.

J. Jenny Jameson

I... hadn't considered that. This... this changes everything...

Nabia Erickson

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J. Jenny Jameson

Sexy though the final form may be, I think I'll always prefer Susan Classic™

Edward Haag

I'm a bit confused by the shoes. She obviously went from being flat footed to wearing high heels, yet she doesn't seem to have gained any height.

Matt R

Plus, it would also help give Susan a bit more to differentiate herself from Diane.

McZed

Canon in high humidity, perhaps? It's a great sequence - a lot more nuanced than I thought it'd be!

OftenSane

Wow, I don't know if it's part of the transformation, but man, Susan's got guns under those turtle necks :D

Wildace88

I vote yes for the hair!

Matt R

If you want to make her hair in the second stage in the sequence canon, I'd say go for it, dude. It looks awesome!