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🕑 Added 2021-01-24 22:02:20 +0000 UTCWait...you didn't disinfect your hands!
My dear readers, a reminder - please help me correct any English spelling/semantic text mistakes if you see any. I'd be grateful :)
Comments
Toby
massive owo moment
Bre Indigo
Oh no he said I'd take better care of you and I started to cry????? He probably meant it in a horny way but all I was thinking of is Herz getting love from Lunge and Lunge being a lot less angsty because he got the attention he wanted from Herz.
Tee
Oh my gosh so cuuuute I'm so ready for the horny 👁️👄👁️
Milk Assassin
thanks! changed it! Sometimes I feel it myself that something's wrong but I can't tell what :) that's why I need readers like you.
Let's chill my dudes
Hello! English reader here! The only thing I would change is taking out the second “even” in the first panel dialogue. Having two is a little bit clunky. But otherwise it’s perfect! I’m so excited to see more of this bonus comic!
