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The Bimbo Beauty Salon Trap Complete PDF

🕑 Added 2025-08-28 08:52:44 +0000 UTC

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Yuki-chan1156

Thanks a lot for the feedback ^^ I adjusted some of the things you pointed out. As for point 9, I’ll leave it as it is since it would be a bit too much work to change. I’ll make sure to pay more attention to that in future books.

mrG4bka

I hope this helps in the future. This isn't a criticism. These are suggestions, which I also follow when writing anything (I'm not an editor, so there are no misunderstandings). In bullet points, to maintain order: 1. Center the main title and the titles of individual chapters. 2. Use "Tab" before the word that begins a new chapter to indent the text. 3. Justify the text, evenly from edge to edge. 4. Keep the text bold only for the main title and chapters title. 5. Use one type of font for the entire text. 6. Center images/graphics. 7. This is the fault of the tool used (I meant Word here), but graphics lose quality when the file is opened on a large screen device – I don't know how to prevent this. One solution might be to reduce the size of the images after inserting them; there won't be such a loss. 8. Leave one blank line of text both above and below the graphics; it adds clarity. 9. Consistent labeling for character dialogue: in the first chapter, start dialogue with dashes, then use quotation marks, and then return to dashes again at the end. 10. Start each subsequent chapter on a new page. 11. This also ties in with point 7. Reduce the amount of white space on pages by resizing graphics. This won't always be possible, but it's worth trying. That's probably all that matters. I hope it helps.