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Chapter 26- A Dangerous Proposition

🕑 Added 2021-09-01 23:08:26 +0000 UTC

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The Human

It also seems weird he'd ever risk trusting her when she demonstrated (iirc) charm affinity or something like that messing with him back in her intro. Especially for a reward he isn't sure he can even use yet. Maybe if he'd already learned some other skill, or she had something extra to offer, but he isn't even sure how he's going to learn the other healing skill yet fully, let alone a whole other discipline, right?

The Architect

Looking forward to it!

EmEs

And Mira will be a LOT more than a damsel in distress, though her character development will take place far in the future

EmEs

Yes, I guess your right. The chapter will be changed a little before it makes its way into Royalroad and his reasoning behind his decisions more fleshed out.

The Architect

Sooo.... He has no need for alchemy. At All. He already has 4 affinities and so much other potential. But then decides to randomly spill his secrets (To a very very VERY suspicious individual) because she "feels" honest? And so that he can make potions? He already has so much on his plate, and this random greed makes no sense from how you have represented this character so far. Even if you wanted this cooperation to happen, there should have been a lot more withholding, caution and tension involved. I have been waiting for the Patreon since this came out on RR, but I'm quite disappointed (especially because this character you had built up with so much mystery, hostility and danger just turns out to be a damsel in distress???). Sorry for the Rant.


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