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III-54 Capture (II)

🕑 Added 2025-08-11 11:23:05 +0000 UTC

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Steph

"He also unleashed he unleashed his Creeping Void and launched a decoy corpse to take the blow in his stead." -> you have an extra 'he unleashed' in this sentence

Name

Thank you! You really brightened my day :)

Kronos

“And then, like he hadn’t been trying to murder Shiv for the past few minutes, the orc vanished again.” minutes-> seconds? Minutes seems like way too long for this

Kronos

“The few thousand soldiers they had left were all further imbued with greater mass, with the anchoring power of Dynamancy.” Didn’t the Inquisition only have 2,000 soldiers to start with? “He deactivated his Chameleon and spiked himself right into the center of a magi column.” A couple of paragraphs earlier, Shiv decides to not activate Chameleon so as to not get hit by the Orcs

Ved

Great chapter, as always

Usernames_are_annoying

TFTC

James Faulkner

Damn this is a sick power-up for Adam! Also the pet dragon is great 😂 pretty soon Shiv will have a whole menagerie haha

Gaz

That was a very Angry Arrow

Nawks[The Butcher of Names,P.U.P]

About Adam's Propagating Arrow Skill, when he shoots an arrow does it propagate midair before the original arrow kills a target or after? Shiv is gonna end up with a beast master Skill soon.

ThatGuySeriously

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