Brent Stinebaker
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Scheduling Adjustments and Applying Feedback
🕑 Added 2025-08-26 15:18:59 +0000 UTCHello, this is just an update touching base about my currently running fictions.
Before that, thanks for reading and all the responses. I have been looking over some universal feedback (Issues people have noted in the story over and over again) and will probably make some improvements for book 4 of Deathless.
I am currently still in the office and the next chapter release for Deathless will be delayed, but the scheduling might shift to an earlier period to avoid further workplace complications (likely in the future).
On that note, the current points I will probably try to fix more is to remove some "fight bloat" for deathless. As has been reflected by readers, the climaxes of books 2 and 3 might have gone on too long. This is an issue that needs improvement. I intend to avoid this going on and keep things better paced.
Connected to that is how arcs and tension will be used. Book 4 will have the unofficial theme of "the problems a strong fist can't solve" going for it in the background, so there's that. But more than just the theme, I think I want to make certain arcs progress neater. So expect more single large chapters daily (around 10k or so words) rather than two 5ks like before.
Also, more varied types of tension. But I won't talk so much about that. You'll see in coming chapters.
Now, onto the other stories
Right now, due to very uneven workload spikes, it's been a bit hard to maintain the quality (at all) for both Clads and TTF. There are a few solutions here, and I've been thinking about focusing on Clads, finishing what remains of the story, and then finishing ttf right after. This should not impede Deathless output. I'll be interested in hearing thoughts on this as well.
For now, I'm going to be making some updates. Hopefully, I will have a chapter for everyone soon. Until then, thanks for reading. T
ime to apply some improvements.
Comments
LUXRUS
I need the chapter 😞 im getting the shakes
Dar-Angol
Yes I as well am excited to see shiv come up with something besides "Hulk smash"🤣😂 even tho we love shiv the way he is!!
Dar-Angol
Ive been w you from pretty much the start,Godclads needs justice done to the end of it,Avo"s the old G,however you've really knocked it outa the park w deathless and on a roll,maybe delve into some side shit like some the history on how Valors son created Shiv,oh and I just remembered the last chapter prologue you have Uldrall mentioning he tampered with the fetus of Shiv And Adam,does that mean Adams gonna have some super power too!!???
