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III-63 Unexpected

🕑 Added 2025-08-16 18:21:39 +0000 UTC

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Jack Smith

Gotta say I find it a little odd that someone whos a city lord doesnt have the social skills to tell shiv is lying. Especially when ol shiv dont even got a initiate desetion skill to his name…

Sawyer Anderson

Also, should probably replace 'death' with 'hit' here: That death was considerably harder. It took a step back and shook off the slight concussion Stormhalt

Sawyer Anderson

You might want to consider changing the line "I'm bargaining for my life," Shiv said gaudily To have him bargaining for something else, because he almost immediately afterwards demonstrates that his life was most definitely not at risk from them, which if they aren't idiots should make them doubt the rest of his story.

Usernames_are_annoying

TFTC

James Faulkner

This is perfect lol, cuz now Hargrave will believe shiv’s lie

LUXRUS

I appreciate OM’s mastery of “the endlessly accreting shitstorm” plot structure

Dar-Angol

Yes the smashup we've been building too,and what's up w the forgotten accendents,and the phylacteries of power Roland has,and why did he kill that chic's daughter!?? "So tune in next time,for more build up to the exciting showdown coming to a legendary city near you!!!"

True_Jolly_Roger

battery? Sounds like real shitty deal.

Shiva Kumar

Orcs , Necrotechs, and the inquisitors. Two legends, 4 uniques. One city.


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