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Makoto Nanaya - April's Reward

🕑 Added 2016-04-24 02:53:30 +0000 UTC
Makoto Nanaya - April's Reward

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SenpaiXXX

she is toooooooooooo awesome o.o

Grew89

I'm not a artist at all, I can only say what I like and what I find wrong. Aka since the other didn't mention this, you can also very asume that you did your job well and I just see it wrong since my brain can't handle that butt. Meanwhile I want to show how I think the crotch should look like from a different artist: <a href="http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=56497664" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=56497664</a> (since my main language is German and not English, I hope I can say it in na way you understand). The area where her crotch is, is a bit too large in size. Makes that the vagina is very big and missfit her butthole. Like make this part smaller, to make it normal again. Also about her right leg. For me her butt looks a bit too large like ( | from the side view. Her leg should have start a bit earlier and cover a bit of her female part. I think you just want to show every thing. Just my two sentence. Maybe we can talk this in a different place if you want - or just don't bother what I say haha

Fuya

I'm definitely not the best artist for this view's anatomy and it's also my first attempt to draw an ass from this perspective so I have done something totally wrong myself. Could be how I draw, could be how I paint. But I've read through your suggestion and didn't seem to understand what you meant and see what's wrong and broken though ^^" May be I made it too vagina-asshole focused that her crotch went too far into the back? But I didn't get the too high up as like her butthole and right leg starting in the a wrong place part. Did you mean the right leg should cover the crotch in this angle?

Grew89

I don't know if I'm the only one here, but I kinda feel that her hip is broken in that picture. Like her crotch is too high up as like her butthole. Also that her right leg start in a wrong place. , like it kinda should cover up from her crotch? Maybe my eyes/mind interpret is wrong but for me its broken at is. Maybe you can say how you see it?

SteelRaven

Assome :)

JF

> And personally I'm not a great fan of anal Mystery solved, that's why the extra hole always idle lol


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