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DD1 ASC - Chapter 34 - Absence

🕑 Added 2021-07-30 10:12:33 +0000 UTC

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ShadeByTheSea

I also dislike cliffhangers in serial released stories because all they do is punish readers who are up to date. I do understand that sometimes they're unavoidable though.

ShadeByTheSea

I can't say much on pace for the last two chapters as kidnaped MCs or characters close to them is one of my least favorite plotlines and imo overused. I only know about it because comments, and won't read again till it's resolved.(I'll still read the chapters, but not until I can read the whole arc at once.) Though I do admit I expected both of them to be over level 20 by this point.

Relai

I think pacing and quality is fine, my personal gripe and this comes with the difficulty of writing a web novel that updates weekly. I think there shouldn't be cliffhangers in important moments of the story if possible. Personally, I would prefer if a chapter was delayed and longer than there being a cliffhanger.

Vyktor

No problems with the pacing or the direction you give to the story, keep the good work! 😋 Thanks for the chapter!

DaShoe

Thank you for the chapter it was a great fight

I find the pacing to be fine personally, the waiting is the painful part which I think is in itself a testament to the quality of the story. And while I wouldn’t complain about MOAR I definitely prefer less updates of higher quality than otherwise.

Cryostorm

Yeah, seems perfectly fine with me when compared to most books I read or other stories I read weekly.

Lictor Magnus

I think the pacing is fine. It just feels slow because it is a web serial and we have to wait days for the next chapter to come out. If the book was finished and it was being read all in one go everything moves along at a nice clip.

Denis

Came here to say the same thing. I am seriously considering unsubscribing due to the pacing. It was great at the start but ever since Arilla became a focus things have been glacial. Entire chapters in a row dedicated to grinding and introspection. Last chapter more boring grinding/introspection, ends on a cliffhanger, entire start of this chapter about a freaking wagon getting stuck in mud ends on nothing resolved. I don't know if this is being dragged out on purpose but I am becoming seriously annoyed at what feels like wordcount padding. You write well but I want actual progression.

Pokox

Uhh honestly this is a bit drawn out at this point and this chapter is very short


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