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DD1 ASC - Chapter 26 - Run

🕑 Added 2021-07-04 16:01:11 +0000 UTC

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More on Tuesday!

Yeah this chapter has had a lot of edits, and some things may have slipped through. Writing chase scenes is hard and the whole thing was originally viewed through Typhoeus's increasing frustrated perspective.

Glad to hear your enjoying it! Fortunately you don't have long to wait.

Honestly I feel like grammar is my big weakness as a writer, 2 of my editing passes are just for grammar and I still miss so much.

Lictor Magnus

Thanks for the chapter. I’m glad Arilla will finally get some of the truth. Was this an early release for Tuesday or will we still get the regular chapter then?

Rainplosion

I felt like the verb tense got switched up a little in this chapter - despite most of the story being written in past tense, there were a few odd phrases in progressive tense (i.e. "The mages level ticking up before her eyes as she quickly levelled to 6" and "Each swing of her sword resulting in a kill or a maiming") All that said, I love that some of Typh's power is finally shown to Arilla, and I do hope that she comes clean to her sooner rather than later :D

Other than the good amount of missing/extra apostrophees and the misuse of periods in place of commas denoting the end of dialogue, your grammar is very good. I tend to cringe a little when I see misused apostrophees, so I just wanted to say thank you for not misusing its and it's or there, they're and their. Happy 4th of July to you!

RottenTangerine

I'm kind of hoping this leads to more of a discussion on what Typh really is. If not who exactly she is, at least thst she wasn't born human. Good chapter as a whole! This story is fun to read


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