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Shadows in the Smoke - Chapter 42 - Special Ammunition

🕑 Added 2026-01-20 11:00:30 +0000 UTC
Shadows in the Smoke - Chapter 42 - Special Ammunition

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TF Warden

Thanks!

Antony Claughton

A crack tore through the air, loud enough it almost felt like a physical blow, followed a fraction of a second later by a second. ==> try not to use ‘second’ twice so quickly? For a brief moment, it seemed like two bright lines, curving downwards slightly as they went, joined the fort with the undead army. ==> For a brief moment it seemed like two bright lines, curving downwards slightly as they went, joined the fort with the undead army. Maybe use: For a brief moment two bright lines, curving downwards slightly as they went, joined the fort with the undead army. Not as much of the wards, but she couldn’t have dented it, even at point blank range. ==> Not as powerful as the wards, but she couldn’t have dented it even at point blank range.

TF Warden

If only she appreciated the opportunity a bit more!

TF Warden

While she hasn't had proper combat training (Master Tabasi sort of tried though), she probably counts as a veteran by now given she's had to fight so many times and she does spend a lot of time thinking about how to do stuff.

TF Warden

Not even Sigrid Lindholm can stop a whole army. To be fair, Ester could do a hell of a lot of damage to an army that had no magical defences. She's a bit restricted in her destructive capability by the witches on the other side.

Marcus Martin

I like how this puts Ester’s power in perspective. She is really strong, but one Ester cannot stop an army.

Lecture Filler

Ester doing things like this without any combat training is crazy. Either Republic mages are just really powerful, or she is just that smart . Probably both

Patrick

Nice to see Ester finally being able to let loose.


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