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CHAPTER 18 - A Delightful Nightmare

🕑 Added 2023-02-16 22:24:09 +0000 UTC

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Jeanean

Because I'm pretty sure my description also wasn't very clear, what I mean is this: Lets assume Blake started out with 10 Charisma, and then "gained" -20, putting her at -10 Charisma total. The way the Skill describes it, it isn't clear whether A: The Skill inverts her current Charisma, turning -10 into +10 Or B: The Skill turns the negative numbers into positive ones, turning 10-20=-10 into 10+20=30 Also, as I said, Its unclear whether its permanent or not (which it could very well be in case A) and if not, how long it lasts: Also, an explanation on what exactly "Charisma" does would be nice. (Though I guess Ava should already know about that. Because, as I said before, a "you are pretty now" Stat is pretty useless for a shapeshifter. Also, actual Charisma based "social-Skills" would be nice. They appear far too rarely in stories. Though, thats probably because they are pretty hard to balance...)

Jeanean

Just saying, but this Skill is very unclear in its description. You can either read it as "The Charisma value gets inverted" Or as "All received negative Charisma becomes positive" Its also very unclear whether this is permanent or temporary, because that would change the way to use the Skill significantly. Its mostly this part that makes it unlcear: "Any negative Charisma earned will be applied to the total Charisma without sustaining a loss to the overall total."

Jeanean

Respect, this must have been an absolute pain in the ass to write...

Hereafter

While writing this one, Grammarly could have been happier with me, so I mostly ignored it... Okay, I entirely ignored it!


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